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Post by Caesar » 15 Feb 2026, 22:32

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Tommy stood outside the FDC tent, a few paces off the entrance flap, close enough to hear the net but not so close that he crowded his fire direction officer. The canvas wall moved in small pulses with the wind. Each time it shifted, voices inside leaked out in scraps.

“Observer Six, this is Steel, adjust fire, over.”

A second voice answered through the speaker with a hiss of static. “Steel, this is Observer Six, adjust fire, polar, over.”

“Send, over.”

The range replied before the next words landed. A deep boom rolled across the red clay and hit him in the sternum. It wasn’t a crack. It was a shove. The tent shivered. Dust lifted off the ground in a thin sheet and settled back onto his boots.

Down the line, about two hundred meters, the gun crews moved around the 155s in loops. A round came out of its container. Hands guided it, shoulders set. A rammer drove it home. Someone called a number. Someone else repeated it back. Metal rang once, then went quiet under the next correction.

Inside the tent, the net kept running.

“Direction two-eight-six-zero.”

Tommy shifted his stance, boots grinding dust, one hand over his brow to block out the glare from the sun bearing down on the range.

“Deflection, one-eight-three-zero.”

Paper rustled over a lower voice.

“Quadrant, three-six-seven.”

“Charge five.”

A pause, then: “Shot, over.”

Another voice answered, faint through the canvas. “Shot, out.”

The air tasted like burnt powder and diesel. It sat in his nose and on his tongue. Red clay dust mixed with it, fine enough that it found the damp line at the edge of his collar and stuck there. Sweat gathered under his sleeves and in the small of his back, trapped by gear and heat.

“Splash, over,” the radio said.

“Splash, out.”

Five seconds later, another boom rolled in from the howitzers. The shockwave came after it, slower, pushing through the heat. A spotter’s correction followed, clipped and certain.

“Add five-zero. Left two-zero. Over.”

Inside, someone repeated it in the same cadence. “Add five-zero. Left two-zero.”

Tommy’s jaw worked once as he listened, eyes tracking the gun line. The guns sat low and heavy, barrels angled up. A truck idled beyond them, diesel thumping steady. A crew chief’s arm lifted, chopped down. A loader stepped back. A lanyard got handled. The next cycle started.

He glanced at his watch.

Ten minutes until the next mission came down from battalion.

He rolled his wrist once, then let his arm fall. He reached into his pocket and pulled out his phone, thumb already on the screen.

Claire’s last text sat there, bright against the washed-out display.

He shook his head once, small, and slid the phone back into his pocket. The fabric caught on the corner for a second, then gave, and the phone disappeared again.

From inside the tent, a voice broke in, more urgent. “Battalion’s pushing, stand by.”

Another voice answered immediately. “Copy, stand by.”

Tommy turned away from the flap and started down the gun line.

The ground under him was packed and rutted from tires. Each step kicked up dust that followed his calves. The sun hit steel on the howitzers hard enough that the edges flashed white. He walked the side of the line, not stepping into anyone’s lane, eyes moving over hands, faces, gear. He watched for the small tells. A glove pulled off and flexed fingers. A man wiped his lip with the back of his wrist.

“Traverse,” someone called.

“Hold.”

“Check it.”

Tommy adjusted his path, staying out of the crew’s rhythm. A correction came over a handheld near the breech, thin and distorted. “Drop two-five, over.”

“Drop two-five,” a man repeated, louder, making the words solid.

Tommy stopped near a stack of ammo crates and set his fingertips on the top one. Grit dragged under his skin. Another boom rolled across the range. Dust lifted again. He blinked against it and kept going.



Tommy dropped onto an overturned crate, knees wide, his MRE braced on his thigh. The wood creaked under his weight. He tore the pouch open and leaned over it, keeping the food close so it didn’t spill into the dust.

Ricks sat across from him, elbows on his knees, an energy drink sweating in his hand. Kelly was to Tommy’s right, pouch open, working the heater packet with calm fingers. Charles leaned back against another crate, boots stretched out, chewing slow, eyes half-lidded.

A boom rolled in from the line, distant but still heavy. The crates vibrated, then settled. Someone farther off laughed once and got swallowed by the range again.

Ricks ripped a packet open with his teeth and spit the corner to the side. He took a sip from the can and said, “Y’all heard?”

Charles tilted his head, eyebrows lifting. He shifted his boot and the crate scraped once under him. “Heard what?”

Tommy stabbed at his tray with the spork. The plastic flexed, then snapped back. He swallowed a mouthful that tasted mostly of salt and heat, then gestured at Kelly with the spork. “Alex is getting married.”

Charles turned his head toward Kelly and let out a laugh, quick and sharp. “No, shit? I thought you ain’t trust her like that.”

Kelly shrugged, shoulders rising and falling like it didn’t cost him anything. He shook his pouch once, mixing it, then said, “Can’t be scared all your life or some shit my pops told me.”

Ricks took a longer swig, wiped his mouth with the back of his hand, and leaned forward with a grin. “Just gotta do like Matthews and put three or four kids in her. She ain’t going nowhere then, right, T?”

Tommy shook his head as the others laughed. He kept his eyes on his food and kept the spork moving, steady.

He swallowed, then lifted his eyes over the top of the pouch and said, “Really just gotta make sure that she doesn’t spend too much time around the brothers.”

He flicked the spork toward Ricks, then toward Charles, the gesture small but pointed.

Charles spread his hands, palms out, laughing again. “I ain’t know you were MAGA, T.”

Tommy snorted a laugh, short, and leaned forward a fraction. His forearms rested on his thighs. The spork stayed in his hand. “When it comes to my wife, I’m Nathan Bedford Forrest, motherfucker.”

The group laughed again as they continued eating.

~~~
Caine stood, pulling on a pair of basketball shorts. The room still held that warm, used heat from two bodies and a window unit that never caught up. A fan somewhere in the suite clicked on its wobble. Outside the thin glass, campus noise drifted in soft and regular, shoes on concrete, a door down the hall shutting too hard, somebody laughing and then moving away.

He found his slides and shoved his feet into them one at a time. His shirt was on the floor by the desk chair, half under a notebook and a tangled charger. He bent, picked it up, shook it once, and the cotton fell back into shape.

Lizzie lay on her back with the sheet pulled up to her waist. Her hair was a mess on the pillow. She just watched him get dressed, eyes following his hands and the slow, practiced way he moved through it.

“Am I gonna see you again?” she asked.

Caine’s mouth lifted as he brought the shirt up and pulled it over his head. The collar caught on his ears for a second before it dropped into place. “Yeah, love. Of course. We go to the same school.”

Lizzie rolled her eyes and shifted onto her side, elbow digging into the mattress as she propped herself up. “You know what I mean.”

Caine crossed the small space between the bed and the door. His phone sat face down on the dresser beside a bottle of lotion and a little stack of hair ties. He leaned down over the bed, one hand braced on the mattress near her hip. He kissed her once, and when he pulled back he kept his voice low. “Tomorrow.”

She smiled and nodded once, small. Caine straightened, grabbed his keys from the desk, and slid them into his pocket.

He stepped into the hallway and let the door ease shut behind him. The dorm air hit different out there, cooler and stale, the kind of cold that came from overworked AC and too many bodies living on the same floor. Somewhere down the hall, a shower ran, water hissing against tile. A TV played through a wall, bass low and steady, a laugh track muffled into noise.

Caine walked with his shoulders loose, pace easy. He moved toward the elevator as a couple girls came out of the stairwell, arms full of laundry and plastic hangers.

The elevator took its time coming up and even longer going down. When he reached the lobby, he could smell the cheap cleaner that he’d grown to hate in the dorms. It reminded him of jail.

He pushed through the doors, heat met him right away, thick and flat. The campus around him moved with its own rhythm, students cutting across grass, the sound of sneakers scuffing along the sidewalk. A maintenance cart rolled by with a slow beep.

A car slowed behind him. Tires whispered over pavement. The sound came close for a few seconds, matching his pace, then a window motor whined and glass dropped.

“Hey!” a man called.

Caine turned his head and saw Derrick McCray’s silver Lexus riding the curb lane beside him, moving slow. McCray leaned over the center console with one arm draped casually on the door, face amused.

“I thought you got yourself a new car,” McCray said, eyebrows lifting. “Why are you walking, kid?”

Caine kept his stride even, eyes on McCray, then flicked a look ahead to make sure he wasn’t about to step into somebody’s path. “Ain’t no reason to burn gas to drive down the road.”

McCray laughed, the sound easy, and the Lexus crept along like it was built for this exact kind of conversation. “Frugal,” he said. He nodded toward the direction Caine was headed. “Where are you headed? Lifting today?”

Caine tipped his chin once. “Yeah, that time of year again.”

McCray made a little circle with his hand, a gesture toward the passenger door. “Hop in. I’ll take you.”

Caine shrugged, stepped off the sidewalk to the curb, and walked around the front of the Lexus. The hood reflected the sun in a hard sheet. He pulled the passenger handle, slid in, and shut the door with a solid thunk.

The inside smelled like leather and something clean that wasn’t a spray. The air was cool enough to raise goosebumps on his arms for a second. McCray eased back onto the road and let the car pick up a little speed.

McCray glanced over at him, one hand on the wheel, the other resting near the console. “How’s that money been treating you?”

Caine leaned back in the seat, knee angled out. He looked out through the windshield at the stretch of campus ahead, then back to McCray. “More money than I know what to do with.”

McCray laughed again, shaking his head. “I think a lot of people don’t realize how low the money to get there really is,” he said. The car rolled past a crosswalk, past a cluster of students waiting for the light. “Quarter of a million bucks? When everything’s paid for? Almost fuck you money.”

Caine shook his head slowly, lips pressing together for a beat before he let them part. “It’s a fuck ton of zeros from that.”

McCray’s eyes stayed on the road, but his smile twitched. The Lexus turned into a quieter drive, trees throwing broken shade across the dashboard. “You start thinking about what’s next?” he asked. “After this season?”

Caine rolled one shoulder, the movement small. His gaze dropped to his hands, then lifted back up. “With the way I came up, I’m always thinking about what’s next.”

McCray nodded. His fingers tapped once on the wheel, then stilled. “You need an agent, kid,” he said. “That’s step one. I got a frat bro, in the same space, sports dev. He’s out in Los Angeles. I can put you in touch.”

Caine turned his head toward the window, watching the campus slide by in pieces, brick, banners, a kid on a bike swerving around a pothole. He looked back at McCray, mouth pulling into a grin. “How you end up in fucking South Georgia if you got connections in LA?”

McCray laughed loud, shoulders lifting with it, then settling back down. “My wife’s a country girl and she wanted to live in the country. And if there’s any advice you take from me, kid, it’s don’t piss off the wife.”

The Lexus slowed as they came up on the athletics facility. McCray signaled and swung into a spot out front, nosing in clean between the lines.

The engine cut and the sudden quiet made the outside noise feel louder through the glass. Caine reached for the door handle, then paused, turning back to McCray. “Yeah,” he said. “Give your guy my info.”

McCray nodded. He grabbed his phone off the console and held it up between them in a quick, confirming flash. “I got you.”

Caine stepped out into the heat. McCray got out too, both of them closing their doors almost at the same time.

~~~
The heat sat in Trent’s backyard and stayed there. The grass thinned out toward the fence where the dirt showed through in dry patches. A cheap plastic lawn chair held Saul’s weight with a steady creak every time he shifted. Sweat gathered at the edge of his hairline and ran down the side of his face, leaving a damp track along his jaw.

Trent worked the ball on a worn patch of concrete, bouncing it low so it snapped back up into his hand. The rhythm stayed steady. Thud. Thud. Thud. The sound cut through the yard noise and came back with a faint echo off the back wall of the house. Javi sat on a stack of bricks near the corner, elbows on his knees, fingers laced, watching the ball more than Trent. The bricks pressed into the backs of his thighs. He adjusted once and settled again.

Saul leaned back until the chair flexed, his forearms resting on the arms, fingers tapping out a small impatient beat. He watched the ball hit the concrete again and again and felt his own annoyance rise with it.

“No matter how you try to put it, the NBA is fucking terrible to watch,” he said. “That’s why nobody go to Pelicans games.”

Trent let the ball bounce two more times, then caught it at his hip, palm spread across the rubber. He tilted his head, mouth tight. “People don’t go to them games because Zion ain’t never playing. That’s a whole different problem.”

Saul sat forward, chair legs scraping dirt. “That ain’t only a Pelicans thing, though.”

Javi’s mouth pulled into a grin. He rocked on the bricks once, the stack giving a soft click under his weight.

“They could get around that if they just put them pornstars he be fucking in the front row,” he said. He lifted his hands and made a row in the air, lining invisible women up. “Line them all up so the camera sees they fine asses.”

Trent’s face twisted. He rolled the ball in his hands, rubber squeaking under his palms. He sucked his teeth, long and loud, and cut his eyes at Javi. “All those women are like 50 years old.”

Javi shrugged, shoulders loose, palms up. “Older the berry, sweeter the juice.”

Saul let out a short sound and shook his head, the chair creaking with the motion. “That ain’t the saying.”

Footsteps scraped along the side of the house.

Kayjuan came around the corner first, Maine right behind him. Kayjuan walked with his shoulders open, chin up, arms swinging easy. Maine moved in his shadow with a heavier step and a flatter face, eyes forward, hands at his sides.

Saul’s stomach tightened. He stayed seated, spine straighter, hands gripping the chair arms.

Kayjuan smiled wide and opened his arms. “What’s good, lil’ nigga?” he said. “You move a few pounds and you out the game already?”

Saul’s jaw worked once. He gave Kayjuan a small shake of his head. “Nah, I just ain’t need any more money right now.”

Kayjuan’s smile held, but the air around it changed. He stepped closer, enough that Saul caught the clean bite of cologne cutting through sweat and dirt.

“That’s not how this work, motherfucker,” Kayjuan said. His tone stayed casual, almost bored. “You confusing this for when your ass be up on them roofs or something. This more like working at Target. You got a schedule.”

Saul’s eyes slid to Trent and Javi. Trent stood planted, both hands on the ball, elbows tight to his sides. Javi sat still on the bricks, shoulders tense, gaze fixed on Kayjuan’s chest instead of his face.

Trent tipped his chin toward the front yard. The gesture came quick and sharp. He kept his mouth closed.

Kayjuan waved a hand in the air. “Y’all wasting a nigga time,” he said. “I got twice as much in the truck for you to get off. But I ain’t gonna fuck you over and set you up to fail or nothing like that. You got two, three weeks this time.”

Saul’s fingers dug into the chair arms. He pulled a breath in through his nose and pushed it out slow. “Nah, I’m good.”

Maine’s head tilted a fraction. His voice came out low and steady. “Ain’t no ‘I’m good,’ no more, nigga.”

Saul’s mouth opened. His tongue hit the back of his teeth as he reached for the first word.

Kayjuan talked right over it, leaning in just enough to take up space. “If you want out, just give me my money back from the last run.”

Kayjuan turned his head toward Maine, eyebrows lifting. “How much was it? Like $2,500?”

Maine nodded. “Something like that.”

Saul’s face tightened. He sat up straighter, the chair legs grinding dirt again. “That’s how much the whole thing was,” he said. “Not how much you gave me.”

Kayjuan lifted both hands, palms out, a show of patience. “That’s the only number I know,” he said. “So, just give me back my $3,000 and we’ll call it square.”

Maine nodded with him, faster. “Square deal, nigga.”

Saul let out a long sigh that came out rough. He rubbed his thumb along the chair arm, grit catching under his nail. He looked from Kayjuan to Maine, then back again, trying to find where the conversation could turn. “How am I supposed to move twice as much?”

Kayjuan pointed with two fingers, straight across the yard. The gesture landed on Javi, then Trent, tagging them both. “You got two soldiers right there, player.”

Javi’s eyes widened for a beat. He swallowed and shifted on the bricks, the stack clicking again under him. Trent’s grip tightened on the ball until his knuckles stood out pale against his skin.

Kayjuan turned away from Saul and Maine followed, steps matching. They headed toward the front of the house with the same unbothered pace, carrying the assumption that Saul would get up and fall in behind them.

Saul stayed in the chair for a second, watching their backs disappear around the corner. The heat pressed harder in the pause.

He pushed up out of the chair, the plastic complaining loud, and stood there in the dirt. His gaze moved to Javi first. Javi stared back with his mouth tight, hands braced on his thighs.

Saul looked to Trent. Trent’s head shook once, short and hard. His voice came out flat, tired, and final.

“Now, you got us all in the shit.”
~~~
Mireya pulled a hoodie on, arms sliding through the sleeves fast. The fabric settled across her shoulders. She shook her hair free at the collar and pushed the hood back, so it sat flat between her shoulder blades.

In the living room, a handful of older white men stood in a loose cluster with drinks in their hands. They laughed too loud, then talked over one another, then laughed again. Ice clicked in glasses.

Bianca sat on the counter with her back near the sink, phone in her hand, thumb moving. Her heels dangled off her wrist by their straps, replaced by a pair of slides. Her feet swung slow, toes flexing once, then relaxing. Her eyes stayed on the screen until the sound in the living room shifted in pitch, then her gaze lifted.

From down the hall, Jaslene’s voice carried in, soft and familiar. “¿Tienes todas tu mierda, mi amor?”

Mireya reached for a plastic bag on the counter. The thin plastic crackled loud when her fingers closed around it. Two tight rolls of money sat heavy at the bottom, stuffed down and cinched with rubber bands. She held the bag up at chest height. “Si, es aqui.”

Jaslene stepped into the kitchen and closed the last bit of space. Her arm wrapped around Mireya’s waist, hand settling at her hip. She leaned down close, cheek nearly brushing Mireya’s temple, voice aimed only for her. “I missed you last week, you know.”

Mireya snorted a laugh and tipped her head back enough to meet Jaslene’s eyes. “You mean because you had to have Diego keeping you company every night?”

Jaslene’s smile came quick. Her fingers tightened at Mireya’s waist, a small squeeze. “I like Diego, but when I wake up next to you, I know I don’t have to get the cologne smell out of my sheets.”

Mireya rolled her eyes. “Could be worse. Podría haber un gringo que no sepa cómo lavarse el trasero.”

Jaslene laughed, shoulders lifting with it. “No, no quiero gringos. Solo gente de color. Los gringos se olvidan de que nos colonizaron.”

A sound cut through the house from the side, footsteps coming fast around the corner. The living room laughter dropped out.

Alejandra stormed in dragging Sydney by the wrist, Sydney’s arm pulled straight, her body forced to keep pace. Sydney’s shoes scraped the floor as she stumbled, head down, hair falling forward. Alejandra’s grip stayed hard, knuckles pale, mouth already set.

Alejandra marched straight up to the men, finger up, eyes sharp. “Which one of you shorted her?”

One of the men lifted both hands, palms out, drink wobbling in his grip. He smiled anyway, lips wet from whatever he’d been drinking. “I spent all my time with Roulette. I only like the dark meat.”

The other men laughed, shoulders bouncing, cups sloshing. Bianca snorted a laugh.

Alejandra’s mouth pressed into a line. She took another step forward, chin lifted. “One of you motherfuckers owe her some money and you’re going to fucking give it to her.”

A second man waved his hand dismissively, wrist loose. “Get out of here before we call the cops on you.”

Alejandra snapped back, voice loud enough to fill the house. “Call the cops on some strippers you hired? We’ll be in there together, cabron.”

Sydney grabbed Alejandra’s arm with both hands, fingers digging in, tugging. “It’s okay. Really.”

Alejandra jerked her arm once, resetting her balance, eyes still on the men. “It’s not okay, because they short you then they think they can short all of us.”

The second man leaned forward a fraction, eyes flicking down Sydney’s body and back up to her face. He pointed toward the door with his cup. “Just run along now, girl. You’re no longer needed.”

Mireya stepped away from Jaslene. Her hand went into the front pocket of her hoodie. Bianca’s gaze snapped to Mireya. Jaslene’s eyes followed the movement at the same time. Bianca looked at Jaslene. Jaslene looked back. Both of them shook their heads and moved after Mireya.

Mireya walked into the living room, pace steady, shoulders loose. The men’s cluster tightened on instinct, then loosened as they edged back.

Mireya lifted the hand that wasn’t in her pocket and pointed at a man at the back of the group. “It was him. He was with her.”

The man held a hand up, palm out. His face shone with sweat and drink. “She wanted the coke. I’m not going to give her favors and money. Cocaine costs money.”

Alejandra looked back at Sydney. Sydney shrank back, shoulders curling in, eyes dropping to the floor.

Alejandra turned forward again, hands spreading as her voice rose. “No, it’s the principles of—”

A sharp metallic snap cut her off.

The switchblade sprang open.

Mireya stepped toward the men with the blade in her hand, metal catching the room light. “Give her her fucking money or I’m gonna start giving y’all more holes.”

The men stepped back as one. Shoes scraped on the floor. A knee bumped the coffee table and the bottle rattled.

The first man’s head whipped toward the one Mireya had pointed out. “I’m not trying to get stabbed by a fucking Mexican hooker tonight, John.”

John shook his head hard, throat working. He reached into his pocket with quick fingers, fumbling for folded bills. He pulled them out and held them at arm’s length, hand stiff.

Alejandra snatched the money out of his hand and turned. She shoved the bills into Sydney’s palm. Sydney’s fingers closed around it, knuckles tight, paper bending under her grip.

Alejandra looked at Mireya, eyes still hot, and spoke fast. “Vámonos antes de que llamen a la policía.”

The five women moved together toward the door. Alejandra kept one hand at Sydney’s back, steering her without slowing down.

Mireya stopped at the kitchen counter on the way out to grab her bag of money, The switchblade stayed open in her other hand, held low as she turned.

They walked down the block toward Bianca’s car parked off to the side. The AirBnB windows glowed behind them, bright squares against dark.

Mireya kept the knife in her hand until the house sat farther back. Her thumb pressed the blade. The metal folded into the handle with a dull click. She slipped it back into her hoodie pocket as they moved, the weight settling against her palm through the fabric for a second before she let it go.

Sydney drifted closer, breath catching at the top of her throat. She lifted her head toward Mireya, mouth opening as she reached for words. “Thanks for helping m—”

Mireya reached into her pocket and pulled the bills Alejandra had given Sydney right back out. She held them up in front of Sydney’s face, paper fluttering. “Tax for being a fucking junkie.”

Sydney froze, hands hovering near her stomach. Her eyes locked on the money. Her mouth stayed half open, then closed.

Mireya stepped past her and settled between Bianca and Jaslene. Jaslene’s arm slid around Mireya, light pressure at her waist as they kept walking.

Bianca turned her head, eyebrows high, grin wide. “Girl, I ain’t know you turned into a hood bitch overnight.”

Jaslene kept her chin lifted, eyes on Mireya, smile set. “She’s always been one.”

Mireya rolled her eyes as they kept walking.
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Post by Captain Canada » 15 Feb 2026, 23:11

They'll never make me love you, Mireya. No matter how real you gotta be to threaten to stab the clientele :drose:
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Post by redsox907 » 16 Feb 2026, 00:52

Captain Canada wrote:
15 Feb 2026, 23:11
No matter how real you gotta be to threaten to stab the clientele
is it real, or un-hinged lmao what if one of the dudes pulled a strap. To be fair, they sound like some middle aged finance bros, but still. Trell ain't always gonna be there to save her

just shows how much of a real criminale she is now

Caine still trying to bury his feelings in strange

Javi wanted to be a banger, well shit nows your chance. Saul gonna end up calling Caine to save his ass :smh:
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Post by Caesar » 17 Feb 2026, 05:52

Captain Canada wrote:
15 Feb 2026, 23:11
They'll never make me love you, Mireya. No matter how real you gotta be to threaten to stab the clientele :drose:
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redsox907 wrote:
16 Feb 2026, 00:52
Captain Canada wrote:
15 Feb 2026, 23:11
No matter how real you gotta be to threaten to stab the clientele
is it real, or un-hinged lmao what if one of the dudes pulled a strap. To be fair, they sound like some middle aged finance bros, but still. Trell ain't always gonna be there to save her

just shows how much of a real criminale she is now

Caine still trying to bury his feelings in strange

Javi wanted to be a banger, well shit nows your chance. Saul gonna end up calling Caine to save his ass :smh:
1) would it being unhinged make it not real? 2) you ain't been paying attention. Mostly the kind of dudes who pay for those private parties are finance types. It ain't cheap to pay for 4-6 strippers to come to you, sir. So, the only kind of people who would pull a strap on her are those who would likely be connected to Trell. :smart:

Somos criminales.

Caine is just taking advantage of his singleness.

Caine can't help Saul from Georgia, though. :hmm:
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Post by Caesar » 17 Feb 2026, 05:52

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The UHaul sat crooked at the curb, rear door rolled up, its gut still mostly empty. A ceiling fan wrapped in a moving blanket. A couple of garbage bags stuffed fat with clothes. A box of kitchen stuff wedged against the wall.

Ramon came up the block slow, coasted the last stretch, and parked behind it. He sat with both hands on the wheel, watching through the windshield.

E.J. came out of the stairwell with a box braced against his chest, weight shifted low, chin over the top of it. Behind him, Tessa had another box balanced in both arms, hair stuck to her neck in the heat. She went ahead of him into the breezeway and set hers down to adjust her grip before picking it back up.

Ramon killed the engine and got out.

He stood beside the UHaul with his arms loose at his sides, watching E.J. cross the walk and hoist the box up into the truck. E.J. set it down, turned it once to fit it flat against the fan unit, and straightened. He hadn't looked at Ramon yet, but he knew he was there. The set of his shoulders said so.

Tessa stepped into the breezeway with another box and stopped when she saw Ramon. Just stopped. Her eyes found his face and stayed there, something in them that wasn't quite fear and wasn't quite contempt.

E.J. stepped down out of the UHaul.

“Don’t even fucking say what you about to say, bruh.”

“Nah, nigga.” Ramon’s voice came out flat. “You need to hear it because you doing some pussy ass shit right now.”

E.J. wiped his hands down the front of his shirt. His jaw worked once. “I ain’t doing shit but what’s best for me and my girl, nigga.” His eyes cut over to Ramon briefly and then away, out toward the street. “You acting like you wouldn’t do this shit for Nina if she asked.”

Ramon shook his head. Slow and deliberate. “I wouldn’t even think about it,” he said, “because I been in this shit half my life. This who the fuck I am and Nina know that.”

He let the pause sit between them. Then his hand came up, two fingers jabbing toward E.J.’s chest.

“You been in this fucking shit half your life. Out of all the dirt you done did—” He stopped. His jaw shifted. “This the shit that tip you over the edge? Sending a pig up the river? Really, nigga?”

E.J.’s chin dropped. His head moved side to side. “It’s because I let y’all bring Tessa into this shit.” His voice came down, some of the hard edge sanded off it. “She a civilian, nigga.”

“You don’t even like her ass like that.” Ramon said it straight out. His gaze didn’t move from E.J.’s face. “You be fucking every bitch throw a lick of pussy at you. Now all of a sudden you the fucking man of the year.”

E.J. looked back toward the apartment. Tessa was in the breezeway doorway now, still holding the box, still watching.

E.J. raised both hands, palms out. “Look. I talked to Duke and them about it. When I touch down in Houston, I’m gonna be fucking with that nigga Bodie and his set.”

“Bodie.” Ramon said the name once. Let it land. He pulled a breath through his nose and looked at E.J. “Bodie ain’t the motherfucker that made sure that you able to stand here and say that shit in my fucking face.” His voice didn’t rise. “I am, nigga.”

The word sat there between them in the June heat, under the dead-white late-morning sky, between the UHaul and the cracked walk and Tessa in the doorway.

E.J.’s eyes finally found Ramon’s. Held them for a second. “I thought you’d understand, brudda.”

Ramon sucked his teeth. The sound was sharp and quick. “I should shoot your ponk ass where you stand.”

E.J. spread his arms wide, palms up, chest open.. “Do what you gotta do.”

Ramon shook his head.

“You a fraud ass nigga.”

E.J. dropped his arms. He stood there another beat, hands at his sides, looking at Ramon and then looking past him. He turned and started back across the walk toward the apartment.

Ramon watched him go. Then his eyes moved to the breezeway, to Tessa still standing there with the box against her ribs. They looked at each other.

Ramon turned his head and spat on the pavement. Then he walked back to his car.
~~~
The cups were the last of it. Laney worked through them one at a time, fingers checking each rim before setting it on the rack, the water running hot enough that her wrists had gone pink from the wrist down. The daycare had gone quiet behind her the way it only got during nap time, that particular held-breath quiet of a room full of sleeping children, where the only real sound was the rattle of the vent and the cartoon still whispering on the TV someone had turned almost all the way down.

She could hear the girls from the other side of the wall. Just the low shape of voices being pressed smaller than they wanted to be, the kind of whisper that kept escaping itself. She’d heard them settle into the corner when the last mat went down.

Laney shut off the water. She pulled the dish towel from her shoulder and started on the counters, working back to front.

“God, it’s so fucking good.” Hannah’s voice punched through the wall. “I thought he would be one of those jackhammer guys but shit.”

Laney’s hand kept moving. She turned the towel over and caught a dried spot near the edge of the sink.

“It’s that mysterious thing he’s got going on,” Katie said. “Like one of those characters out those shitty Wattpad novels people be reading.”

The laughter that followed was that small, crushed-down kind that lives in the back of the throat. Laney pulled the towel back toward herself and moved down the counter.

“The real question is,” Natalie said, “how big is it?”

The silence that answered her had a shape to it.

“You’re fucking lying,” Katie said.

“I wish I was!” Hannah’s voice came up before she caught it back down. “Going back to Scott after that? I knew he knew. There’s no way.”

Laney’s arm slowed on the counter.

“I bet he’s a top notch eater, too,” Natalie said. “You know he’s a Mexican so he’s used to rolling his tongue.”

Laney’s hand stopped.

She stood there with the towel flat on the counter and the fluorescent light buzzing overhead and the faint smell of bleach from the mop bucket still sitting open near the door.

“I don’t think he’s Mexican,” Katie said. “Just Hispanic.”

“You’re too woke sometimes.” Natalie’s voice had that easy, unserious confidence. “It’s the same shit. I’m just trying to find out how good he is at eating pussy so I can get mine when Hannah is done.”

A beat. Then Hannah said it flat and certain.

“Best I ever had.”

The towel went down on the counter. She just set it there and pushed through the kitchen door into the daycare.

The three of them were folded into the corner on the far side of the room. Chairs pulled together, legs angled inward, the posture of a conversation that had been going on for a while and had gotten somewhere good. Katie had her phone balanced on her knee. Natalie’s chair was tilted forward just enough that her feet weren’t fully flat on the floor. Hannah sat with her elbows on her thighs, hands loose.

The sleeping mats ran in rows across the far side of the room, a dozen little bodies still and soft in the midmorning quiet, each one doing the slow work of breathing. Along the back wall the cribs sat in their row, the youngest of them tucked in, arms thrown above their heads the way babies slept.

All three of them went quiet the second Laney came through the door. They straightened in stages, faces doing their arranging, eyes going to her and then carefully away from each other.

Laney looked at them.

“Y’all check on the babies?” she asked.

Hannah shook her head. “No, ma’am. Not yet.”

“Better get to that then.”

The three of them stood. Katie’s chair scraped softly on the linoleum as she pushed back. Natalie smoothed the front of her shirt. They spread out toward the cribs.

Laney stood with the kitchen door behind her and watched them go. She watched until they reached the first row of cribs and leaned over, until Hannah put her hand through the rail to check on the smallest one, until the room settled back into the close, bleach-and-baby-powder quiet of nap time.

Then she turned on her heel and went back down the hall to her office.
~~~
The booth still had the smell of whatever the last people had ordered, grease and salt sitting in the vinyl. Four trays spread across the table, wrappers pushed to the edges, a couple of ketchup packets squeezed flat. The restaurant was thin at this hour. A woman wiping down a table two booths over, someone at the register picking up a bag and heading for the door, the AC running loud enough that the music going in the back was more feeling than sound.

Caine had his cup in front of him, ice almost gone, condensation ringed on the tray. Dillon worked on the last of his fries, dragging them one at a time through the salt at the bottom of the carton. Matt had his arms crossed on the table edge, leaning forward. Terrell sat with his back against the wall, one leg stretched out into the aisle, ankle crossed over ankle, head resting back against the cushion.

They’d come in still damp from the session. Shirts dark across the shoulders, the kind of tired that sat in the joints and pulled at the back of the neck. Nobody had much left to say about lifting. The food had handled most of it anyway. Outside, a truck rolled through the lot, tires slow on the asphalt, and then it was quiet again except for the AC and the low register hum of the refrigerators behind the counter.

“Man.” Terrell looked at the table, then out at the front windows, then back at nothing in particular. “More and more I’m thinking I ain’t make the right decision sticking it out here.” He pulled at the paper wrapper on his cup, unrolling it slowly. “A nigga don’t see no way to get on the field.”

Matt shrugged. “You can still transfer, my guy.”

Terrell shook his head. The wrapper got folded in half, then folded again. “Yeah, but I ain’t about to start getting on campus in the summer either.”

“Carry your ass to Savannah State,” Caine said. He spun his cup once on the tray. “And you got that even if you show up at that bitch a week before the semester start.”

Dillon pulled a fry from the carton and held it up. “His ass gonna end up like Shannon Sharpe if he go there.”

Terrell looked at him flat. “Fuck no.” He shifted off the wall, sitting up a little straighter. “I only fuck our Black sisters. I don’t fuck with them mayonnaise bitches.”

Caine picked up his cup. “You can say that kind of shit when you ain’t getting none from no one.”

Dillon went first, head dropping back with it. Matt’s laugh came out shorter but just as fast. Terrell let out one flat ha, looked dead at Caine, and raised his middle finger. Caine sipped his drink and set the cup back on the tray.

Dillon tossed what was left of the fry back into the carton and wiped his fingers on a napkin. He leaned back into the corner of the booth, shoulder blades settling into the vinyl, arms crossing over his chest.

“I ain’t gonna hold y’all.” He looked between Matt and Caine. “A couple schools called me, too, to try to get me to jump in the portal. HBCUs mostly. But they saying I’m the guy if I go.”

Matt nodded once. His eyes moved from Dillon and settled across the table on Caine. “Surprised that ain’t no one took another run at Caine to get him.”

“They know that a motherfucker loyal.” Caine looked between the three of them, unhurried. “Not like y’all who looking for somewhere that’s gonna bow down to you.”

Matt’s mouth pulled sideways. “Spoken like a nigga that’s starting.”

Dillon pointed at Caine across the spread of wrappers and trays. “And getting fifteen grand a month to be the starter.” He reached for his own cup and shook the ice around. “I’d be fucking loyal, too.”

Caine shrugged, one shoulder. He pushed his cup aside and folded his arms on the table. “I’m just saying it’s just like bitches, right?” He looked at Dillon. “You want some pussy from a bitch who begging you to fuck? You already know that’s gonna be trash.” His eyes moved to Matt. “If a school begging for you to get in the portal this close to fall camps? Trash. Probably got plantation shit going on at them schools.”

Terrell turned his head toward Dillon and Matt. Slow and deliberate. He raised one hand and pointed at Caine.

“You hear this nigga?” He let it sit a beat. “Y’all know I done seen him coming out of three, four, five different bitches’ places in the last few weeks?” He spread both hands flat on the table. “But he over here talking about it’s trash if they begging for it.”

Caine laughed, chin dropping to his chest a second before he brought it back up. “Just because the pussy trash don’t mean it ain’t worth fucking.” He picked his cup back up and rattled what ice was left. “They might make up for it with they mouth.”

Matt stared at him across the table. He held it long enough to make a point. “You an ol’ ain’t shit nigga.” He leaned back in the booth and shook his head. “Talk about mixed messages.”

Caine shrugged and took a sip as the other three cracked up.
~~~
The sofa was low and soft and Dez had sunk deep into it. His head rested back on the cushion, eyes closed, one arm loose at his side, the other crossed over his stomach. Afternoon light pressed through the blinds in flat, even lines that stretched across the carpet and ran up the far wall, pale and doing nothing much for the room. The air had that stale, closed-in quality of a room that had been sealed up since morning, carrying old weed.

He took a slow breath. His chest rose and his throat worked once and then he held it, held it, and let it out.

Mireya sat back on her heels between his legs. She wiped the corners of her lips with two fingers, rubbing them on the fabric of sofa in front of her. She reached for the leggings, her fingers dragging them closer across the carpet.

Dez bent forward and grabbed his basketball shorts from where they’d bunched near his ankle. He pulled them back up over his hips and settled into the cushion again, hands hanging between his legs. He looked at her for a moment before he said it.

“You gonna have to stop telling me that you ain’t into a nigga when you doing shit like that.”

Mireya shook the leggings out and pointed her foot into one leg. “Don’t fucking do that.” The fabric pulled up past her knee. “You know what this is.”

Dez watched her work the other foot in, watched her press herself up off the floor and to her feet. She was pulling the waistband up past her hips when he spoke again, his voice still easy.

“You told me I ain’t have to pay.” He let it land. “What you mean? Sounds to me like you just wanted to fuck me.”

Mireya looked down at him, waistband settled, hands dropping to her sides. “Why do you think I told you that you didn’t have to pay?” Her voice came out dry and level. “Because I like you?”

Dez sat up a little. His elbows came to his knees, feet flat on the floor, the sofa creaking once under the shift. “You telling me they got another reason?”

She bent down and reached past his knee for the sports bra she’d left on the carpet between the sofa and the coffee table. Her fingers found it and she came back up straight, turning it in her hands to find the front. “Trell told me not to charge y’all anymore.” She found the label and rotated the bra. “You’re just a fucking driver, but I figured he meant you, too.”

Dez raised one eyebrow. “And you just going along with that shit?” His voice found its edge. “You don’t see how fucked up that is? Why you let him treat you like that?”

She worked the bra over her head, both arms threading through the straps, pulling the band down. “I’m not going to explain myself to you, Dez.” She kept her voice even. “You’re not my man.”

“I’m trying to be.” His voice stayed the same. “I keep fucking telling you that.”

Mireya looked at him. She stood with her weight settled on one hip, arms loose, and held his eyes. She let the quiet sit between them for a beat, then another.

“Pay me then.”

Dez’s right hand moved. His fingers pressed against the outside of his shorts, palm skating the fabric, finding the edge of his pocket. His hand paused there. Then it came back out and settled on his thigh.

Mireya made a short sound through her nose. “Exactly.” She tilted her head a fraction. “You want to be my man but you also want to take advantage of the situation. Make up your motherfucking mind.”

Dez pushed himself up off the sofa and stepped toward her, his hand reaching out and finding hers, fingers closing around them. “Giving you money for this ain’t better.” He kept his eyes on her face. “I could treat you right, Mireya. I’m serious.”

She looked down at his hand. She looked at where his fingers closed around hers, at the line of his wrist, at the small gap of light between them. She stood there with it for a second, just standing there, and then she pulled her hand back and turned toward the coffee table.

“Fucking stop it.” She picked up her purse from the far end of the table, catching it when the strap slid off the edge. “If you want some sweet little schoolgirl who’s naive about this shit, there are plenty of them in the city. Go find one. I’m not that bitch. I never was and I’m never going to be.”

She crossed toward the door, shoved her feet into her shoes, steps unhurried.

“Mireya, wait.”

She raised one hand behind her, palm facing back, fingers open and loose. The door opened and she went through it and pulled it shut behind her. The slam hit the frame hard, the sound carrying down the hall for a second before the building swallowed it.
~~~
The cookhouse sat back from the street behind a chain-link fence with a busted latch. Trell came through first. Ant a step behind him. Then Yola, then Shad carrying two duffel bags loose in one hand.

Inside, the air was thick with chemical and sweat. A box fan rattled in the window, blades ticking every few rotations. A folding table ran along the far wall, and two women worked behind it in just their panties, bare from the waist up, heads down, hands moving in the steady rhythm. Scale, bag, press. Scale, bag, press.

Dookie stood at the near end of the table. His front was pressed close to one of the women, chest at her bare shoulder, one hand at her waist and the other sliding up her side. His mouth was at her ear. She smiled at whatever he said without breaking her hands from the work.

The second guy sat in a folding chair at the back of the room, feet stretched out, phone face-up in his lap.

Yola’s voice cut across everything.

“Dookie! Why the fuck y’all ain’t got no niggas outside this bitch like I said?”

Dookie’s hands came off the woman and he stepped back, shoulders snapping up. “Them niggas said they was hungry so I told them to go get us some chicken.” He kept his chin level. “Shit been quiet all week.”

Yola looked at Trell. Then at Ant.

Trell shook his head once.

Yola turned back. “Chicken.” He let it sit there. “Nigga, you risking niggas running off in here for some fucking chicken?”

“I been looking out the window.” Dookie raised both hands, palms forward.

Trell’s eyes moved from Dookie to the woman still working beside him. Her head stayed down, fingers moving, eyes on the table in front of her. A thin sheen of sweat sat between her shoulder blades. “Looks like you trying to look into some hole.”

Dookie’s jaw tightened but he didn’t answer.

“You know this gotta go, lil’ nigga.” Yola said it even.

At the back of the room the second guy looked up from his phone. His eyes moved from Dookie to Yola to Trell in the doorway and then whatever was on his screen became the most important thing in the world. His head went back down, thumbs moving fast.

Yola gripped his sleeve and started rolling it up his forearm.

“Hold on, lemme explain, nigga.” Dookie kept his palms up.

Ant’s right hand dropped to his waistband, fingers settling around the grip there.

Trell raised one hand out toward Ant, palm flat. Ant’s hand came off the waistband and fell back to his side. Trell stepped forward and put his hand on Yola’s shoulder, fingers spread, pressing once. Yola went still.

Trell walked past him toward Dookie. He closed the distance and reached up, his palm finding the side of Dookie’s neck. Flat. Steady. Dookie’s throat moved as he swallowed, eyes going wide for a half second before he got them back.

“You fucked up, lil’ nigga,” Trell said.

“It’s just been,” Dookie started.

Trell shook his head. His thumb pressed into Dookie’s throat, just the side of his Adam’s Apple. “You did.” His voice stayed low and even. “All you new niggas we put in here get addicted to seeing titties.” His eyes didn’t move off Dookie’s face. “But you gotta stand on your own two like a man now. Don’t start begging.”

Dookie’s mouth closed. His chin came up slow. His shoulders pulled back. He gave one short nod.

Trell’s hand left his neck. He tilted his head toward the door.

Dookie turned and walked to the door with his chin still up, the screen door catching behind him as he pushed through.

Trell looked back at Shad, then at Ant and Yola, and followed him out. The other three came through the door behind him.

Dookie stood a few feet from the door, hands loose at his sides, chin still up.

Yola moved toward him, sleeve still rolled, hands coming up.

“Hold on, Yo.” Trell stopped him. Then his eyes moved to Shad and he pointed at Dookie. “You do it.” His mouth shifted at the corner. “Promotion time, lil’ brudda.”

Shad looked at Yola. Yola’s face gave him nothing. Shad looked back at Trell and Trell just waited. Shad bent and set the duffel bags down, the canvas landing soft in the dirt. He straightened and started toward Dookie, feet finding the ground under him.

He hadn’t stopped moving when Dookie’s fist came up and caught him across the face.

Shad’s head snapped sideways and he stumbled back two steps, arms out for balance. His foot nearly went. He caught himself and stood there with his hand going to his jaw, working it once, feeling it out.

Then he swung.

His fist caught Dookie just over the eyebrow, skin splitting. Dookie’s head rocked and he stepped back, but his hands were already up, feet settling into a stance, jaw set.

They squared up.

Shad came first and Dookie slipped it, shoulder rolling, and dug a hook into Shad’s ribs that folded him at the waist. Shad grabbed him and the two of them churned together, stumbling sideways, kicking up pale dust from the dry ground. Dookie got loose and they circled, both breathing hard now, the dirt rising in a low cloud around their feet.

Shad faked high and went low, leg sweeping behind Dookie’s ankle, and Dookie went down sideways into the dirt. Shad kicked him before he could get up, catching him in the ribs. Dookie curled for a second, then rolled and pushed himself back to his feet, jaw still set.

Trell made a short sound through his nose. He looked at Ant and Yola, pointing at the two of them. “Lil’ nigga can fight, huh?”

Ant gave one slow shake of his head. Yola laughed.

Shad and Dookie kept going, dust rising around them, the street quiet in every direction.

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Post by Soapy » 17 Feb 2026, 06:37

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17 Feb 2026, 05:52
“Exactly.” She tilted her head a fraction. “You want to be my man but you also want to take advantage of the situation. Make up your motherfucking mind.”
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Post by Captain Canada » 17 Feb 2026, 11:08

Mireya sucking dick for free now and has the nerve to act holier than thou is hilarious. Dez gotta find an iota of self-respect :rg3:
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Post by redsox907 » 17 Feb 2026, 12:17

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17 Feb 2026, 05:52
ou ain't been paying attention. Mostly the kind of dudes who pay for those private parties are finance types
I literally said that in the comment lmao but finance bros can still up the blicky

Ramon ain't lyin, he already threatened to leave Nina if she kept making him sleep on the couch lol

Laney in her feelings cause someone else getting that good D, jealous ass

Mireya just a regular old ho at this point

Dez gonna get domed being pussy drunk. What he thinks Mireya ain't going to tell Trell he plotting on his free-use ho?
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Post by Caesar » Yesterday, 06:00

Soapy wrote:
17 Feb 2026, 06:37
Caesar wrote:
17 Feb 2026, 05:52
“Exactly.” She tilted her head a fraction. “You want to be my man but you also want to take advantage of the situation. Make up your motherfucking mind.”
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This dude.
Captain Canada wrote:
17 Feb 2026, 11:08
Mireya sucking dick for free now and has the nerve to act holier than thou is hilarious. Dez gotta find an iota of self-respect :rg3:
How is she acting holier than thou????
redsox907 wrote:
17 Feb 2026, 12:17
Caesar wrote:
17 Feb 2026, 05:52
ou ain't been paying attention. Mostly the kind of dudes who pay for those private parties are finance types
I literally said that in the comment lmao but finance bros can still up the blicky

Ramon ain't lyin, he already threatened to leave Nina if she kept making him sleep on the couch lol

Laney in her feelings cause someone else getting that good D, jealous ass

Mireya just a regular old ho at this point

Dez gonna get domed being pussy drunk. What he thinks Mireya ain't going to tell Trell he plotting on his free-use ho?
Ramon all in on the 3. Everyone not built like that.

People can't be jealous no more?!

She always been a ho. What are we talking about? :pgdead:

Trell don't care about that. He know she ain't going to Dez ass.
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