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Post by Caesar » 06 Nov 2025, 23:24

God Won’t Provide

The van’s engine clicked as it cooled. Heat was already rising off the gravel, and the porch boards looked white under it. Laney swung out with her tote on one arm, keys tangled in her fingers, mind already on the work waiting at the daycare. She caught sight of the figure on her porch and stopped short.

Blake sat in the chair beside the door, one boot heel hooked on the rung, elbows out like he owned the space. He stood when she reached the steps, rubbing his palms against his jeans.

“Morning,” he said. “Been tryin’ to catch you. I finally got ahold of Tommy. He said I can stay out back.”

Laney’s mouth flattened. “Mm.” She shifted the tote higher on her shoulder. “So he said that, huh?”

“Yeah,” Blake said, quick to fill the quiet. “You know how he is. Don’t do too much talking. But he said it was alright.”

She stepped up another board. “Alright then.”

“You said you were going to talk to Caleb.” Blake nodded, hopeful. “You did, right?”

“I did.” Her tone made it clear that was the end of the good news. “He said yes—but only if it’s you. Just you. Ain’t nobody else settin’ foot in it.”

Blake’s jaw worked. “What if I wanna bring my kid out there? Spend some time with him. You expect me to tell him he can’t come see his daddy for an hour?”

Laney unlocked her gaze from the door long enough to meet his. “You don’t wanna spend time with that child. You just want somewhere to drag whoever you pick up.”

He shook his head. “That’s not fair.”

“Ain’t gotta be.” The words fell flat, unbothered. “That’s the rule. You stay by yourself. You don’t like it, you know where the cheap motels are. They probably know you by name.”

The chime above the door clinked once in the wind. A lawn mower started two yards over. The hum filled the space he didn’t know how to use.

Blake let out a dry laugh. “You’re really gonna hold this over me forever, huh? You call yourself a Christian woman, sittin’ here full of hate.”

Laney’s keys jingled in her palm. “God forgives,” she said, slow and even. “So, I don’t have to.”

He blinked, smile faltering. “It wasn’t my fault. She—”

She lifted her hand, stopping him cold. “We’re not doin’ this.”

For a second he didn’t move. Then he tried a softer voice. “I’m just askin’ for a few weeks, Laney. I’m not tryin’ to make trouble.”

“I’ll tell Caleb to go get the camper for you,” she said. “You ain’t comin’ in this house.”

He spread his arms, half smile, half plea. “Laney, it’s me. I’m your brother-in-law. You gonna act like I’m some stranger?”

“You not comin’ in this house,” she repeated. “And you not talkin’ to my sons.”

Blake stared at her like the words needed translation. “Those are my nephews.”

“I don’t care.”

She slid the key into the top lock. The bolt turned with that old wooden scrape, same sound it made every day. The smell of lemon cleaner drifted out from last night’s wipe-down. Heat pressed at her back, and she could feel Blake standing there, trying to work up another line.

“You really ain’t gotta do me like this,” he said, voice thinner now. “I’m just tryin’ to get right. You act like—”

She didn’t turn around. “You done said what you came to say. Now get on ‘bout your business.”

“Lan—”

The name barely left his mouth before she pushed the door open, stepped through, and slammed it hard enough to shake the glass.

~~~

The chill in the lobby hit the sweat still drying on Caine’s neck. The morning air outside had been warm enough to sit on his skin. Inside, the vents worked hard and the floor smelled faintly like disinfectant and turf glue. A couple of student workers in polos looked up from a computer and a stack of mail. One of them tipped her chin toward him.

“They’re waiting on you in the conference room,” she said, already reaching for the phone. “I’ll tell Mr. Lytle you’re on your way.”

Caine nodded once. “Appreciate it.”

He walked the hall slow, not dragging, just letting his pace find the rhythm of the building. He pushed the door with the small window and stepped into a room set for meetings, not film. No projector humming. Just a long table, three water bottles, and a stack of folders.

Brandon Lytle, Director of Player Development, sat nearest the door. He had a worn notebook and a pen resting across it. Two people from the athletics foundation filled the far side, already halfway rising out of their chairs.

The first, a tall Black man in a navy suit with a loosened tie, reached his hand across the table. “Derrick McCray,” he said. “Development. It’s good to meet you, Caine.”

The second, a woman with a sharp bob and a blue GSU pin on her lapel, stepped in right after. “Erica Paulson,” she said. “Also development. Thanks for making the time.”

Caine crossed to them. He took their hands in turn, firm, steady. “Wasn’t no problem.”

They didn’t sit right away. Derrick’s grin carried easy pride that didn’t spill over. “Hell of a week,” he said. “North Alabama, then Clemson. Best we’ve had at quarterback since Van Trease was spinning it.”

Erica nodded. “You were decisive. Comfortable. Looked like you belonged there.”

Caine kept his eyes on them. “I appreciate it,” he said. He slid into the chair opposite, shoulders loose, elbows on the table. Lytle leaned back a little, a casual anchor on the near side of the table.

“Alright,” Derrick said, palming the top folder and pulling it closer. “Let’s just get right down to it. We’ve gotten pretty good at knowing how this story goes when one of ours breaks out.”

Erica’s voice followed, clean and practiced without feeling canned. “If you keep doing what you’re doing for the next couple of weeks, folks with deeper pockets are going to start sniffing around. They’ll tell you to hop in that portal. We want you to see we’re committed to you now and next year.”

Caine let the words come across the table and set down in front of him. He flicked a glance toward Lytle. Lytle gave him the smallest nod, more a breath than a movement.

“I mean,” Caine said, “I ain’t played nothing but two games. Seems like it’s a little early for that, huh?”

Derrick didn’t flinch. “Tampering don’t got a calendar, man. It’s all day, all season. This ain’t going to be different.”

Erica folded her hands. “Programs want to know who they’re going to have at quarterback. That can be a high school kid or somebody with experience. Either way they want to be first in the door.”

Lytle set his pen on the notebook. “What they’re saying is real. You keep stacking up good days, your phone’s going to get busy with people who ain’t supposed to have your number.”

Caine sat with that. He looked back at Derrick. The man had already opened the folder and turned it around to face him.

“This,” Derrick said, tapping the top sheet with one knuckle, “is us showing commitment both now and next year.”

The paper wasn’t glossy. Just a typed list with logos down the margin and numbers in a right-hand column. Local restaurants. A tire shop. A smoothie place. A training app. A car dealership. Appearances. Social posts. A little for a photo day with a youth league. Hundreds in some lines. A couple of boxes in the low thousands.

Erica watched him read. “You’re not going to be driving a Ferrari here,” she said, a thin smile curving but not selling. “But we can make it worth you staying.”

Caine pulled the folder in tight and slid the first sheet free with his thumb. He scanned the rows, steady. A post-practice signing for four hundred. A sit-down for a local radio hit, eight-fifty. Social for a barbecue spot across town, twelve hundred plus a comped tray. He turned the page. A meet-and-greet at the mall that paid more if they won on Saturday.

He felt the shape of the opportunity. He slid the folder a little closer and kept reading, interest piqued at the chance to make more money — legal money.

~~~

Mireya lay along the couch with one knee hooked over the arm, the cushion holding the weight of her weekend. The fan ticked above. The AC hummed, but heat still pressed at the walls. Her throat was scraped raw from the weekend. She’d skipped her afternoon class and come home, undressed, shoes kicked off, hair pulled loose and half-tangled.

The shoebox sat on the kitchen table under the window, lid crooked. She’d counted once, then again, then lost the thread when her eyes blurred. Tomorrow she’d take it to the bank. For now it sat where she could see it. She closed her eyes and let the couch keep her.

A knock dragged her up through a sleep that wasn’t all the way sleep. Two short raps, then one more, off rhythm. She rolled to her back and rubbed her face. “Hold on,” she called, voice husked low.

She expected maintenance. The bathroom faucet had dripped all night. Through the peephole, Angela’s hair filled the fisheye and Paz stood behind her, jaw set. Mireya undid the lock and stepped back, waving them in with a slow hand, then drifted to the couch and fell back into her spot.

Angela laughed when she saw her, bright in the small room. “Girl, you look like you been running marathons all weekend.”

“It feel like I been running marathons all weekend,” Mireya said, her voice breaking rough on the first words. She turned her face to the cushion and coughed, a dry scrape that made her eyes water.

Paz took in the apartment like the paint might answer her. “You got anything to drink?”

“In the fridge,” Mireya said, not bothering to sit up. She pointed at the kitchen. “Might just be Capri Suns for Camila and water. That’s it.”

Paz crossed to the kitchen. The fridge door pulled open with a rubber squeal. Angela dropped into the chair by the couch, set her feet on the other cushion, ankles crossed, tank strap slipping down her shoulder like the day had worn it out too.

Paz cracked a bottle and turned toward the living room. The shoebox blocked her path. She stopped. The lid sat crooked in a way that invited hands. She set her water on the table edge and lifted the box. The lid shifted. Paper rasped on paper.

“Where you get this?” Paz asked.

Angela leaned in, brows up. “Damn, girl. You working hard, huh?”

Mireya pushed herself upright, fingers raking her scalp. The room tipped, then steadied. She crossed to the kitchen, took the box from Paz, pressed the lid down, and set it back with a solid thud. “I remember you asking for water, not anything else.”

“Where’d you get the money?” Paz asked.

“It’s none of your fucking business,” Mireya said. She walked back to the couch and dropped into the cushion, the springs giving a tired sound. Her bra strap dug into her shoulder. The shorts cut a groove in her thigh when she shifted.

Paz came around the half wall and stayed standing. “You selling drugs?”

A short laugh slipped out of Mireya. “No.” She stared up at the ceiling where a tiny brown fleck marked an old bug by the vent. “I work for a cleaning company. Sometimes they pay cash bonuses. I can show you the damn check stubs if you want.”

“Cash bonuses for a cleaning company,” Paz said, arms folding. Plastic crinkled in the crook of her elbow.

Mireya looked to Angela. Angela lifted both hands, not stepping into it. A small shrug, mouth tilted, said she wanted the air to cool down.

“Yes,” Mireya said. “If we clean a building faster. Faster means more in a night.”

“I don’t believe you,” Paz said.

“It don’t fucking matter what you believe.” Mireya let her head fall back and watched the fan slice light into thin bands across the ceiling. Her calves and knees still ached. Her throat still tasted faintly of liquor.

Angela leaned forward, elbows on knees. “Paz, chill. It’s not like she doing anything illegal for the money.”

“Yep,” Mireya said. “Nothing illegal.”

Paz’s sigh pushed out slow, like she’d been holding it. She sat across from Angela and balanced the bottle on her knee. “I’m just worried about you.”

“You’d have a lot more to be worried about if I was broke,” Mireya said. “So drop it.”

Silence ran a line through the room. The fridge motor kicked on. Footsteps passed heavy in the hall outside. Mireya closed her eyes until the floor quit feeling loose.

Angela cleared her throat and offered a small smile to the air. “So what you wearing?” she ask, twirling a finger toward Mireya’s bra and shorts, handing the room a way out. “Or not wearing?”

Mireya looked down at herself, at the soft black bra and the barely-there shorts. “What? I’m supposed to get dressed for some bitches who’ve seen me naked before?”

~~~

Caine lay on his back with the sheet riding low on his waist, the room holding the last of the late light. The picture on the dresser—Tommy in a suit, Laney in white—sat face down again. She’d nudged it that way as soon as he walked in.

Laney’s head rested on his shoulder, hair warm against his skin. Outside, a truck downshifted and kept going. The house settled around them in small ticks.

“My brother-in-law’s back in town,” she said. The words came easy, but her cheek pressed a little harder to his shoulder.

“That a problem?”

“Blake’s always a problem.”

He breathed once. “Damn, that’s crazy.”

“You cain’t come here no more.” She lifted her head and looked toward the window. “He gon’ be stayin’ in Caleb’s camper out back.”

“I can get to the front door without being seen.”

“Caine, I’m serious.”

He nodded to the window over the headboard. “Then I’ll come through there.”

She rolled her eyes, a small circle he felt more than saw. “Mmhmm. You so hard-headed.”

He let it sit. For a while neither of them said anything. She traced a line with her fingertip at the center of his chest and stopped when his heartbeat rose to meet it.

“What you was like before you got married?” he asked.

Her hand stilled. “Why you wanna know ‘bout that?”

He kept his eyes on the window. “Trying to see if you been this proper church lady the whole time. Or if you was for the streets like Rylee.”

She snorted and the sound turned into a laugh. “Who say I couldn’t be both?”

“I guess you could’ve been.”

She pushed up and reached into the nightstand. The drawer slid open with a soft scrape. She pulled a laptop out, set it on her thighs, and leaned back against the headboard. The glow caught her face and made the room feel smaller. Her fingers moved fast over the keys. He watched the way her mouth set when she typed the password, long as a Bible verse, and didn’t miss a letter.

She clicked through and a grid of old videos filled the screen. She picked one. A pasture opened up on the display, night heavy over a fire. A girl who was her and not her stood there in cutoffs with two beers in one hand. A man off-screen held up fingers to count. She punctured the cans and drank both in long pulls, cheering when the last stream ran down her wrist. “I need a fucking shot,” the younger Laney yelled, and somebody whooped. In the corner another girl gagged on her beer, doubled over. Whoever held the phone laughed so hard the picture shook.

Laney’s voice was even. “I think I was seventeen in this.”

She scrubbed forward, then moved to the next clip. A porch. A kitchen with a crowded counter. A tailgate. Music too loud for the tiny speakers. Her hair different in each one, her smile the same. He saw a version of her that had edges he hadn’t seen.

She backed out to the account page, clicked sign out, then opened the settings and cleared the cookies and the history. The routine looked practiced. The screen went blank to the login field.

“So you was outside outside,” he said.

She set the laptop on the nightstand and slid back down to him, head finding its place on his shoulder again. “I was rebellin’ without even knowin’ what I was rebelling against,” she said. “Got real good at livin’ a double life.”

He let a quiet laugh push out. “Yeah. Me too.”

“I knew, know all the Beatitudes.” Her voice thinned and then steadied. “And I know all the hot girl tricks. Used to tie a knot with my tongue and have the guys hollerin’.”

“Some might call that balance.”

“Yeah, okay.” She rolled her eyes again and breathed out through her nose. “I just ain’t wanna end up like my mama. I needed to know there was life past bein’ a wife and a mama.” Her fingers drummed once on his chest. “I had the papers ready for Georgia Tech, you? Letter of intent sittin’ there, ready to send.”

He turned his head a little toward her. “You were an athlete?”

She nodded against him. “All-state three years. Softball. Center field. Four-star.”

He gave a low whistle. “So how you go from all that, wanting that, to getting married?”

Her face shifted before she caught it. The guard came back quick. She didn’t answer. She reached up, took him by the wrist, and pulled him over on top of her.

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Post by redsox907 » 07 Nov 2025, 00:44

Caesar wrote:
06 Nov 2025, 23:24
Mireya looked down at herself, at the soft black bra and the barely-there shorts. “What? I’m supposed to get dressed for some bitches who’ve seen me naked before?”
sounds like a stripper to me :kghah:

Caine gonna sneak in, Blake gonna catch him, but only cause he trying to sneak somebody in too. Not wanting to get ratted on and get kicked out, they both keep quiet :yep:
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Post by Captain Canada » 07 Nov 2025, 11:15

Rare Mireya defense moment for me, but I promise you she can't let any shordy named "Paz" press her like this.
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Post by Caesar » 07 Nov 2025, 22:11

redsox907 wrote:
07 Nov 2025, 00:44
Caesar wrote:
06 Nov 2025, 23:24
Mireya looked down at herself, at the soft black bra and the barely-there shorts. “What? I’m supposed to get dressed for some bitches who’ve seen me naked before?”
sounds like a stripper to me :kghah:

Caine gonna sneak in, Blake gonna catch him, but only cause he trying to sneak somebody in too. Not wanting to get ratted on and get kicked out, they both keep quiet :yep:
It does. Also, an easter egg for the nooticers:
Caesar wrote:
25 Oct 2025, 19:30
“You couldn’t put on some clothes for us?” Jaslene said, grinning.

“In my own house?” Alejandra laughed. “For bitches who already seen my pussy? Absolutely not.”
A pact between two people doing dirt? :metsnbd:
Captain Canada wrote:
07 Nov 2025, 11:15
Rare Mireya defense moment for me, but I promise you she can't let any shordy named "Paz" press her like this.
You saying Mireya needs to put them paws on Paz? Image
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Post by Caesar » 07 Nov 2025, 22:19

Count Your Blessings, See There Are None

Caine sat on the couch with his phone face down on the armrest and a duffel half-zipped at his feet. His travel hoodie lay folded on a chair, itinerary tucked into the pocket. He had a few hours before check-in at the facility, just enough to sit still and let the air settle.

His phone buzzed once. Ramon: we outside.

He stood, crossed to the door, and thumbed the deadbolt open. He went back to the couch, dropped into the same spot, and typed, it’s unlocked. 201

The handle turned two breaths later. Ramon shouldered in first, backpack slung low, eyes skimming the room. E.J. followed, his own bag hanging off one shoulder, breath a little loud. Road on them. Shirt stuck at the chest. Gas station and A/C still clinging to their clothes.

“Where Tyree at?” Caine asked.

“Playing school,” E.J. said, rolling his eyes.

Ramon’s mouth pulled into a chuckle. He nudged his chin toward the hall. “Where your A/C closet at?”

Caine pointed. “First door on the right.”

E.J. shifted, handed over his backpack. Ramon took both and moved down the hall. Metal ticked faint behind the closet door when he eased it open. A gray filter leaned crooked in its frame. He reached up into the dark belly above the unit and fed it two tight-wrapped bricks, then two more, bracing one forearm against the jamb. Dust came down on his knuckles. He shoved them flat until the space swallowed the shapes and the only thing left was the low hum of the blower.

E.J. stood in the doorway, but kept talking back to the living room. “Still cool if we crash here till Monday?”

“Yeah,” Caine said. “I’m leaving in a bit anyway. Won’t be back till Sunday.” He tipped his head at the counter. A single key sat near the sink. “That’s the extra.”

Ramon closed the closet soft and came out rubbing his palms. He crossed to the sink, ran the tap, and scrubbed. Lemon dish soap touched the air, sharp and clean against the heat. Caine watched the water go cloudy at the drain, then clear again.

“Who the birds for?” Caine asked.

Ramon didn’t look up. “Some nigga named Trell out on the West Bank, mostly.”

“He cliqued up with y’all?” Caine said.

Ramon shook his head and flicked water from his fingers. He angled a look at the fridge.

“Go ahead,” Caine said.

Ramon pulled it open and grabbed a bottle of water. “He ain’t affiliated. Independent. Got a crew of like twenty niggas. Maybe twenty-five.”

E.J. scratched at his jaw, leaning his shoulder to the door frame now that the closet was quiet. “You ever heard of Fifth Ward Ant?”

“Nah,” Caine said. “Who that?”

“Ol’ Michael Meyers ass nigga,” E.J. said. “Trell’s enforcer.”

Ramon sucked his teeth and dropped onto the far cushion. “Man, everybody afraid of Ant because everybody been told to be afraid of Ant.”

“I don’t know, man,” E.J. said. “I heard he got a lot of hats. Even Dez and them afraid of him.”

Ramon just shook his head, letting it roll off him. He glanced at Caine. “I’m gonna CashApp you the three hundred when we get back to the city Monday.”

“That’s cool,” Caine said. He nudged his duffel with a toe, so the zipper teeth lined up straight.

E.J. jerked his chin at the hoodie folded on the chair. “Where y’all going again?”

“Jacksonville, Alabama,” Caine said.

Ramon snorted a laugh. “Sounds like your kinda place.”

E.J. sucked his teeth. “Y’all gotta get a new slant.” He looked back at Caine. “You got somebody can show us around while you in Alabama?”

Caine laughed and shook his head. “Go out on y’all own. Find some bitches. They loose here. Easy to fuck.”

“Now this my kinda place,” E.J. said, grinning.

Ramon reached over and tapped two fingers against Caine’s arm. “Because they white.”

Caine laughed with him, the sound quick.

E.J. sucked his teeth again and said, “Fuck y’all niggas.”

~~~

Jaslene turned down the cracked drive and into the lot, the car shivering a little from the AC. “Which one is it?” she asked, chin lifting toward the line of doors.

“That one,” Mireya said, pointing to her mother’s apartment, the one with the porch light base stained brown around the screws.

Jaslene pulled into a spot next to Maria’s near car. Heat rolled up from the pavement and made the parked hoods shine. When the engine ticked, the sudden quiet held the hum of window units and a radio somewhere behind the building.

“I won’t be long,” Mireya said, pushing the door with her shoulder. The day hit her skin heavy. She reached down and grabbed the LV pouchette, slipping the strap over her wrist before she shut the door.

Two doors down, Mrs. Robinson was sweeping her front porch. The broom scraped and knocked pebbles down the steps. “Hey, Mrs. Robinson,” Mireya said, lifting her hand.

Mrs. Robinson looked right at her, then turned and kept sweeping.

Mireya let her hand fall. She cut across the chalked hopscotch and climbed the short steps to the door. The key slid into the lock and stopped short. She tried again. It wouldn’t turn.

“Ma,” she called, knocking hard with the side of her fist. “Open the door.”

Silence pressed in. She banged louder. “Ma. Come open it.”

The chain rattled, then the deadbolt. The door came open with a drag on the weather strip. Maria stood in the frame. The apartment air behind her smelled like Pine-Sol and oil that had cooled in a pan.

Mireya angled to step inside. Maria set her hand out and stopped her. The gesture was clean. “Whatever you’re here for shouldn’t take too long,” she said. “And you’re not welcome in my home anymore.”

Mireya held her face still. “Okay,” she said. She shifted back onto the mat and unzipped the pouchette. The zipper teeth whispered.

Maria’s eyes dropped to it. “Louis Vuitton, huh? Fancy for someone cleaning toilets.”

Mireya ignored her. She took out a fold of hundreds bound tight. She held it up so it caught the light. “Here’s your fucking money.”

Maria’s eyebrow lifted. “You have it already? ¿Cómo?”

“Picked up some extra shifts,” Mireya said. “Took out a loan and sold some plates at work.”

Maria extended her hand. Her fingers didn’t tremble.

Mireya shook her head. “You’ll get it when you’re ready to meet me at the notary to get the registration changed over to my name.”

Maria’s mouth barely moved. She nodded once, quick and clipped. “We can go Monday.”

“It’s only 3,” Mireya said. “Nosotras podemos ir ahora.”

“You don’t boss me around, little girl.”

“I have no reason to trust that you’re keeping your word.”

Maria shrugged, a small push of one shoulder. “That’s the chance she’s going to have to take pero eso forma parte de ser adulto.”

Mireya unfolded the bills and counted off five, the edges crisp against her thumb. She held the $500 out. “You’ll get the rest when we go to the notary.”

Maria looked at Mireya’s hand for a beat, then took the money and tucked it from sight. The space between them cooled by a degree and then went back to hot.

“I’ll be back Monday,” Mireya said. She turned on her heel and started for the steps.

“How much was your Louis Vuitton?” Maria asked, voice even.

“Es falso,” Mireya said over her shoulder, not slowing.

Gravel crunched under her shoes as she crossed to the car. She slid in and shut it. Jaslene’s eyes cut toward the apartment, then back to Mireya.

“Are we going to the notary?” Jaslene asked.

Mireya shook her head once. “No.”

“Está siendo una bicha entonces,” Jaslene said, not loud. She flicked the fan up and let the vents work. “Qué cojones.”

Mireya snorted, a small breath that passed as fast as it came. She set the pouchette in her lap and reached for her phone from the cup holder. The screen woke to stacked bubbles in the group chat.

“While you were out there, Ale texted,” Jaslene said, watching the door mirror. “Said she has another party for tomorrow.”

Mireya scrolled a thumb and found the line. The chat sat on the screen under the sun.

“You going?” she asked, eyes still on the phone.

“If you want to go, I’ll go too,” Jaslene said. “Tú me dices.”

Mireya nodded. The air finally felt cold on her wrist. She didn’t look back at the apartment. She didn’t need to. She tapped the text box and kept it simple. “I’ll go,” she said, mostly to Jaslene, then she typed what needed to be in the thread.

I’m down

~~~

The espresso machine hissed and clicked, laying a thin film of steam across the glass case and fogging it for a blink before it cleared. A bell over the door made a soft ring each time another body pushed in. The room smelled of roasted beans, sugar, and the faint wet tang that followed the mop. Laney kept her fingers moving on the tabletop, a light tat-tat that matched the thud of her heel on the tile.

Across from her, Taela held a phone to her ear and let her voice flatten into the careful tone she used for business. “Yes ma’am. It’ll be ready. Thank you.” She listened, eyes on Laney’s hands, then ended the call and slid the phone face down beside a stack of napkins. A smile tugged at the corner of her mouth as she took Laney in.

“I don’t know how,” she said, leaning back, “but you look stressed and well-fucked at the same time, which I ain’t know was possible.”

Laney raised her iced coffee, touched the lid to her lip, and set it down where it had been. “Blake’s in town,” she said. “Stayin’ out in my fuckin’ backyard.”

Taela’s eyebrows popped. “Blake Matthews? Your brother-in-law?”

“Mmhmm.” Laney’s heel kept time, light and steady.

“Well,” Taela said with a small snort, “I know that ain’t why you look like you been fuckin’ every night.”

“I bought me a new vibrator,” Laney said.

One of Taela’s eyebrows climbed and held. She took a measured sip of her drink, kept the look a heartbeat longer, then let it go without another question. “You talk to Nevaeh then, since he’s back around?”

Laney shook her head. “You know I ain’t talked to her much these last few years.”

“I ain’t either,” Taela said. “Not really since before you got married.”

Laney’s gaze drifted past Taela to the window, where the afternoon sat heavy on the street. A bus rumbled by and left heat wobbling over the asphalt. “She still on that mess,” she said. “All of it. Same as Blake.”

Taela let out a slow breath through her nose. She watched Laney’s fingers still and then start again, the rhythm smaller. “You remember that night? Back then?”

“Yeah,” Laney said. “You?”

“How could I forget almost dyin’ in that damn lake,” Taela said, “’cause she wanted to drive and ain’t told us what she been smokin’ with him.”

Laney’s hand flattened. Her foot eased and stopped. “Yeah,” she said, voice even. “Our lives changed a lot that night.”

“Yeah,” Taela said. “You got engaged like a month later.”

Laney shook her head. “More like two—almost three.”

Taela rolled her eyes. “No difference.”

A barista knocked the portafilter against the rubber bar. Metal rang dull and clean. Someone at the counter laughed too loud, then quieted when the bell on the door sounded again. Laney nudged her cup an inch, straightened the sleeve, and left it alone.

“Anyway,” she said, “I just hope he don’t go bother her. She got enough on her plate.”

Taela nodded once, a firm little tilt. Then she let the mood lift, the corner of her mouth curling like she was setting a lighter down. “So. Back to that other thing. This vibrator tall, dark, and handsome, workin’ at your daddy’s church?”

Laney gave her a look that almost turned into a grin. “Hell no. It’s small, round, an’ red. Looks like a rose. You need to quit readin’ them smut books.”

“Those books the only thing that keep me sane sometimes, thank you,” Taela said, prim for half a beat before it cracked.

Their laughter rose together, easy and low, and threaded under the hiss of steam and the buzz of the shop until it was just another warm noise in the room.

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Post by redsox907 » 08 Nov 2025, 01:37

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“If you want to go, I’ll go too,” Jaslene said. “Tú me dices.”
Mila gonna be calling her Auntie by the end of this season #soxstradamus

Caught the easter egg about Ale's comment, which is why I said it sounded like a stripper :kghah:

My guess, Maria calls the cops on Mireya or something when they go to the notary to accuse her of selling drugs or some shit. Ya know, typical Maria shit. Maybe Paz talked to her about it :hmm:
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Post by Caesar » 08 Nov 2025, 20:58

redsox907 wrote:
08 Nov 2025, 01:37
Caesar wrote:
07 Nov 2025, 22:19
“If you want to go, I’ll go too,” Jaslene said. “Tú me dices.”
Mila gonna be calling her Auntie by the end of this season #soxstradamus

Caught the easter egg about Ale's comment, which is why I said it sounded like a stripper :kghah:

My guess, Maria calls the cops on Mireya or something when they go to the notary to accuse her of selling drugs or some shit. Ya know, typical Maria shit. Maybe Paz talked to her about it :hmm:
Women can't be friends now? :smh:

We'll have to see what Maria is going to do. She might be afraid to catch another beat down from Sara.
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The sounds and smells of Frenchmen Street settled around them. Music bled from a doorway down the block, a horn run riding the air under the chatter and the hiss of a fryer. Tyree leaned in close, arm draped along the back of Coi’s chair.

“Shorty, you gotta stop playing so hard to get,” he said, voice low and teasing. “You know you want this dick.”

Coi rolled her eyes and slid her shoulder out from under his arm. She let the move push him back a fraction. “If you’d stop being so thirsty, I might’ve let you hit by now.”

Tyree sucked his teeth and laughed. “C’mon, love. I been fucking with you since June. How much longer a nigga gotta wait?”

She planted a palm on his chest and gave him a shove that rocked his chair a little. “I don’t just let any nigga hit. That’s how these bitches be out here messing up they pH and getting BV and shit.”

Tyree spread his hands like he was showing empty pockets. “Man, I’m clean.”

She rolled her eyes again, unreadable behind lashes.

A car eased to the curb and settled with a short chirp from the tires. Windows down. Dez leaned out of the driver side, arm over the door. Boogie sat passenger, shoulders forward, grin already set. Two more sat in back, faces shadowed by the roofline.

“What’s good, lil’ brudda?” Dez called.

Tyree didn’t turn his whole body. “Ain’t nothing,” he said. “Fuck you want?”

Dez tipped his chin like he didn’t feel it. “Where your potnas at?”

“In they skin,” Tyree said, lazy. He cut his eyes to Coi.

Dez sucked his teeth. “Why you got a problem with me? I ain’t never did you shit.”

“’Cause you a bitch,” Tyree said. “Still ain’t earn them stripes on your shoulder.” He flicked a hand toward Coi. “Can we wrap this up?”

Boogie shouldered Dez aside enough to be seen. “Say, bruh. We having a little get-together tonight. You know how Trell do. Strippers and everything gonna be there. Slide through. Bring some of y’all boys. I know them 39 niggas ain’t trying to be around only hard legs tonight.”

Coi sucked her teeth and pushed Tyree’s forearm off the back of her chair. He looked at her, hands out, What the fuck? already on his face before he turned back.

“Nah,” Tyree said, head shaking. “I’m straight.”

Dez shoved Boogie back with the heel of his hand and refocused, jaw tight. “Alright,” he said. “We’ll fuck with you. Find out when Ramon and E.J. coming back and tell them niggas to text me.”

The car pulled away, bass trailing a few steps down the block before it got swallowed by street’s noise.

Coi crossed her arms and sat back in her chair, mouth bent. “Strippers, huh?” She tilted her head. “And ain’t the 39ers them niggas who killed Magnolia Shorty?”

Tyree let air out slow, then scratched his jaw. “I said I ain’t going. And that’s just niggas I know from around the way. How you think I’m cliqued up with niggas when I be in class all the time? What you think I do, they books?”

“Yeah, okay.” Coi side-eyed him. “I’m gonna ask my brother about you.”

Tyree slid his chair closer an inch with his foot. “Who your brother?”

“A M3 nigga,” she said. “They call him Maine.”

Tyree leaned back and made a face. “Byrd? Them pussy ass niggas?”

Coi leaned back too, giving him the same look. “I thought you wasn’t cliqued up?”

“That ain’t got shit to do with us, though,” Tyree said. His hand found the back of her chair again, easy. The café door swung and shut behind them, let a bar of cold air out, then took it back. Brass chased a melody out of the next block and got lost in traffic.

Coi stared at him a second longer, then let her arms fall. She didn’t stand. The space between their chairs closed the way a slow song draws a crowd into the middle of a room.

Tyree’s voice dropped warm. “Quit playing, Coi. Lemme pull up. We drink something. Chill. I’ll make you forget all that extra talking you be doing.”

She didn’t answer fast, and he took that as room to work.

~~~

He eased the car into the space closest to the stairwell and sat with the engine ticking. His legs felt heavy from four quarters and three hundred miles of highway. The screen on his phone stayed lit, new badges climbing over the old. Mentions. DMs. Unknown numbers with short messages and too many exclamation points. He thumbed it dark, then lit it again and tapped Laney’s name.

You up? I just got back to Statesboro. I wanna see you

Her answer jumped back before he could pocket the phone.

No. BIL.

His jaw set. He pictured the route anyway, the way shadow laid across the side yard. He let it go before the thought turned into motion. He got out, lifted his bag from the back seat, and climbed the stairs slow.

Music leaked under his door in a thin line. Smoke rolled out first, then voices, then the hit of something sweet and cheap on the coffee table.

Ramon sat near the middle cushion, knees wide, blunt between his fingers. E.J. sprawled in the corner spot, feet on the table like he paid rent there. Five girls were scattered—Mackenzie on the rug with her back to the couch, Bri and Nia shoulder to shoulder on the far side of the table, Keysha perched near the lamp, and Tori tucked in the corner where his little light didn’t quite reach. Bottles crowded the wood. A lighter clicked.

Caine lifted his chin once at Ramon and E.J. The room turned slowly toward him. E.J. grinned up.

“You know how hard it is to find somewhere to watch y’all niggas play? Some whole D2 shit.”

Bri tipped her head. “Oh, you are the quarterback. I thought they were lying when they said that.”

Caine’s mouth pulled into a half smile. “I guess I’m the one y’all be waiting for then.”

“I definitely was.” Mackenzie pressed her palm to the rug to stand. “I’m Mackenzie.”

He dropped his bag behind the couch and pointed at E.J.’s cushion. E.J. spread his hands like he hadn’t heard.

“It’s my fucking house.”

E.J. sighed, rolled off the cushion, and shuffled to an armchair. Caine sank down where E.J. had been. He nodded Mackenzie closer. She slid onto the couch next to him, knee bumping his.

Ramon tilted the blunt toward Caine. “You getting on this?”

Caine shook his head and reached for a bottle. The cap cut a little circle in his palm. “Y’all be forgetting I’m on probation still.”

Ramon laughed and put the blunt to his lips. “Nigga, you be forgetting we are, too.”

“What’d y’all do?” Mackenzie asked, eyes flicking from the smoke to Caine’s hand on the bottle.

“Robbed a bank,” E.J. said.

“Really?” Nia asked, mouth open.

“Nah,” Caine said. “He lying. We was selling alligators in the French Quarter. Teeth two for ten.”

“That don’t sound illegal,” Keysha said, eyebrows up.

Ramon raised an eyebrow without moving much else. “Must think everyone in Louisiana got pet alligators.”

Caine took a pull from the bottle. The liquor burned clean and dropped into warmth. He handed it toward Mackenzie. “Just like all our mamas the voodoo lady.”

She set the glass against her lower lip, eyes still on him. “They said you speak Spanish. I bet you’re real good with your tongue.”

He leaned back and let his arm fall around her shoulders, the couch dipping under their weight. “Sí, es verdad.”

Mackenzie smiled into the bottle and took her drink. Tori laughed at something E.J. muttered and reached across him to nudge the volume on the speaker up a notch. The music threaded around their voices. Nia and Bri passed the blunt between them and coughed into their wrists. Keysha twisted her hair into a bun and let it fall again.

The night wore down by inches. Voices thinned and floated apart. The music sank to background when nobody remembered to turn it higher.



Caine blinked into the blue of his alarm screen and squinted. A little after three. He dropped the phone back to the nightstand, face down.

Mackenzie lay on her side behind him, arm over his waist, breath steady. At the end of the bed, Tori had knocked out with a forearm over her eyes and one calf half hanging off, ankle bracelet winking in the light from a pole outside.

He slid free and stood. The floor cooled his feet. The hallway smelled like smoke and something fruity from a spilled mixer. He walked into the living room.

Clothes lay in a trail from the bedroom to the table and back, one heel upside down and waiting, a bra hooked on the lamp switch. E.J. had claimed a corner of the rug with a throw pillow under his head and Nia tucked against his back. Bri and Keysha were folded into each other on the far side. Ramon had taken the couch and somehow stayed on his side, one arm slung over his face.

Caine stepped around all of them. The box sat where it always did, wedged against the wall. He slid it free. The cardboard rasped his palm.

Back in the bedroom, he opened the closet and reached to the top shelf. He set the box there, pushed it back until it touched the wall, and let his hand rest on it for a heartbeat. The shelf held.

He closed the closet. The air sounded bigger in the quiet. He nodded once to himself and went back to the bed. Mackenzie shifted as the mattress dipped, her hand finding his stomach before it settled. He faced the ceiling until his eyes blurred, then let them close.

~~~

The bass pulsed under the floorboards in the living room. The speakers made the cheap frames on the walls tremble and the couch cushions pushed out tired air every time somebody shifted. Boogie sat with his knees wide and his shoulders easy, Dez posted beside him, two more men in folding chairs turned toward the motion. Money twitched in hands. Laughter spiked and broke and came back again.

Mireya rolled her hips through the pocket of sound and let Luna live in her face. The room ran warm enough to gloss her skin. The light in here wasn’t kind but it caught what it needed to. She worked the space in front of the couch, heels clipped, hair off her neck. Alejandra swayed on a lap near the corner, talking low in a man’s ear. Jaslene had a palm on somebody’s chest and a smile that moved only when it made her more money. Hayley worked the fold between the speakers, picking bills without losing the beat. Bianca leaned in over a knee, laughing so a guy felt chosen.

Mireya felt the look from the back before she saw it. A man sat where the room bent, ankle crossed, the phone in his hand lighting and dimming. Another man stood behind him, half a chair back, eyes making lazy circles around the room. The seated one said something over his shoulder. The other leaned in to hear it, then the first went back to his phone, thumb moving.

“Man, Luna, you finer every fucking time I see you,” Boogie said, voice full of grin.

She smiled and let it be for him. “That’s because you know how to pay, papi.” She leaned down into his air, hands on her thighs, let her chest close the distance he wanted. “Who the two in the back?”

Boogie didn’t lift his gaze. “That’s the boss, baby. And the nigga who make sure he stay the boss.”

She straightened and let the beat pull her through another slow turn. Her eyes went back to the man in the chair. His head was up now, the phone at a pause, watching her.

Dez leaned forward, elbows on his knees. “I heard you got a Luna special.”

Mireya raised an eyebrow and smiled. Her eyes slid to Boogie. “Maybe I do.”

Boogie palmed Dez’s shoulder and pushed him back with a laugh. “Nah, nigga. You gotta get in line. Me and Luna got history.”

“And you still better have money, baby,” she said, the warmth in it edged with business.

Boogie lifted a fold in his right hand so the boys could see it. “You know what it is.”

Dez tugged a little roll out his pocket, rubber catching. “Shit, I got money, too.”

One of the men in the folding chairs patted his own pockets like he meant to prove something. Mireya didn’t answer any of them. She kept dancing, centering her weight, letting her hand skim her hip on the downbeat. When she looked up again, the man in the back was still on her. The one behind him hadn’t blinked.

The room carried on.



Later, the night had thinned to a damp hush. Mireya stood outside with her back against Bianca’s SUV. She pulled her hoodie up over her nose and shut her eyes. Jaslene scrolled with her thumb fast and careless. Bianca and Hayley debated food in low voices. The yard smelled like weed and Hennssey and oil that had been on that driveway too long.

The front door opened. Voices carried and then fell. Trell came down the steps with Ant behind him. Ant had a blunt lit, his hand low at his waist. He scanned left. Then scanned right. Trell’s eyes were already on them.

“Luna,” he called, and motioned with two fingers.

Mireya pushed off the SUV and walked over. She yawned without hiding it.

“I heard through the grapevine you got good pussy,” Trell said, no inflection in his tone.

Her eyebrow went up. “Yeah?”

“Yep.” His face didn’t move much. He took her in and then asked, “You have a good night? How much you make?”

She tipped her head. “Why, you want to contribute to it?”

Trell laughed and turned his head enough to cut a look at Ant. He gestured toward her with his thumb. “She quick with it, huh?”

Ant blew smoke out the side of his mouth. “Yeah, real quick.”

“Yeah, I’ll add to it,” Trell said, eyes back on Mireya. “How much you made?”

She shrugged, a little to one side. “Five ninety. Six hundred.”

Ant slid his fingers into his pocket and came out with a tight roll. He passed it forward. Trell took it without looking away from her. The rubber came off with a dry snap. He counted clean and slow until he had eight hundreds. He held them out.

Mireya let herself look at the stack and felt a small pause in her own hand.

“I don’t want nothing for it,” Trell said. “Think of it as a thank-you-for-coming bonus. A way of respecting a fellow hustler.”

She nodded once then took the money and slid it into her hoodie pocket.

“What’s your real name, Luna?” he asked.

Mireya laughed. “I’ll tell you that when you tell me why you got a shadow following you around everywhere.”

Trell turned his palm toward Ant without turning his body. “A shadow? You mean Ant? Ant’s my best friend. Like a brother. He’s just making sure everything’s copacetic.”

Mireya looked at Ant. His hand still rode low at his waist. The blunt burned even.

The door banged open. Alejandra stomped out, cussing in Spanish. Bianca lifted her chin from the SUV and waved her in.

“Thanks for the bonus,” Mireya said, tapping the front of her hoodie with two fingers. She turned and started back toward the car.

She pulled the door open and glanced over her shoulder before she climbed in. Trell stood where she had left him, still. Ant was behind him, hand at his waist and the blunt in his mouth.
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Post by redsox907 » 08 Nov 2025, 21:35

Guerra got that interception bug eh

Mireya getting closer to danger than she realizes with Trell and Ant. Woulda been funny if Tyree did roll through the party and catch Mireya

only a matter of time :hmm:

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Post by Caesar » 09 Nov 2025, 20:41

redsox907 wrote:
08 Nov 2025, 21:35
Guerra got that interception bug eh

Mireya getting closer to danger than she realizes with Trell and Ant. Woulda been funny if Tyree did roll through the party and catch Mireya

only a matter of time :hmm:

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8 touchdowns. 2 interceptions. "interception bug" :boyplease:

We'll have to see how or if that progresses.

Tyree would've used that to get a discount from Alejandra for some pum pum :pgdead:
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