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Post by Caesar » 02 Nov 2025, 01:12

God Didn’t Bring You This Far

Mireya stepped out of the short hallway, tightening the knot in her tank so it sat high on her hip. The shirt was Georgia Southern white and navy, the one she’d grabbed at the campus store the last time she was in town. She’d pulled it over to the side and tied it so it cropped above her waist. The cotton showed the smooth line of her stomach when she moved. Her shorts were cut even higher, pale denim with the hem frayed, hugging the tops of her thighs.

The AC in Caine’s place hummed low. The TV in the corner was on mute, some daytime thing rolling without sound, light flickering over the couch.

On the rug, Camila was on her knees in front of Sara, curls out, wearing one of the little tees Mireya had packed. She was holding up the small plastic toy horse she’d left here after her birthday . The paint on the mane had chipped, but Camila treated it like it was brand new.

“No, look,” Camila said, voice high. “It do this.”

She pressed her thumb down on the back where the button was half-broken. The horse tried to whinny. It came out squeaky and short and its head bobbed. Camila broke into a laugh that rolled through her whole body. Sara laughed too, eyes crinkling, elbow on her knee.

“That the one you made him go all over the house looking for?” Sara asked her.

Camila nodded hard. “It was here,” she said, pointing under the couch. “Right there.”

Mireya took them in for a second. Her daughter on Caine’s rug. Caine’s mother on Caine’s couch. She pushed her hair back over her shoulder and said, “Y’all ready?”

Sara looked up first. Her eyes did that fast mama scan. When she got to the tank and the knot and then the shorts, her gaze slowed. She nodded once and turned to Camila.

“You ready to go see your daddy play football, mi amor?” she asked, voice warm like it always got for Camila.

Camila’s whole face jumped. “Yes!” she said, almost dropping the toy. “Daddy! Daddy!” She scrambled up and ran toward the door, feet slapping from rug to linoleum. She had to hop to reach the handle.

“Hold on, mamas,” Mireya said, already moving. “We going together.”

Sara stood. “Let me grab my bag,” she said.

They stepped out into the outside hallway. Heat met them even under the shade. The air smelled like sun on wood and somebody’s laundry down below.

Camila shot ahead down the walkway, toy horse swinging from her hand. The sun hit her curls and turned them copper at the edges. Her voice came out in a little song that didn’t bother with a real melody.

“See Daddy, see Daddy, see Daddy,” she sang, feet doing a crooked skip toward the stairs.

Mireya watched long enough to make sure the concrete that she didn’t get close to the lot. Then she started after her. Sara fell in beside her.

That was when Sara did it. The once-over. The kind that noticed. Her eyes ran from the tied tank to the flat cut of Mireya’s stomach and down over the line of her thighs.

“What?” Mireya said, eyebrows pulling. Her hand went to the knot like maybe it had come loose.

Sara didn’t answer right away. She reached instead. Her palm was warm from the apartment. She laid it right on the strip of Mireya’s stomach the shirt had left out. Her thumb pressed there, testing, and then her gaze went down to Mireya’s legs.

“Have you been working out?” Sara said.

Mireya’s mouth tipped. It was the question she’d expected. She rolled her eyes once. “Yeah,” she said, light. “I been running at night.”

Sara gave her a look. “I see it,” she said. “You never really gained the baby weight but damn. I’m jealous.”

Mireya snorted, low and sharp. “Don’t be,” she said.

She opened the back door for Camila to get into the car.

~~~

Caine stepped out into the tunnel and the noise rolled over him in a wall. Paulson wasn’t big but when it filled it felt tight, sound bouncing off concrete and metal, crowd stacked close enough to see faces. Blue and white down both sides. Band punching. North Alabama warming on the other end. Heat rose off the field even though kickoff wasn’t full sun yet. It smelled like grass paint, sweat, and the fryer over by the concourse.

The line of Georgia Southern players crept forward one shoulder at a time. Helmets on. Mouthpieces tucked. Every one of them veered to the right when they hit the opening. The bronze head of Erik Russell sat there like a checkpoint. Each player bent in, facemask to metal. A couple of them tapped twice. One kissed his fingers and touched the top. Caine followed, no hurry. He bent, pressed the crown of his helmet to the bust, let it touch long enough to count, then straightened and fell back into the line.

“Hey, hey, lock in,” Coach Aplin barked from just inside the daylight. It wasn’t angry. It was to cut through the echo. “We talked about it all week. Start fast. Own first down. Let’s go.”

Pads knocked as the backs jostled to the front. A couple of linemen bounced in place, helmets rattling. Someone yelled “Yes sir” from inside the group and it set off a string of shouts. One of the defensive guys hollered somebody’s name. Another one thudded shoulder pads with Caine as he slid past.

Aplin lifted the big blue key, the one they used to lead the team out. He turned it outward to the field and ran. The rest of them surged after him, cleats punching through the turf, sound from the home stands spiking when they saw the team break. The band hit a run. Flags whirled. Caine ran in the middle of it, body steady, eyes already cutting across to the opposite sideline where North Alabama’s defense was clustered. Not nervous. Just clocking everything the way he always did.



The sound from the stands thinned when they closed in. Helmets bent together. Caine stood at the center of the huddle, headset crackling in his ear.

“Gun trips right. Slot swap. Sixty-two cross. Z dig. Half-slide left. Alert swing. Don’t hesitate to rip it..”

Caine nodded, even though Fatu couldn’t see it.

He looked around the huddle. “Gun trips right. Slot swap. Sixty-two cross. Z dig. Half-slide left. Alert swing. On one.” His voice cut through. No repeat needed. He pointed at David. “You’re left. Check out if they walk the nickel.”

Helmets bobbed. Trey’Dez, split out for the Z side of the call, reached and tapped his own chest once. “I got it,” he said, breath puffing. Shoulder pads rose and fell.

“Break.”

They clapped out of the huddle and jogged to the ball. The line set first. Caine jogged up into the backfield and drifted to five and a half in the gun. Trips to the field. Tight slot inside. Trey’Dez by himself on the boundary a little reduced so he’d have room to win. David slid to Caine’s left hip, toes pointed at the line, hands ready.

North Alabama showed four down and a walked-up backer to the field. Safety over the top cheated half a step early. That made Caine’s eyes flick there. He gave a quick “easy, easy” and lifted his foot to reset the cadence. Chandler looked back through his legs and nodded.

“Set. Set.”

Nobody bailed. The nickel looked greedy but not coming yet. Good. Half-slide left would catch it either way. Caine dropped his eyes to the mike to freeze him.

“White nineteen. White nineteen. Go”

The ball popped into his hands and he rode it high. First step was clean. Second step was back and light. Third step he hit the depth and settled, shoulders already square. The half-slide snapped in front of him. The edge to the right got washed. Field backer widened with the trips just enough. That pulled the hook. Exactly how it had looked all week on the cut-ups in the quarterback room.

Trey’Dez stemmed hard outside, sold fade to grab the corner’s hips, then snapped it off and cut back inside at eighteen. It was there. Window between the settling mike and the safety who had stepped flat-footed.

Caine didn’t hitch. He just let it go.

The ball left his hand on a rope, chest high, twenty yards downfield to Trey’Dez.



Caine stood in the shotgun, hands hovering near his chest, mouthguard half against his teeth. Josh was wide right, inside shade on the corner. The play was built for rhythm—curl, one read, ball gone fast.

“Green eighty… green eighty!” Caine called, voice carrying under the hum of the crowd. “Set—go!”

The snap hit his palms clean. He caught it, rolled the ball once, laces finding his fingers as he planted. His eyes flicked to the safety, then back to Josh.

Josh pushed off the line, five hard steps, then dropped his hips and turned on the curl. The corner drifted, half a step slow.

Caine let it fly. The ball ripped forward and found Josh square in the chest at the sixteen. He tucked, spun off the reach of the defender, and drove through the open grass.

Two strides and the goal line was there. Josh crossed upright, ball tight to his ribs.

The noise from the stands swelled sharp and clean. Caine exhaled through his facemask, eyes on Josh handing the ball to the ref before turning back toward him. Linemen met Caine halfway, helmets knocking, first score on the board.



Caine stood five yards deep in the gun, gloved hand resting on his thigh pad as he scanned the front. Kenneth Ejiofor was wide left, tight to the numbers. The call had been a quick zone look, but the defense showed press with a single-high safety shading to the trips side. Too heavy to run it.

He lifted his hands and pointed at the line. “Kill! Kill! Kill!” he barked. “Check, check! Check, check! Casino! Casino!”

The linemen reset their feet. David shifted from his right hip to his left. Kenneth gave a small nod, adjusting his split to take the corner one-on-one.

Caine glanced once more at the safety creeping down, then called it fast: “Set—hut!”

The snap came clean. He opened right, rolling behind Dwight as the pocket bent with him. The edge came high, shoulder pad brushing his jersey, but Caine kept drifting, eyes cutting across the field.

Kenneth hit his stem, sold post, then bent it back to the corner. The safety froze inside.

Caine planted hard and threw across his body. The ball jumped from his hand, turning over tight as it arced downfield.

Kenneth tracked it in stride, arms stretching wide. The ball dropped over his shoulder and into his hands. He broke free of the corner’s dive and sprinted into open grass, the crowd already roaring as he crossed midfield.

He didn’t slow until a safety pushed him out inside the twenty. Fifty-seven yards gone.

Caine stopped near the sideline, helmet turning toward the field, pointing at the nearest North Alabama player and waving his hand in front of his face.



Caine sprinted the offense to the line, ball set at the forty-one, clock running. No timeout. The sideline was waving but he was already moving.

“Bingo! Bingo! Bingo!!” he shouted, voice sharp over the noise. The players knew it—four-verticals, go before the horn. He dropped back into the gun, hands flashing once for the snap. “Go!”

The ball hit his palms. He dropped, one, two, three, eyes cutting deep. Trey’Dez split wide right, pushing vertical off the line. The safety shaded wrong, drifting toward the trips.

Caine planted and ripped it. The ball climbed high, spiral tight against the lights.

Trey’Dez kept running, eyes up, catching it clean over his shoulder at the fifteen. He pulled it in, stumbled once through contact, and lunged through the last defender. The clock hit zero as he crossed the goal line.

Touchdown.

The sideline detonated. Helmets thrown, hands in the air. Caine backpedaled a few steps, both arms raised, shouting through his facemask until teammates mobbed him.

Coach Aplin was already out past the numbers, pointing at him hard, grin wide, then slammed a fist in the air.

Caine met him halfway, bumping shoulders with Dwight on the way, the sound of the crowd folding over them as Georgia Southern ran to the tunnel up big.



Caine stood in the gun at the 11, ball slick with heat. Josh was wide left, pressed but with a soft cushion. The call came quick—timing route, rhythm throw.

He scanned once, saw the corner’s feet flat, and knew what he wanted.

“Hut—hut--Go!”

Caine took one step, two, and hit his back foot. His eyes went to the inside shoulder of the corner and stayed there.

Josh drove upfield, four hard steps, then leaned like he was taking it outside. On the next beat he sank low and turned back.

Caine had already let it go. The ball was gone before Josh’s head turned.

It cut through the air and hit him right between the numbers as he came out of the break. The corner reacted a step late, hands flashing at nothing.

Josh planted, spun off contact, and fell forward through the goal line.

Touchdown.

The stands broke in a single rush of sound. Caine took a step back, exhaling once before the linemen hit him from behind, slapping at his helmet. He pointed toward Josh, who lifted the ball once in acknowledgment before jogging off toward the sideline, the scoreboard flashing new numbers behind them.



Caine crouched in the gun at the 8, sweat drying in a thin film on his forearms. The defense was already leaning forward, waiting for the handoff.

The snap came clean. Caine opened left, ball pressed into the mesh with David just long enough to pull the linebackers downhill. He flipped his hips and came up throwing.

Trey’Dez slipped behind the traffic, cutting flat across the back of the end zone. The safety saw it too late.

Caine ripped it. The ball came out low and hot, finding Trey’Dez right on the goal line. He caught it clean, pivoted through contact, and dragged a foot before the ref’s arms went up.

The crowd roared, sound bouncing off the concrete overhang. The scoreboard turned over again—56–10. Caine exhaled once through his facemask, grin breaking as his linemen crowded around him.

Then the PA voice rolled through the noise:

“That’s a record, ladies and gentlemen! With that pass, Caine Guerra has 493 yards! A round of applause to our new single-game passing leader!”

The sideline exploded. Helmets slammed against pads. Players pointed back toward the field. Caine jogged toward them, body light, chest still burning from the last drive.

Coach Aplin met him near the numbers, one arm already up. He hooked it around Caine’s shoulder and shook him hard, hand smacking the top of his helmet.

“Good fucking shit, kid!” he yelled over the crowd. “That’s how you make a fucking debut!”

Caine laughed into the noise, nodding once, helmet tipping forward under Aplin’s hand before he let him go.

He pushed through the crowd of teammates, bodies thudding against him as they mobbed him, voices mixing with the band and the PA. He dropped down onto the bench, still catching breath.

A second later Trey’Dez came jogging in from the field, ball in hand, other players right behind him. He stopped in front of Caine and held it out.

Caine took it without a word. The surface was slick from sweat and turf paint, laces rough under his thumb. He turned it once in his hands, crowd noise fading to a hum around him, and just looked at it.
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Post by Agent » 02 Nov 2025, 01:20

I’m way out of the lore but 40/53 is super impressive. Surprising the other team would let Brodie demolish the team & go 17/44

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Post by redsox907 » 02 Nov 2025, 01:01

-1000 aura with those gloves :troll:

looking like Kenny Pickett out there

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Post by Soapy » 02 Nov 2025, 07:42

i beg your fucking pardon wtf :soapy:
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Post by Caesar » 02 Nov 2025, 09:51

Agent wrote:
02 Nov 2025, 01:20
I’m way out of the lore but 40/53 is super impressive. Surprising the other team would let Brodie demolish the team & go 17/44
Shredded them up.
redsox907 wrote:
02 Nov 2025, 01:01
-1000 aura with those gloves :troll:

looking like Kenny Pickett out there
Don’t need aura when you got production.
Soapy wrote:
02 Nov 2025, 07:42
i beg your fucking pardon wtf :soapy:
I knew you’d have a problem with this. It was against an FCS team on Heisman with 9 minute quarters. I don’t have the coach trust to pick plays and I couldn’t turn on chew clock. So what am I supposed to do if the game keeps making me throw the ball? Throw it out of bounds…? I got the ball back with 70 ish seconds left and they were STILL calling passes. That’s how I ended up with 18 rushing yards because I just took two sacks to run the clock out.
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Post by Captain Canada » 02 Nov 2025, 12:53

Cooked their fucking ass. The two gloves will never not make me uncomfortable.
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Post by Caesar » 02 Nov 2025, 22:17

Captain Canada wrote:
02 Nov 2025, 12:53
Cooked their fucking ass. The two gloves will never not make me uncomfortable.
Had to make sure we were sanitary for the fisting we gave them.
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Post by Caesar » 02 Nov 2025, 22:17

The Devil Thought He Had Me, He Was Right

Laney had the daycare office AC set low, but the room still held the sweet-sour of apple juice and the sharp of disinfectant from morning drop-off. She had her planner open to a month already crowded with handwriting. Tuition due dates. Staff vacation requests. A note to call Mrs. Deas about her grandson biting.

She was halfway through matching a payment envelope to a name when the door opened without a knock.

Her daddy came in first, suit on even though it was barely nine, Bible under his arm. Her mother came right behind him in a flowered blouse, sunglasses still pushed up in her hair like she hadn’t decided if she was staying. Warm hallway air followed them in.

“Morning, Delaney,” Pastor Hadden said. His voice was even, Sunday-sure, even on a weekday.

“Morning,” Laney said. Her vowels dragged long and easy. “I’m just finishin’ up September tuition.”

“We need to talk about November,” he said. “It’s time to start thinking through the fall festival.”

He said we. She heard you.

“Yes, sir.”

Marianne stepped up like she’d been waiting. “I saw the sweetest little setup on Facebook last night,” she said, already digging for her phone. “A church in Texas. I mean, it was just beautiful. They had a little hay maze for the babies, and a photo backdrop with the fall leaves all the way down, and a cocoa bar, and them kids in flannel. You should do somethin’ like that.”

Laney nodded once. She didn’t have to see it to know it was a church with money. “Mmhm. I can look.”

“It wasn’t hard,” Marianne said, tapping the screen. “They just had volunteers. We got families. I’ll send it to you.”

“Yes, ma’am.”

Pastor walked farther in, eyes moving over the bulletin board, the cubbies, the stack of enrollment folders like he was checking for dust. “It needs to be announced by the second Sunday in October,” he said. “Decorations, sign-up sheets, games, food. We need to be ready.”

“I’ll have by it next Monday,” Laney said. “We can use what we already got in the shed.”

“We’ll see,” he said.

He turned to Marianne. “I need to speak with her a minute.”

“I’ll answer phones,” Marianne said, already sliding into a chair. “Y’all go on.”

Laney stood. Her skirt brushed the chair. She smoothed it even though it wasn’t wrinkled.

“Walk with me,” Pastor said.

They went out the side hall that tied the daycare to the rest of the church. The light in there hummed. A VBS flyer from the summer was still hanging by one tack. The staff door to the sanctuary was propped to let the cool out. They stepped through.

The sanctuary was weekday-still. No choir. No kids. Just the hum of the AC and the lemon oil on the pews. Light from the tall windows made pale stripes on the carpet. Pastor Hadden went straight up the middle and stepped onto the first riser toward the pulpit. Not all the way up. Just high enough to look at her from above.

“It’s been a few months now since that boy, Caine, started here,” he said.

Laney stayed at the floor level, hands folded in front of her. “Yes, sir.”

“I talked with Mr. Bethel last week,” he said. “He didn’t report any problems.”

“He’s doin’ fine,” Laney said. Her voice stayed steady. “Comes in when he supposed to. Does what he’s told. Helps the girls when they need. He don’t fuss. He don’t bother nobody.”

Her daddy nodded slow. “I’ll admit I had some concerns when Grant called me,” he said. “You never know how somebody from that kind of background reacts when you take ‘em out the place they used to be. New Orleans is a hard place. Then on top of that he’s up there at Georgia Southern for football, already got a child.” He shook his head once. “I didn’t want any of those bad habits rubbing off on Rylee or the other girls here.”

Laney swallowed. Heat rose at the back of her neck, remembering the way Caine touched her. In the very room they stood in no less. She tucked it down.

“I ain’t seen him do nothin’ outta line,” she said. “He do his work and then he goes.”

“That’s good,” Pastor Hadden said. “That’s what I like to hear.”

He stepped down. The wood gave a small sound under his shoe. He started down the aisle slow, eyes on the pews like they were students. His hand skimmed the back of one bench. He bent to pinch something off the carpet.

“When is Tommy coming back from that training out in Oklahoma?” he asked, still looking down.

“In ‘bout two months,” Laney said.

“Good,” he said. “I’d like to have the whole family together for the festival. His schedule stays hectic. The two of you are an example for the young people in this congregation.”

Laney heard the word example and felt it land. Her answer came softer than it should have. “I’ll check with him next time we talk.”

He grunted, short, like that would do. He straightened with a small splinter between his fingers and looked at it like it offended him, then slipped it into his pocket to throw away.

He kept on with his inspection down the aisle, eyes taking in the pew ends and the hymnals and the carpet. Laney stayed at the front, watching him work his way toward the back rows, the cool of the sanctuary on her skin and the weight of what he didn’t know sitting in her chest.

~~~

Ramon kept his hand loose on the wheel while the car slid slow through the 11th. Houses sat tight to the sidewalk. Some were lived in. Some were peeling, windows dark, front steps busted. There were men out in front of all of them anyway, leaning, watching, shirts tucked in their waistbands, cups in their hands.

Candy rode passenger like she didn’t want anybody to know she was there. She had on big sunglasses that swallowed half her face and she was slouched low so the frame of the window cut her off at the cheek. Her hair was pulled back cleaner than when he first saw her. The swelling in her face had gone down some but not all the way. She kept rolling the edge of the seat between her fingers.

Ramon didn’t look at her much. He was working the block. Head facing forward, eyes everywhere else. Corners. Cars nosed up on the grass. A kid on a bike who stopped pedaling so he could get a better look at the plates. On the next corner two 110 boys were set up in the shade from a sycamore, shirts off, shorts low, chains bright. One of them tapped the other and nodded toward Ramon’s car. Ramon clocked it and let the car keep moving at the same speed.

“That nigga be out here, right?” he said, voice low.

Candy let a breath slide out slow. “He don’t be at one spot,” she said. Her voice was thin but he could hear the tired in it. “He just be round. You gotta catch him. He only be seen when he want to be.”

“Round where?” Ramon eased the wheel, taking them past a shotgun with no door on it and a box fan in the doorway fighting hot air. “You said he in the 11th.”

“He is.” Candy shrugged one shoulder. “He always in the 11th. Just ain’t never in one place. He move.”

Ramon hummed once from his chest. He let the song on the aux keep rolling. He thought about just telling Nina he couldn’t find him, the warning from Ant still sitting at the back of his mind.

They rolled up on a red light. He drummed two fingers on the wheel and looked across the intersection.

Across the street a dude was half on the curb, half in the street, talking to two women dressed for night even though it was morning. Both of them had on just bras for tops and skirts that stopped high. Heels high enough to make every step a risk. The dude was running his mouth and the girls were giving him their full attention. One of them leaned so hard on one hip her heel slid in a crack.

Ramon lifted his chin that way. “That him?”

Candy had to move to see. She pushed herself up, leaned across her seat toward him but kept the sunglasses on, like somebody across the way could really see in through the tint. She looked past him, squinting like she was making sure. Then she nodded.

“Yeah,” she said. “That’s him.”

The light turned green.

Ramon didn’t punch it. He let the car roll through, then eased the wheel and turned down toward where Junebug was standing. Junebug was talking with his hands, showing off. Shirt clean. Chain catching light. The two women gave him an audience. Ramon took in the shoes, the haircut, the way he kept his weight on one leg.

Candy slid even lower, damn near under the dash.

Ramon cleared the block and took the next corner. Tires crackled over broken glass near the gutter. The 11th went back to its noise behind them. Music out a blown speaker. Somebody arguing on a porch. A kid yelling from somewhere he wasn’t supposed to be.

Candy lifted her head a little. “What you gon’ do?”

Ramon didn’t answer right away. He looked through the windshield, jaw working once.

He cut his eyes at her, only from the corner.

“I’m gone drop you off on Poydras,” he said.

~~~

Caine pushed through the double doors of the business building, the strap of his backpack cutting across his shoulder, one hand dragging down his face. His body still carried the drag from Saturday night and the dull ache in his throwing shoulder. He’d gone straight from the field to the locker room, then the small off-campus party where he’d taken Mireya, and then most of Sunday was gone to Camila, to Mireya, to his mama before their flight. It wasn’t just tired—his head still felt full.


Slow clapping stopped him halfway down.

Donnie stood below, grinning wide, palms echoing through the open air. Javier leaned against the railing next to him, shaking his head and pretending to bow.

“That’s fuckin’ King Guerra right there,” Donnie said, laughing. “In the flesh. Light four hundred yards.”

Javier threw both hands up. “Nah, don’t shortchange my boy. That was basically five. You shoulda threw that bitch one more time just for it.”

Caine’s mouth twitched. “Y’all dumb as hell.”

He stepped off the last stair and shouldered past Donnie, shoving him just enough to rock him back.

“You feel that?” Donnie said, catching himself. “That’s what four-ninety-three yards feels like hittin’ you in the chest.”

Caine shook his head, but the smirk stayed. “Chill on me. Already got people saying I ain’t gonna do it again this week.”

The three of them fell into step cutting across the campus walkway. Students moved in clusters. A few eyes followed them. Caine could feel it. He didn’t need to look to know what the whispers were about—the record, the highlights, the clip of Aplin grabbing him on the sideline after the touchdown to Trey’Dez.

Donnie nudged him. “So, how many bitches slid in your DMs this weekend, nigga?”

Caine laughed under his breath. “I ain’t look at none of that. I was with my kid, her mama, and my mama.”

“Whole family affair,” Javier said, grinning. “That’s wholesome as hell.”

He flipped the strap of his bag over his shoulder, eyes narrowing playfully. “I saw y’all at that little kickback Saturday. If my baby mama looked like that, I wouldn’t even be worryin’ about these hoes out here.”

Caine stopped just long enough to stare at him. “Yo. Watch your fucking mouth.”

Javier raised his hands. “Chill, bro. I was just sayin’. Compliment. Damn.”

They started walking again.

Truth was, he had looked. Sunday night after they left for the airport, he opened his phone. The Sun Belt account had posted his stat line and tagged him. Georgia Southern had posted a highlight video of the record-breaking throw. His follower count jumped from a little over a thousand to more than ten thousand overnight. DMs from rappers asking him to use their songs for edits. Messages from girls at colleges in Savannah, Macon, Jacksonville, even one from Texas. Some had no words, just pictures. Sketchy “brand” deals. He scrolled, locked the screen, and put the phone face down on his desk.

Donnie was still talking. “Bro, them boys from North Alabama couldn’t stop shit. Josh was cookin’ them corners every play.”

“Every down,” Caine said. “All of ‘em were pissing down their legs.”

Javier laughed. “Not really athletes.”

“They was scared,” Donnie said. “They knew it soon as we came out that tunnel.”

Javier looked up. “Does cracker got an AR fit here since Josh was catchin’ all the passes and not throwin’ ’em?”

Donnie barked out a laugh and threw his arm over Caine’s shoulders. “Man, shut the fuck up. Caine basically a cracker too. You ever seen a Black Mexican?”

“I ain’t fuckin’ Mexican,” Caine said, elbowing him in the ribs. “And they got Black people in Honduras.”

Donnie bent a little, holding his side and laughing louder. “Aight, damn. Chill. Aplin would murder a nigga for messin’ with his star quarterback before Clemson.”

“Weston might give you money though,” Javier said.

Caine smirked. “That bitch probably already in the portal.”

“That’s where he got the money from,” Javier said, grinning wider.

Donnie lost it again, hand still around Caine’s shoulder. The sound of it carried down the path between them, the kind of laugh that made other people turn their heads.

They reached the steps leading to the union. The glass doors kept sliding open and shut, sending short bursts of cold air into the heat.

The conversation sliding into more jokes, the three of them still laughing as they disappeared into the rush of cold air and voices inside.
~~~

Mireya pulled into the lot slow. The spot she always took was gone. A white sedan sat there, fresh paint and temporary plates crooked in the back window.

She exhaled through her nose, jaw set, and slid into the next space. The engine ticked when she cut it off. She looked back—Camila was out cold, lashes stuck together, cheeks still flushed. Mireya could’ve let her sleep there, just for a few minutes of quiet, but she needed to get moving. Always moving.

She opened the back door. “Ay, nena,” she murmured, slipping an arm under Camila’s legs and another under her back. The child folded into her chest without waking. Mireya locked the car with her elbow, balanced the bag, and started up the stairs.

Voices carried from the second floor—fast, sharp, familiar. Then came her mother’s voice, cutting through all the others. Mireya stopped halfway up, chest tightening.

“Chingada,” she said to herself.

She adjusted Camila higher on her hip and kept climbing.

The apartment door wasn’t locked. Mireya pushed it open with her shoulder. Air-conditioning hit her first, then the smell of sofrito and beans. Carmen sat on the couch, legs crossed, phone in hand. Elena was kneeling by the coffee table, folding laundry. And in the armchair that wobbled, sitting straight was Maria.

Mireya gave a small nod. “Hey, tía. Hey, Elena.”

Carmen’s face softened. “Hola, mija. Look at her—tan dormidita, pobrecita.”

Elena smiled up. “Oye, you good?”

Mireya didn’t look at her mother long enough to say hello. Maria didn’t bother pretending either. Just that quiet, hard glance between them.

“I’m gonna put her down in your bed,” Mireya said.

“Go ahead,” Elena said, waving toward the hall. “Fan’s on.”

Mireya crossed the room, feeling her mother’s eyes trace her leggings. She ignored it, nudged the bedroom door open with her foot.

Inside, the fan spun lazy circles. Mireya laid Camila on the far side of the bed, tugged her little sneakers off, then brushed a curl off her forehead. “Te amo, mi amor,” she whispered, kissing the warm skin. “Sleep good, okay?”

She eased the door almost shut and stood still a second, just listening to the even breathing, then walked back out.

The room fell quiet when she re-entered.

“I’ll be back around two,” she said to Carmen and Elena.

Maria’s head tilted. “You clean buildings so late, ¿no?”

Mireya kept her tone even. “They don’t want cleaning done when the offices are open.”

Maria’s mouth twitched. “And with a full face of makeup.”

Carmen and Elena exchanged a look. Carmen reached over and touched Maria’s knee. “Don’t start, María. Your daughter’s working hard to take care of your granddaughter.”

Maria scoffed. “Working so hard she can fly all over the country whenever she wants. Qué trabajadora, huh?” She stood, smoothing her blouse, eyes locked on Mireya. “Tell me—what kind of job lets you take off on the weekend to pretend you haven’t been demoted to just ‘baby mama’?”

Mireya’s shoulders lifted. “Clearly this one.”

Elena jumped in quick. “Hey, Mireya, did you bring the tablet? I didn’t see you bring it in.”

Maria ignored her. “Good you’re working so hard, because I want my car back. I’m gonna sell it. I bought a new one and want to put more toward the loan.”

Mireya blinked. “I need it.”

Maria waved a hand. “That’s not my problem.”

“And how am I supposed to get to work or school without a car?”

Maria shrugged. “Get a bus card. Or buy your own. I’ll sell you that one—three thousand.”

Mireya stared at her. “Are you fucking serious?”

Maria nodded, voice calm. “I’m not paying insurance on two cars I don’t drive.”

Mireya laughed once, sharp, disbelief scraping her throat. She stepped back toward the door, chin up. “Three thousand? Bueno. Three thousand.” Then under her breath, loud enough to sting, “Pinche perra.”

“Mireya!” Carmen said, standing. “Don’t talk to your mamá like that.”

Mireya didn’t blink. Her eyes stayed on Maria. “Elena,” she said, voice steady, “I’m gonna grab the tablet.”

She turned, opened the door, and walked out. She dragged her hand through her hair, muttering under her breath, “Dios mío,” as she headed back down the stairs toward the car.

~~~

The street was quiet enough for Caine to hear his own steps. He kept them light. Statesboro at night never worked the way New Orleans did. Noise didn’t hide you here. It carried. He got off the pavement early and took the grass so the streetlight wouldn’t catch him.

Laney’s house came up on the right. Porch light burning low. The house next door had a car in the drive now where the concrete had been empty before. Caleb’s Mercedes.

Caine shifted one yard sooner and cut through the damp strip beside the hedges. Grass wet from somebody running their sprinkler too long soaked into his shoes. He moved close to the rail posts. The porch had steps facing the street. He didn’t take them. He put his palm on the side rail, tested for squeak, and pulled himself up from the side in one clean lift.

He stayed tucked in the angle where windows couldn’t see him. Then he straightened and knocked.

Inside, he heard feet over wood. A soft hush. The lock slid. The door opened just enough for a face to show.

Laney was there, hair back, T-shirt hanging soft off her shoulder, mouth already tight.

“Caine?” she whispered, barely moving her lips. “What are you doin’?”

“I wanted to see you,” he said.

He didn’t look past her. He had already listened from the yard.

Laney leaned past his shoulder, out toward the dark of Caleb’s place. The porch light over there was off but the car told the story. She checked the other way down the street.

“What if somebody saw you?”

“Ain’t nobody saw me,” he said, voice easy. “This ain’t the first time I been out movin’ at night.”

She let a breath go, thin and mad.

She opened the door wider. He slid in sideways so his back never went to the yard. She shut it soft, turning the lock slow. Then she just stood there with her head tilted, listening for any kid to roll over.

She lifted a finger to her mouth and started down the hallway. He fell in behind her, steps flat on the runner.

They passed the boys’ rooms. Laney slowed. The door was open a crack. Caine saw in over her shoulder. Three little bodies under mixed blankets. Blue night-light burning. Knox with his arm swung off the bed. Braxton and Hunter sunk in deep. Laney watched for a second to make sure none of them had stirred. Then she nudged the door in just enough so the hall light wouldn’t leak.

Her bedroom sat at the back. She stepped in first. He followed. She turned and locked the door.

Caine let his eyes sweep. Queen bed made up in dark covers. Dresser with mirror. On top of it, a wedding photo in a silver frame. Laney in white, hair done, shoulders bare. Tommy in uniform, jaw set. Both of their expressions blank.

Caine crossed to it and picked it up. The glass was cool in his hand.

She came over quick and took it out of his hand, fingers sliding across his. She flipped it face down on the dresser so the felt back showed. Her palm stayed there a second, pressing.

“You can’t just show up,” she said, voice low, vowels flattened out. “You cain’t. What if Tommy was here?”

Caine shrugged, calm. “I knew he wasn’t. I ain’t stupid.”

She shook her head, small. A piece of hair had slipped down around her cheek. She had on a big T-shirt that hit mid-thigh and loose pajama pants. Covered up even at home. He reached and pinched the hem of the shirt between his thumb and finger, lifting it just enough to feel the cotton.

“This comfortable?” he asked.

She didn’t even look down. “You can’t just show up, Caine. You can’t. What if Caleb heard you. What if my daddy come drivin’ by. What if somebody from church did. They gon’ talk. They always talk.”

He let the shirt fall and set his hand at her neck, thumb working slow against the warm spot under her ear. “Ain’t nobody saw me. Ain’t nobody gon’ see me leave. Nobody gon’ see my car. I ain’t new to this.”

Her eyes slid closed for one breath. Shoulders eased. Then she opened them again, mouth twisted around the truth of it.

“This is fuckin’ crazy,” she whispered.

“I can leave if you want,” he said. He meant it.

Laney shook her head, reaching for the hem of the shirt and tugging it over her head.

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Post by redsox907 » 02 Nov 2025, 22:42

Maria thinks if she makes life harder, it'll eventually make Mireya see she is right. But, what she doesn't realize is her daughter is as stubborn, if not more so, than her. All its going to do is continue to drive that wedge between them and make Mireya try even harder to prove her wrong.

With the extra money Mireya is making I'm sure she can pull a car, 3K for the POS she been driving is laughable.

But also, someone been talking. How else does Maria know Mireya has been flying to Statesboro and not driving? :hmm:

Caine thinks he's being slick, but this ain't New Orleans. Someone going to see something eventually. Out in the country things don't stay secret forever.

Ramon ready to slide on June regardless of what Ant said.....but wonder when the info he has bout Mireya comes out? My guess, June finds out Ramon looking for him, probably by Candy, and someone puts two and two together about the stripped Luna, her real name, and Caine's connection to 3NG

EDIT:

HOL THE FUCK UP JUST PUT IT TOGETHER

Boogie that works for Ant is the same Boogie that is paying Luna (Mireya) to slurp dick. That's why June was there at the club, its his mf cousin.

Shit definitely going to pop off on that front

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Post by Soapy » 03 Nov 2025, 08:21

get the gat!
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