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Post by Caesar » 25 Oct 2025, 19:30

God Will Burn Your Beauty into Ashes

Laney shouldered the door with her hip and let the quiet of the house meet her. Keys hit the dish on the dresser with a soft clatter. She stood in front of the mirror and took herself in the way she always did before heading to the church. Then she ran her fingers through her hair and squeezed the back of her neck until the muscle eased under her thumb.

The air had been working all morning—thin and cool, a small mercy. It cut off mid-breath. The house went still in that way that made you hear your own moving. She glanced to the bedside thermostat. Seventy-four. Cooling. The numbers glowed steady. The vents stayed quiet.

She let the curtain fall back into place and moved through the hall. The back door stuck at the top of its swing. She put a shoulder to it and walked out into air that already wanted to press on skin.

At the condenser she hit the disconnect and slid it back in. Nothing. She pulled it again. Counted to ten. Pushed. The fan didn’t even twitch. A hush settled across the yard.

She tried it again. Same nothing.

“Damn it.”

She dragged the ladder from the garage through the house, careful not to gouge walls. In Hunter’s room she leaned the ladder inside the closet where a security system switchbox used to sit. She steadied the ladder with one hand and climbed.

Her phone light washed the space in cold white. Dust danced in the beam. She lifted the camera higher and angled toward the relay where Tommy had told her to patch together. The zip tie she’d used to keep tension on the loose spade connector had slipped free. The line hung lazy, not touching anything that would make it work.

She held the phone closer to be sure. The screen showed her knuckles chalked with drywall, the wire sagging away from the relay’s tooth. The video hiccuped in and out of focus with her breath.

“Of course,” she said under it. No drama. Just a tired kind of recognition.

The house held its breath with her. The quiet pressed against her ears. She tilted the phone a little more, trying to see if the tie had snapped or just slid. It had slid. The cut end poked out from behind the bracket like it was hiding.

She lowered the phone, blinked sweat out of her eyes, and leaned her weight into the ladder so it didn’t chatter against the drywall. Another Tommy told her he was going to get fixed. Another thing she had patched together instead. Another thing she’d have to patch together again.

She lifted the phone again and caught the connector one more time on the screen, just to put certainty on it.

“Fuck me,” she muttered, and let her head tip against the frame.

~~~

August heat worked through every layer of fabric until it found skin. The air over the practice field felt thick enough to touch, the kind that burned in the chest when you tried to breathe too deep. Helmets clicked down the line. Coaches shouted to reset. Caine crouched at the sideline, elbows balanced on his knees, eyes fixed on the huddle where Weston called the play.

The sound of the field had its own pulse—cleats biting, pads knocking, the short bark of cadence. Weston moved clean through the set, feet planted, shoulders level. The offense flowed around him, practiced and fast, and Caine studied the little things: the way Weston looked off the safety before a throw, how long his hands lingered on the mesh before he let the back go. Every motion was a sentence he needed to memorize.

The sun found the back of his neck. Sweat slid under the collar and disappeared. The smell of grass, rubber, and heat mixed until it was all the same. Aplin’s whistle cut, sharp and quick. Weston’s series ended on a crisp completion that drew a single nod from the head coach—approval, not praise. Weston jogged off, helmet tipped toward the sideline, and Coach Aplin’s chin rose toward Caine.

“Twos. You’re in.”

Caine pushed off the turf and jogged to the huddle, breath steady. His hands found the ball and the texture of it grounded him. Faces turned toward him—some new, some who still didn’t know what to expect. He gave the call low and quick, broke the huddle, and let the rhythm take over.

First rep, inside zone. A clean exchange with Nate that opened nothing more than a breath of space but enough to keep the tempo. The next snap, a short throw to the flat, ball spinning smooth off his fingers. Then a play-action call that rolled him to the right. He saw Tracy drift, fired to the window before it closed, heard the pop of the catch before the whistle.

Everything narrowed to noise and motion. The second-team line leaked in spots, but he felt it without panic, shifting just enough to stay clean. His eyes caught movement, recorded it, released it. The work felt simple in moments—read, throw, reset—but the weight pressed it into something heavier.

By the fourth snap his breath had evened out. He heard Fatu’s voice behind him somewhere, low and approving. Aplin didn’t speak. The silence was its own measure.

When his series ended, he jogged back toward the sideline. A student manager met him halfway with a squeeze bottle. The water hit his mouth warm, but it still felt like relief. Weston stood a few yards down, helmet off, sweat beading at his temples. They met eyes for a second—nothing spoken, no smile, just a line of acknowledgment.

“Turner,” Aplin called next.

Caine leaned on one knee at the sideline, body cooling by degrees that didn’t reach comfort. Turner’s reps ran slower, the rhythm off by a beat. The ball came out late, pockets collapsed early. Caine watched without letting it show in his face. His mind replayed his own throws, checked them against Weston’s, cataloged the pieces that had worked and the ones that hadn’t.

Mizell scribbled something on his clipboard. Fatu muttered to Aplin and the head coach just nodded, expression blank. A dragonfly hovered near the chalk line and darted off again. Heat shimmered over the field, making the far uprights bend.

Turner’s final rep ended in a tipped pass that fluttered short. The whistle blew, and the players reset for the next period. Caine took another drink and wiped his mouth with the back of his wrist. Weston was already turning back toward the field, helmet in hand, jaw tight.

Caine watched him go, the muscles in his shoulders drawn clean and tired. The competition wasn’t something either of them had to talk about. It lived in the small spaces—the nod, the silence, the way they both lingered a moment longer after the whistle to see what the other would do next.

The horn blew again. Coaches shouted about special teams. Helmets swung up. Caine stayed crouched for one more breath, feeling the hum in his chest from the reps, the burn in his lungs that never fully left.

August kept its hold on him.

~~~

Mireya lay half-sprawled on the couch with the fan doing its best to cut through the New Orleans humidity. The phone sat in her palm, thumb idling through nothing. Paz had draped herself in the chair like she wanted distance from everything in the room. Angela sat cross-legged on the floor, back against the couch, hair scraping the collar of her tee every time she moved.

“Did you pay your tuition yet?” Angela asked without looking up.

Mireya shook her head, eyes still on the screen. “I’m wait ’til the last day to pay it. I’ll have it.”

Angela laughed, soft and smug. “Couldn’t be me. I ain’t have to worry about none of that—with the scholarships and all. Right, Paz?” She pivoted her chin toward the chair.

Silence. Paz didn’t blink.

Mireya slid her gaze over the phone to look back at her. “What’s your problem?”

“I don’t have a problem,” Paz said, flat.

Mireya sucked her teeth, dropping her eyes back to the glow. “Fucking seems like it.”

The A/C kicked and coughed and then quit again, leaving the room loud with nothing. Paz’s voice rose a notch to fill the quiet. “You’re talking like you broke, but you got a big ass pile of boxes for toys in the corner right there.”

Mireya turned her head, cut her eyes to the corner, then back. “Lower your fucking voice. Camila’s asleep.”

Angela lifted both hands, palms out, scooting a knee under the coffee table. “Okay, okay—y’all chill.”

Paz didn’t. “Where you getting all this money?” Her heel tapped the chair leg like a clock. “For real.”

Mireya kept her body where it was, only her mouth moving. “Those are presents from my coworkers. And I’m getting my money how everybody else get money—by fucking working.”

Paz leaned forward, elbows to knees. “A bunch of women cleaning floors can buy all that?”

Mireya pushed herself to her elbows and looked at her full on. “Are you looking down on people who clean floors?”

“Don’t try to flip this on me,” Paz snapped. “I’m not the one suddenly able to afford all this shit.”

Mireya sat up, feet to the floor, the couch sighing under her. “So, your problem with me is that I’m not struggling enough for you?”

“She didn’t mean it like that, girl,” Angela said, voice pitched easy, eyes bouncing between them.

“Paz is a big girl. She knows what she said.” Mireya stood, phone face-down on the table with a small slap.

Paz rolled her eyes so hard the whites flashed. “You know that’s not what I said.”

Mireya jabbed a finger in her direction. “I should beat your fucking ass. But because I love you, I’m just going to tell you to get the fuck out.”

Paz scoffed, a dry little sound, and pushed up from the chair. The room shrank with the scrape of wood on tile. She moved to the door, shoulder tight. “You’re changing and you don’t even see it.”

“No,” Mireya shot back, following two steps, heat rising to her face. “I’m just not walking around thinking I’m holier than thou, puta.”

The door swung hard and the hallway’s dim light split the room. Paz disappeared into it without turning around.

Angela’s shoulders sagged. She looked at the door, at Mireya, back to the door. “Hold up,” she said, breath catching on the words, and hustled after Paz, sandals clapping.

The apartment went quiet again, that sticky, sour quiet that came after people said too much. Mireya stepped to the frame and shoved the door shut, hard enough that the pictures on the wall answered with a small rattle.

“Cunt,” she said under her breath, the words slipping out thin. She stood there a beat, hand still on the knob, listening for Camila’s stirring down the hall. Nothing.

She turned back toward the couch.

She walked, jaw tight, and dropped onto the cushion where her body had already left a warm shape, the phone waiting where she’d left it, its dark screen holding her own face in the gloss for half a second before it went back to black.

~~~

Ricardo climbed out of the van and let the door thud once. The metal threw a hollow ring that didn’t carry far in the garage heat. Concrete held tire dust and the sharp cut of exhaust that drifted up from the ramps. He took a breath through his mouth. The Kentucky plate on the bumper caught the light from a sodium fixture that buzzed, the characters clear on dirty white.

The phone in his pocket trembled. He pulled it and saw the single character on the screen. A question mark, nothing else. He leaned on the pillar, thumbs quick. He sent the stall number and those four letters and numbers. He didn’t add any words. The message pushed and the screen went to black.

From the far side, two men came in from the stairwell, heads up, eyes moving. Their clothes were ordinary but they walked like they knew they were being watched. One met his stare as they drew even. The man’s gaze slid down and up again, took him in, then his hand dipped to a pocket for a phone. The other kept scanning the rows. They moved past. Sound came down to the low hum of the garage and a plane somewhere outside pulling power.

Ricardo didn’t look back. He set off across the lane and down the concrete slope, taking the turns without hurry. The handrail was sticky at the landings. The air warmed and carried food and hot brakes. At the bottom level, a family spilled from an elevator with rolling bags. He slid around them and hit the door out.

Noise broke open. Newark’s sky chewed at him with jet roar and bus brakes and the horn of a shuttle that never stopped long enough. Warm wind pushed the shirt against his ribs and brought the smell of coffee that had burned too long. He stepped for the crosswalk and lifted a hand for the rideshare island.

An Audi pulled to the curb and shouldered the space he meant to take. The front window rolled down with a grind that said the motor had been asked too many times. The driver looked straight at him. “Súbete,” the man said.

Ricardo opened the rear door. Inside, cold air pushed out and swept sweat from his face. A man in a dark suit sat behind the passenger seat, posture neat, tie close, wrist flat on his thigh. He didn’t glance over. Ricardo slid in and shut the door. The car eased from the curb and joined the line.

The suited man watched the windshield, not him. “¿Qué pasó con Dani?” he asked. The voice held no heat. It held reach.

“La Migra,” Ricardo said. “He left the bag and ran.”

The man nodded once, small. “And you stuck around for the bag to get it here?”

“That was the job.”

Only then did the man turn to look at him. The detail in his face came alive in the half light from the dash. He didn’t speak. He measured. Tires thumped a seam in the road. A plane lifted overhead, a shadow across the roof liner. The driver merged, stopped, and merged again. The car smelled faintly of cologne that wasn’t from the driver.

“¿Cómo te llamas?” the man said.

“Ricardo.”

The silence after was unbroken but not empty. The Audi cleared the loops and took a right at the first light beyond the airport fencing. Warehouses gave way to blocks with chain-link and low houses that kept their blinds halfway shut. The driver rolled through two more turns and nosed against the curb under a tree big enough to make the car look small.

“Bájate, Ricardo,” the man said.

Ricardo opened the door. The heat outside felt heavier here. He set one foot on the gutter, then the other. He didn’t lean down to see back in. The street had a dog’s bark far off and the rattle of a train line that never went quiet.

“Ricardo,” the man called before he closed the door.

Ricardo looked in.

“Keep that phone with you,” the man said. “Y si vuelves a Culiacán, call La Flaca.”

Ricardo dipped his chin. He shut the door. The Audi pulled away without a sound and swung down the block, brake lights small and then gone. He stood long enough to hear the engine fold into the city’s sound before he turned his face to the corner.

~~~

Jaslene eased the car to the curb and killed the music. Heat pressed through the cracked window. Mireya bent to catch the strap of the takeout bag between her feet and lifted it, grease already touching the paper, the smell of cilantro and char climbing out.

“Mari wasn’t wrong,” she said, taking in the clean slab of the building and the neat row of mailboxes.

Jaslene popped her door. “It’s dumb to pay twenty-five hundred to share a wall,” she said, rolling her eyes. “But yeah. It’s nice.”

They crossed the short walk. Jaslene rapped the door once and pushed it open. “Estamos aquí,” she yelled, voice easy and familiar.

“En la sala,” Alejandra answered from inside.

They moved through a hallway that felt cold even with the air barely on. White walls, gray couch, everything neat in squares. Alejandra sat sprawled on the sofa in a short silk robe, legs out, hair twisted up with a clip. She pointed at the kitchen with her chin.

“Put it there, Mexicana.”

Mireya took the bag to the island. The kitchen gleamed. She set the food down and wiped her palm on her jeans.

“You couldn’t put on some clothes for us?” Jaslene said, grinning.

“In my own house?” Alejandra laughed. “For bitches who already seen my pussy? Absolutely not.”

Mireya came back and dropped onto the cushion next to her. The robe rustled. Alejandra cut her a side look.

“Oye, quítate los zapatos.”

“My bad,” Mireya said. She curled a foot behind her and pulled both shoes off, tucking them under the table.

Footsteps thudded down the stairs. Hayley hit the kitchen without a word and dug into the bag, paper tearing loud.

“I’ve been starving waiting on y’all,” she said around the first bite, still unwrapping.

Jaslene lifted a small eagle from the console shelf, turning it in her hand. “This new?”

Hayley looked over her shoulder. “Mr. Marcello gave that to me,” she said, mouth full.

Mireya squinted. “Looks like some MAGA shit.”

“It is some MAGA shit,” Alejandra said, snorting.

“Ale just mad he don’t want her ass,” Jaslene said, setting the eagle back.

Alejandra scoffed. “His son does though. Doesn’t want to fuck. Just eats my ass. Motherfucking cuck.”

Hayley shrugged. “He pays less though.”

Mireya glanced from one to the other. “So y’all really be out there like…”

“They always hustling,” Jaslene said, walking to the island to snag a taco before Hayley cleared the bag.

“Don’t act like you’ve never come, too,” Alejandra said to Jaslene, eyes glinting.

Jaslene rolled a shoulder, noncommittal, and bit into the taco.

Alejandra leaned back, robe gaping just enough to be a joke she was in on. She tipped her chin at Mireya. “Puedes venir si quieres. They’re not gonna be mad about one more.”

“I don’t know about all that,” Mireya said. She felt the heat of the food in the room now, grease and onion dense in the air. “Some dude asked me to suck his dick the other night in the VIP.”

“Did you?” Hayley asked, blunt.

“Fuck no.”

Alejandra laughed. “Can’t be leaving on the table, Mexicana. You suck dick for free, no? When you go see you baby daddy?”

“That’s different,” Mireya said.

“What’s different?” Alejandra said, rolling her head to look at her. “You go to Georgia. You suck his dick. You fuck him. He has a little money. He sends it to you. Es lo mismo.”

Jaslene licked salsa off her thumb. “Ale, you just don’t believe in love. Those are two different things.”

Alejandra shrugged, bored with the argument before it finished. “I don’t see the difference. If a man buys his wife a Tiffany bracelet, it’s okay. If a man buys me a Tiffany bracelet, it’s not? That’s stupid.”

She reached forward and tapped Mireya’s knee with two fingers, playful and pointed. “You don’t have to worry about slow nights if you do a few parties, get yourself a few regulars, Mexicana.”

Mireya snorted and stood, the couch cushion sighing under her. The smell from the bag hit her harder at that height, meat and hot corn, a little sour cream. She needed air that didn’t taste like food.

“You can just leave me off that roster,” she said.

Hayley watched her for a second, then slid a wrapped taco across the island with the back of her hand. Paper skidded and bumped to a stop.

Mireya walked to the edge of the living room and looked toward the glass. The backyard lay bright and exact, a tidy square of green with a small deck and clean chairs. Even the outside looked expensive. She stood there, bare feet on cool floor, the hum of the fridge steady, Hayley chewing, Jaslene rifling for napkins, Alejandra’s robe whispering when she shifted. The condo held its clean breath.

She didn’t open the door. She didn’t say anything else.

“Eat that,” Hayley called lightly, eyes back on the foil. “Before I do.”

Mireya glanced at the taco resting on the island, then back at the yard, the pretty fence line, the little lemon tree in a pot by the rail. The luxury stretched all the way out there, neat and unbothered.

She stood there a moment more, the paper-wrapped taco waiting, the view quiet and gleaming beyond the glass.

~~~

Caine’s phone lit just as he killed the engine at the church. Laney’s name sat on the screen, not a text bubble, a call. She never called.

“Hey, boss lady,” he said, shoulder rolling loose while he glanced toward the daycare door.

“I need your help with somethin’,” she said. “Can you come to my house?”

“Yeah, that’s no problem.”

“I’ll text you the address.”

The map link hit a beat later. He turned the Buick back onto the road and let the quiet Georgia stretch roll by, pines leaning in and the late sun catching on mailboxes.

The neighborhood was clean in a way that looked practiced. Grass cut to one length. Boxwoods squared. Laney’s place held a small porch with a flag moving just enough to prove there was air. He clocked the manicured yard and thought. That fit.

He knocked once. The deadbolt turned and Laney opened in jeans and a T-shirt, hair pulled back neat. Her eyes were business.

“Come on,” she said. “AC went out. It’s old. I gotta jiggle a relay to get it runnin’ again, but I can’t get to it from the attic and I ain’t climbin’ up without somebody holdin’ this ladder.”

She led him past framed school pictures and shoes lined by the door, down a hall into a boy’s room that smelled faintly of detergent and marker. A ladder waited in the closet under a square.

“I tried Caleb and Jesse,” she said, almost to herself. “Couldn’t get a hold of neither of them.”

“I got it,” he said.

He leaned in to look. The hole above the shelf wasn’t much bigger than a pizza box. He could get his head up there, maybe an arm, but not his shoulders.

She read his thought. “Space’s too small for you. Your arms’re too big. I just need you to hold the ladder and make sure I don’t bust my ass.”

He stepped into the closet’s narrow space and wrapped a hand around each rail. She climbed. The aluminum clicked under her weight and then smoothed out. She went to the top step on her toes, stretching, shirt riding up. Her jeans caught on the edge of a rung and tugged down a little. When she shifted her hips forward to reach, he saw a rise of ink bright on her thigh, just below her waistband. She braced her wrist on the frame and reached into the dark.

“Lil’ more,” she breathed, more to the relay than to him.

A dry crackle spit in the cavity. The hairs on his forearm lifted. She hissed a curse and stretched further. The ladder flexed. Caine’s hands moved without thought—one palm opening at her stomach, the other finding her hip. He steadied her, his thumb catching heat through cotton. Her inhale was sharp in the small closet.

“Hold still,” she said, voice thin now. “There it—”

Static snapped again. Somewhere outside the closet, the condenser coughed like a stubborn old man. She pressed forward and the crackle turned to a low buzz. He felt the ladder sway and dropped the hand at her stomach back to the rail, keeping the one at her hip until the shake leveled out. On the far side of the house the compressor gave a grudging start, then a steadier hum.

Laney looked down, found the top of the ladder with her feet, and took each step slow. He kept the ladder firm until both feet were on carpet. A dust fleck clung to her cheek. He stepped backward out of the closet.

“That’s a little dangerous, huh?” he said, half a smile.

“Been meanin’ to get it fixed,” she answered, shaking her head. “I never have time.”

They moved through the hall again. The cool had already started to creep back, thin first, then more sure. In the kitchen, the counters sat clear. A row of lunchboxes waited near the sink. He said he was good when she offered a drink. She poured him a glass anyway, the water catching light as it rose.

He took it because refusing twice felt wrong. The living room opened beside them, ordered the way he expected, nothing out of place, remotes lined straight. A corkboard held a week mapped out in her tight handwriting.

“It looked like your daughter had fun last week,” she said, leaning a hip to the counter.

“She did,” he said. “She don’t like Statesboro much, but she loves presents.”

“Don’t all kids?” Her smile reached her eyes for a second.

He laughed. “Yeah.”

“And I ain’t take you for the type to know how to dance,” she said, tipping her chin toward the open space.

“Mireya taught me when we started dating,” he said. “She said I couldn’t embarrass her at her quince.”

“Did you?”

He eased a shoulder. “She might’ve made me look bad, if we keeping it real.”

“It looked fun. Show me?”

He lifted an eyebrow. “You sure?”

She nodded once. “Mm-hmm.”

He pulled his phone and cued a track, huapango bright and insistent through the little speaker. He set the glass down and stepped to where the rug gave a little under their feet.

“All you gotta do is step,” he said, letting his hands hover before they settled. “Left, right. Bend your knees, sway your hips. I’ll lead you. Stay light on your feet.”

“Alright,” she said, the word softened by her drawl.

He took her right hand and set his other at her waist. He set the rhythm with his feet first, then let his hands tell her the rest. She followed. He felt the exact moment her body trusted his lead—the small release at the shoulder, the foot catching the beat without thinking. He spun her and brought her back, their hands not quite letting go before finding each other again. Her laugh rose up, unexpected and young, and it pulled one from him.

He didn’t rush. When the guitar drove them forward he guided her through another tight circle and felt her settle closer, chest to chest for a breath, then angled at his side, testing. She looked up at him. He dropped one eyelid in a quick wink.

They rode one song and then another. Sweat gathered at his temples and along her hairline where the AC hadn’t won yet. His shirt clung at the back when he pulled her into the last slow turn before the track faded. They stopped in the soft afterward, a hush that made the kitchen hum sound big.

She stood in front of him, bodies still close enough to feel the air move between them. Her pupils were wide. She searched his face the way a person reads a verse twice to make sure they got it right. Then she closed the last inch and kissed him.

He felt the press of her mouth first, then the catch of breath that followed. It wasn’t a question. His hands slid down the line of her back, stopping at her lower spine. Her arms went around his neck. The second kiss opened, slower, deeper, the kind that turned the room down until there was nothing but breath and pulse and the way her shirt bunched under his fingers.

He let himself be pulled toward the edge of losing track of everything else. A half step. Another. The side of his hand bumped the counter. She made a sound low in her throat and then she stiffened, as if she’d remembered herself.

She broke away, breath catching. Her fingers went to her lips like she was holding the moment in place.

“I think you should go, Caine,” she said, voice quiet.

He didn’t argue. He nodded once.

He walked to the island, picked up his phone, and slid it into his pocket. The house had the kind of stillness a cooling unit brings, a steady working hush. He looked at her once more, not asking, not promising, then let himself out. The latch caught with a soft click.

Laney stayed in the middle of the living room, palms pressed flat to her mouth, the cold of her wedding ring against her lips. The AC pushed cool through the vent and found the damp at her throat. The house was clean and in order and it was suddenly hard to look at any of it.
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Post by Captain Canada » 26 Oct 2025, 00:30

I can't stand you one bit, I hope you know that :rg3:
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Post by Caesar » 26 Oct 2025, 14:14

Captain Canada wrote:
26 Oct 2025, 00:30
I can't stand you one bit, I hope you know that :rg3:
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Post by Caesar » 26 Oct 2025, 23:16

God is Still in the Sinning Business

Caine held the stretch until the pull eased out of his hamstring and the grass stopped biting at his palms. The morning had a wet edge to it that clung to the field and to the backs of necks. Helmets sat in tidy rows at the sideline. Voices ran light and low, the kind of talk people used before the sound of pads took over.

He rolled to the next stretch and kept his eyes on the turf. Yesterday kept sliding across his focus in quick flashes—Laney’s face close, the heat when she didn’t step away, the part of him that still felt it in his chest. He let the picture pass and exhaled, steady.

Cleats creaked over rubber and then onto the grass. Coach Aplin walked the gulf between lines, a catalog of feet, shins, hands, effort. He stopped at Caine’s hip and shadowed the sun.

“How you feeling?” Aplin asked.

Caine came up to a knee. “I’m good, Coach.”

Aplin’s nod was small and sure. “You’re with the ones this morning. Just to see what we’re working with headed into the scrimmage next week.”

“I’m ready,” Caine said.

Another nod. No pat on the shoulder. No speech. Aplin moved on, the same even pace down the line, voice catching a name here or there, a hand flick to widen a stance or sit a heel down.



The first unit gathered into shape. Caine stood in the middle of it, the read as clean as the air. He just set his feet and took the script.

“Go through the script, Guerra,” Coach Fatu called, pen tucked behind his ear. “Let’s go.”

They ran through the first looks in rhythm. Mesh points. Footwork. Hitches that warmed the ball. Caine caught and fired, the ball arriving where it should, the sound of leather in hands giving the drill a heartbeat. Sweat beaded at his brow and collected at the back of his neck. He kept blinking it clear and kept the operation moving.

The defense shifted in, jerseys dark, hands on thighs, eyes filled with the promise of contact even on a thud day. Mizell paced nearby, arms crossed. Aplin settled deeper, watching the whole picture, eyes hidden behind sunglasses.

The firstirst call came in quick. Caine repeated it low in the huddle and broke them with a clap. He stepped up to the line with a stillness that wasn’t soft. Josh was to the boundary, tight to the numbers, Ayden pressed with a hand near the hip. Caine yoked his chin once and saw Devin cheated a half step toward trips. Ayden never peeked back.

The snap hit his hands. Three light steps and the ball stayed high. Josh sold vertical and never completely won, which was the point. Caine hit the back foot and threw to the back shoulder. No hitch. No extra. Just a quiet whip that settled outside the frame where only Josh could make the world small enough to own. Josh leaned, planted his toe, and let Ayden run past his chest. He curled the ball in, two quick steps to the paint of the sideline...

Caine jogged them back, eyes already on the next look. The defense reset with a little more noise, Brandon tapping his helmet. Mizell muttered something Fatu and pointed out something in how the offense was lining up.

Motion pulled Tracy a half step and left grass where there hadn’t been any. Ewan lined up tight, then rockered off the snap into the flat before bending. The window that opened was narrow and fast, a shutter instead of a door. August got hands up, Collin rode him by. David chipped and leaked. Caine slid a foot to the left to find it and never crossed his feet. Brandon flashed under. Devin sat wrong for a beat.

He dropped the arm slot and shaved the ball around a helmet, wrist loose, the throw coming out low and hot. It streaked past a hand that closed on air and found Ewan just behind the defender’s hip. Ewan didn’t slow. He took it through with a small turn and tucked, heels biting for two more steps before the whistle killed the rest.

“Oh, that’s it,” someone breathed near the numbers, not loud enough to be a statement, just enough to mark the rep.

Caine flipped the ball to the nearest manager and brought them back to the huddle with a flat palm.

On the far side, Aplin’s gaze slid to Fatu. Fatu’s eyebrow crept. Mizell didn’t smile, but he looked down at his chart and made a mark that said something had been seen. Aplin raised one eyebrow and let it fall, the kind of look coaches traded when a thing matched the picture they’d been building in their heads.

~~~

Mireya let the car’s engine tick down and listened to the heat press through the windshield. The daycare sat in a one-story brick box with painted cutouts on the windows, a sun with a grin and two clouds with tired eyes. She rounded to the back door and clicked the buckle. Camila’s curls sprang free when the strap let go.

“Listos?” she asked, voice soft. “You excited to make new friends?”

Camila nodded hard, mouth tight with the work of being brave. “Yeah. I’m gonna show them my boat.”

“That’s right.” Mireya slid the backpack over one shoulder and caught the small hand that reached for hers. The asphalt held heat through the soles. Sirens murmured a few blocks off and faded. They crossed to the door where cool air slipped around the frame.

Inside, the lobby worked a steady hum. Children counted blocks. A cartoon sang about shapes from a tablet set too loud in a corner. Lemon cleaner rode the AC and couldn’t win. A father sat in the row of chairs under a bulletin board, paperwork in his lap, leg bouncing, cap turned forward. His gaze slid over Mireya, quick and full. She caught it without turning her head, just clocked it. When she looked up, he didn’t hide checking her out again.

A worker in a blue polo stepped from behind the desk, smile bright. “Is this Camila?”

Mireya crouched so they were eye to eye. “Be good, okay? I’m coming back at five.”

Camila made her small nod again. “Then going to Elena’s?”

Mireya smiled. “Mm-hmm.”

“Okay. I show you what I draw,” Camila said, already glancing toward the sound of other kids.

Mireya kissed her forehead. Sweat and baby shampoo lived there. “Besitos,” she said, pressing one more. She stood as the lobby door whooshed and the father’s wife reappeared with a stack of forms, hair frizzed from humidity and effort.

“All set?” he asked her, not taking his eyes off Mireya’s hips until the wife handed him a pen that needed shaking.

They slid past. On the way out he looked back over his shoulder at her as he went, unbothered by being seen. Mireya just shifted Camila’s backpack higher and let the door close behind them.

A second worker, older, stepped in at the counter, a tidy stack of papers under a palm. “Do you want to pay for the month now?” she asked, tone cheerful, head tilted like she expected yes.

“Yeah,” Mireya said. She dug for the debit card, nails clicking against the wallet’s zipper.

“Alright,” the woman said, the smile still on. “That’ll be $1,175.”

Mireya’s eyebrow climbed. “I thought it was eight-fifty.”

The worker’s nod came trained and pretty. “Prices went up on August 1st. It’s eight-fifty for families who locked in before then.” She kept her eyes kind, customer-service steady, the words smoothed with practice.

Of course they did, Mireya thought. She pushed the card into the reader a little rougher than she needed to. The machine beeped its slow approval sequence. She stood with her hand on the card while it thought, the lobby’s cool air touching the sweat at her neck and doing nothing for it.

Behind her, a toddler giggled and then shrieked for the fun of it. Someone shushed and laughed at the same time. Camila looked back over her shoulder toward the sound, then turned to the worker nearest her and whispered, “Can I play blocks too? Por favor?”

“In just a second, sweetheart,” the girl in blue said, soft, dipping to Camila’s height without breaking her smile.

Mireya’s face stayed still, not tight. Just waiting. The reader flashed a question, then asked again for the same thing like it didn’t trust her. She jabbed the green button with her thumb. Approved slid across the little screen.

The older worker watched the display, then lifted her face to that bright desk smile again.

“Would you like your receipt emailed, texted or printed out?”

~~~

The hood on the side-by-side was propped and still. Heat soaked the plastic and made the engine breath smell thick, sweet with old gas and dust. Caine leaned in on his forearms and traced the lines with his eyes, feeling where the slack was, where the scrape had been. Mr. Charlie stood a step off his shoulder, cap low, finger pointing at the same three parts in turn.

“See that?” Mr. Charlie said. “Could be air in the line. Could be your caliper dragging. Don’t need no damn YouTube video to tell a man that.”

Caine reached for his pocket anyway. “I’m still gonna look it up.”

Mr. Charlie cut air with his hand. “You ought to be able to figure it without lookin’ up no video. Ain’t you a man?”

Caine smiled without heat. “Man enough to know when I need somebody to show me before I get in this thing and run into a tree ’cause the brakes ain’t working.”

He thumbed a search, grease in the whorls of his fingerprints catching the light on the screen. The thumbnail opened with a hiss of tiny speaker. He set the phone on the fender where the glare couldn’t drown it, then eased the reservoir cap, patient as he matched what he saw to what he felt. The rotor showed a gloss that didn’t belong. He rolled the wheel by a spoke. The faintest metal rub told on itself.

“That’s y’all problem,” Mr. Charlie went on. “You young boys never willing to figure nothin’ out on your own.”

“You ain’t wrong, OG,” Caine said, a snort of a laugh escaping his lips.


He worked the bleeder a quarter turn and watched the line for a bubble. The phone showed the same move and he mirrored it without hurry. His breath stayed even. He was aware of his hands, the cheap rag, the scuff on his knuckle from yesterday’s crate, and nothing else until the door thunked.

Laney stepped out into the strip of shade. The screen kissed the jamb and stayed open on her hip. She had a clipboard under her arm and a ring of keys. When she said his name, the sound was flat as a plank.

“Caine.”

He wiped his palms slow and walked over. The grass gave under his boot. He stopped where the sun quit and the porch shadow began. She put a step of distance between them that measured exact.

“Yeah?” he asked.

Her gaze touched him and left. “Help Hannah and Izzy get them extra mats from the storage in the hall,” she said. “Give the key to Hannah to bring back to me.”

He nodded. “Alright.”

She held a key pinched between two fingers, then didn’t pass it down. She leaned to the planter under the window, set it beside a cracked lip of clay, and straightened. She kept the porch between them, hands busy with the clipboard even though nothing on it had changed.

Silence sat with them a beat, not long enough to be awkward. The screen eased closed when she shifted her weight off it. She turned and walked. She didn’t look back.

Caine let the empty space cool a second. The rag went once across his fingers. He could feel the echo of yesterday sitting in his mouth. He went back to the machine because Mr. Charlie was still watching.

“Boy,” Mr. Charlie said, not looking up from the bucket he had claimed. “You got brakes or what?”

“I got ’em bled,” Caine said. He snugged the screw and wiped the line. “I’ll finish after I move them mats.”

Mr. Charlie snorted. “Long as I ain’t the one ridin’ when you test it.”

“Somebody gotta live to tell the tale if it doesn’t work, OG.”

He grabbed his phone and closed the hood. Heat pulsed in visible waves. Bees worried a bloom at the hedge. The church paint wore the sun in chalky patches where the white had gone to bone.

He crossed the grass again. The porch boards carried different sound underfoot, old wood and nails talking. The planter’s clay was hot to the first touch. He slid his fingers along the edge until brass met skin.

He hooked the rag in his pocket, felt the weight of the key in his hand, and set his foot on the porch step.

He stepped up to head to the hall.

~~~

Ramon pulled up to the community center and killed the engine. Heat lay over the block and made the afternoon slow. The building’s paint looked chalky under it, the mural washed to a softer blue where kids had pressed fingers and palms all summer. A box fan groaned in the doorway. The smell of cleaner and fried food rode the air, cut through with a faint whiff of piss from the alley.

Nina stood outside near the steps, talking low to a young woman. The girl’s hair was a mess. One eye was blooming dark and wet around the edge. Blood had dried under her nose and clung to her lip. She kept a cheap purse pinned to her ribs. Her heels didn’t match anything else about her right now except the way she held herself up on them.

Ramon stopped a few feet away and let his eyes move over what was in front of him. He pulled a blunt from his pocket and rolled it once with his fingers like a habit that settled his hands, then lit it. Smoke slid out on the exhale and hung before the fan caught it and blew it sideways.

Nina clocked him and told the woman, “Gimme one minute, okay?” She put a steady palm to the girl’s arm and then walked over, staying between him and the doorway. Sweat beaded at her hairline and flattened a curl to her temple. She didn’t smile.

“What you needed?” he asked.

She crossed her arms over her chest and nodded toward the woman. “I need you to find out something for me so I can help her.”

He raised an eyebrow. “Find out what?”

“She said somebody named Junebug did that to her. Said he live in the 11th Ward,” Nina said. Her jaw worked once like she was trying to keep the rest of the words in.

Ramon glanced back at the woman, then dropped his eyes to the heels. Thin straps, tall stiletto, scuffed at the back. “What she do?”

Nina pulled back half a step. “What you mean?”

“Her job,” he said, smoke easing from the side of his mouth.

“It doesn’t matter,” she said, arms pinning tighter.

He shook his head. “Nina, I ain’t going look for no fucking pimp running with 110 niggas ‘cause he beat one of his hoes.”

Nina’s mouth pressed thin. “I don’t care what she does. No man is supposed to be putting his hands on a woman.”

He took another slow pull and let it go. “What you want me do if I find him?”

“Find out his real name so I can give it to the police and they can get him off the streets.”

Ramon snorted. “He ain’t gon’ be in there long. Then he gon’ get out and go looking for her and when he find her and beat her ass again, she gon’ tell him about you. Then he coming for you. What then?”

“I know how to call the police.”

He laughed once, short. “They ain’t Superman. If you calling the jakes, he there already.” He thumbed his chin toward the woman. “If you want me to find him so that don’t happen no more, I gotta kill him. That what you want?”

Nina slid a hand through her hair and looked back. The young woman was already drifting off the steps, head down, one heel slipping in a crack that caught it. Nina’s face pinched with decision.

“No, it’s not,” she said. “Look, come by tonight and we’ll talk.”

She didn’t wait for an answer. She jogged off, calling, “Hey, mama—hold on. Wait,” catching up to the girl at the sidewalk.

Ramon followed her with his eyes long enough to see the woman pause, unsure, and then let herself be steered back toward the shade. The blunt continued to burn down. He pinched it out and tucked it behind his ear for later. The street buzzed with heat. A bus hissed at the corner and kept moving. Somewhere sirens pierced the sky.

He shook his head and went to get back in his car.

~~~
The porch boards held the heat the way a skillet held grease. Midnight had a pulse to it, slow and heavy, air thick enough to drink. Laney sat on the top step with her knees together and her feet flat on the wood, the hem of her sleep shirt tugged straight and then tugged again until the cotton stayed. Her hair was down. Humidity worked its will, the ends turning wild where her fingers had raked through and through. She pressed the back of her head to the post, then leaned forward again. Stillness wouldn’t stay.

Cicadas scraped at the dark. A lone car hummed on the county road and fell quiet. Somewhere past the tree line a dog yipped twice. A moth battered itself at the porch light, small body tapping plastic, quick and foolish. The night smelled like pine sap and the faint sour of old rain baked out of the dirt.

Her eyes burned. She had rinsed her face in cold water and it hadn’t helped. The whites were pink around the edges, a tender sting every time she blinked. She had walked the hallway twice and turned the light off and then on again and finally slipped out the door and took the steps like she always did, toe to heel, quiet.

The ring spun under her thumb. Gold warmed to skin. She set it, turned it, set it again. Her nails pressed into the soft part of her finger until the skin ridged up white around the band. She pressed harder. Pressure steadied her when breath didn’t. The little groove itched and she held it there, teeth on lip, counting the push. One. Two. Three. Don’t stop.

Eight years. A whole practice of saying no. Church, supper, laundry, the early mornings and the late ones. Lists and casseroles and Sunday dresses laid out on a chair. Smile bright. Speech tidy. No slips. A hold she had on herself the way you brace a door with your hip when your hands are full. She had been proud that she could hold it. Then she hadn’t. It had been easy to start. It had been so easy to start that the memory made her mad at herself for a breath and then the anger fell away and left only that raw place where the start lived. The stop had been hard. Hard in the body. Hard in the mind. Hard the way heat is hard when there is no breeze.

She let the ring go and pressed both palms into her thighs. Her skin stuck to her hands. Sweat beaded at the back of her neck. She put her hair over one shoulder and felt how damp it was, strands clinging to the hollow above her collarbone. She breathed in and tasted metal and salt. She swallowed twice.

The house behind her ticked as the A/C unit cut off and on. Through the front door’s window she could see the hallway light she had left on and the edge of the pictures of her and Tommy. The kitchen smelled faintly of cleaner from the mop bucket she had left by the sink. She had tried to scrub herself quiet with the floor. It hadn’t worked. Inside was all echo. Every room had a corner that pointed back at her mistake. Even the clock over the stove had a sharper click, as if it kept count against her.

She tipped forward and gripped the step with both hands. Wood caught her palms, splinter rough where the paint had started to lift. She let the sting sit with her. The night pressed in. In the pines a katydid answered the cicadas like it had an argument with them and couldn’t stop making its point. She closed her eyes and the sound of the music came up, the heat of a mouth she shouldn’t have known. She didn’t go any farther into that memory. She wouldn’t give it detail. She drew back from it the way a hand draws back from a hot pan.

Her jaw ached. She had been clenching without meaning to. She rolled it once and then set her teeth to her bottom lip and bit down, harder, then harder again until the skin gave a little and the taste of blood bloomed small and copper. She didn’t spit. She let it sit on her tongue until it faded to plain. Her chest hitched. She put her forehead to her palms and breathed into the cage of her arms.

The porch light flickered once and steadied. A truck passed far off and the bass from it bounced along the road, a muffled thump that faded into the trees. She thought of the way she had kept count. Eight years and a day. Eight years and a night and a few minutes more. Numbers didn’t help. They only made a thin little frame around something that wouldn’t be held. The ring cut a half moon into her finger. She liked the proof of pressure left behind. She pressed again to deepen it. She wanted a mark that would last past morning.

Her shoulders shook before the sound came. She tried to swallow it down, the first of it, and then it broke out of her anyway, a rough catch in the throat that turned to a sob and then a string of them it was no use to fight. She hunched over and let it take her for a moment, breath hitching, mouth open on air that felt too warm to breathe. Tears stung the cracks in her lips. Her hands covered her face. She didn’t lift her head.

When the worst of it passed she stayed folded and spoke into her palms, voice small and raw, the twang of home cutting through even with the whisper.

“God forgive me.”
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Post by djp73 » 27 Oct 2025, 16:08

Caesar wrote:
25 Oct 2025, 19:30
“It looked fun. Show me?”
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Post by redsox907 » 27 Oct 2025, 17:52

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25 Oct 2025, 19:30
She lowered the phone, blinked sweat out of her eyes, and leaned her weight into the ladder so it didn’t chatter against the drywall. Another Tommy told her he was going to get fixed. Another thing she had patched together instead. Another thing she’d have to patch together again.
Woman is in a loveless marriage. Hate to see it. Shes just holding on out of pride.

But that last paragraph makes it seem like Caine ain't the first :hmm: She definitely didn't handle it like it was her first time stepping out. She knew what she was doing with that show me line.

Also, Caine mad dumb. Laney says don't fuck the help, so he says iight bet I'll fuck you and your sister :dead:

Nina asking a cold blooded killer for help then acting confused when Ramon says he going to handle it his way :fml:

Mireya's friends catching on that she on some extra shit, but still to good to let a dude eat her ass for money eh?? We all know she getting there one day :curtain:
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Post by Caesar » 27 Oct 2025, 23:03

djp73 wrote:
27 Oct 2025, 16:08
Caesar wrote:
25 Oct 2025, 19:30
“It looked fun. Show me?”
:mmcht:
:whatido:
redsox907 wrote:
27 Oct 2025, 17:52
Caesar wrote:
25 Oct 2025, 19:30
She lowered the phone, blinked sweat out of her eyes, and leaned her weight into the ladder so it didn’t chatter against the drywall. Another Tommy told her he was going to get fixed. Another thing she had patched together instead. Another thing she’d have to patch together again.
Woman is in a loveless marriage. Hate to see it. Shes just holding on out of pride.

But that last paragraph makes it seem like Caine ain't the first :hmm: She definitely didn't handle it like it was her first time stepping out. She knew what she was doing with that show me line.

Also, Caine mad dumb. Laney says don't fuck the help, so he says iight bet I'll fuck you and your sister :dead:

Nina asking a cold blooded killer for help then acting confused when Ramon says he going to handle it his way :fml:

Mireya's friends catching on that she on some extra shit, but still to good to let a dude eat her ass for money eh?? We all know she getting there one day :curtain:
We'll have to find out if she's done this before or maybe she's done THIS before and never gone further or maybe she's considered it or maybe this is the old Laney coming out for a second.... We'll have to see :hmm:

Caine ain't nothing if not a rule follower :bazechief:

Cut her some slack. She also don't know that there is some gang beef there.

You want her to sell hole so bad to justify this hate you been throwing at her for 100 chapters! :smh:
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The Devil Don’t Rest, God Does

Caine slid the Buick into a slot and shut it down. The heat climbed in fast once the air cut off. August had the lot humming—engines ticking, a cart whining past, somebody laughing too loud across the rows. He stepped out with his bag and shouldered the strap.

“Boy I thought you was gonna skip the first day,” Dwight called, angling over with a grin and falling into step. “On some I ain’t come to play school shit.”

“Motherfucker you stupid,” Caine said, easy.

“You ready for Friday?” Dwight asked. “Scrimmage where niggas earn that spot.”

Caine rolled his shoulders. “I been with the ones all week. I ain’t worried about what happen in a scrimmage.”

“Talk that shit then, my nigga,” Dwight said, laughing. “What you really gotta be worried about is all the white hoes throwing hole at you when you start balling. Both holes. Any hole. Bitches love quarterbacks.”

Caine shook his head, a small smile there and gone. “I ain’t worried about none of that neither. That’s all you, my guy.”

They moved with the crowd. The bookstore sat ahead, glass bright, a line bending under the awning. A girl pushed out hugging a stack of textbooks, air-conditioning spilling around her for a second before the door sighed shut. Caine shifted toward it.

“Where you going?” Dwight asked.

“Bookstore. Get my shit.”

Dwight clicked his tongue. “C’mon, bruh. I know we SBC not SEC, but they already got that for you at the ops center. You ain’t read the email?”

“Nah,” Caine said. “I been busy.”

Dwight’s laugh turned low and messy. “Too busy fucking on that lil’ baddie you be running with, huh? I see you, big bro.”

Caine didn’t feed it. The crowd thinned a little past the bookstore. Shade cut across the walk for half a dozen steps and then the sun took it back. A bike rattled by with a milk crate zip-tied on, a bag thumping inside. A golf cart hummed toward a service lane and vanished behind hedges.

“I’m straight,” Caine said.

They pivoted away from the line and the glass. The campus was neat and bright. Pines, trimmed grass, flyers for club day taped crooked to a board. Somebody’s playlist leaked out of a window and then hiccuped.

“You ain’t fuck around and schedule your classes before the advisers did, huh? Bunch of freshmen did that shit last year and ended up at this bitch everyday.”

“Nah,” Caine said. “I read that email.”

“Aplin wasn’t going to let his quarterback be wasting no time in class anyway. He would’ve gone up to student affairs himself to fix that.”

“Wasn’t you just asking me if I was ready for the scrimmage?”

Dwight laughed and let it ride. “Hey, bro, my money been on you,” he said, circling back. “Black excellence and all that.”

“Well make sure you ‘accidentally’ let someone hit Weston then.”

They cut through a breezeway, the air cooler for a breath. The brick threw heat back at their arms when they stepped out again. Two freshmen hurried past clutching course packets, keys jangling. One of them glanced at Caine’s bag and kept moving.

“So, you gonna get you a new thing now that campus full,” Dwight said. “Or you sticking with ol’ girl?”

Caine kept his face even. He hadn’t spent much thought on Rylee, not with everything that had happened with Laney. The thought brushed past and left quiet behind it.

“I gotta leave some for you, man,” Caine said, shoving him.

“If I ain’t know,” Dwight said. “I’d say you scared of pussy for saying some shit like that.”

Caine snorted a laugh. “Man, watch out with that shit. Could never be me.”

They reached the cut through the hedges and took it, steps synced without planning. The glass doors of the ops center were still a little ways off, wide and clean and throwing back white sky. A short breeze slid across the walk and died.

They stayed on the path, both of them angling the same direction, sun at their backs, the athletic facilities up ahead and waiting.

~~~

The bookstore line curled around a display of hoodies and moved in small, stubborn inches. Fluorescents hummed. AC pushed and fell short against the heat of too many bodies. Mireya stood at the back with her class list folded flat between her fingers. She already knew what the totals would do. She had checked earlier in the week, scrolling past used and new, watching the sum step up. Tuition had cleared. Camila’s daycare had gone up. The summer nest egg she’d built had dents in it she didn’t like.

Up near the counter, a barcode scanner beeped in short bursts. Someone argued about an access code. A cart squeaked by with shrink-wrapped bundles stacked to the edge and a section number taped to the side.

A guy stepped into place behind her. White boy dressed like he was auditioning for a Starz show, a chain catching flashes from the lights. He leaned a little and aimed his voice at her shoulder.

“This been moving fast?”

She shook her head. “It hasn’t.”

“Figures,” he said. “It was like this last year too. I think they been firing all the people working in here.”

She glanced back. He had the bright grin of someone who made small talk wherever he landed. She gave him a polite smile and faced forward.

“I’m Jordan,” he said after a second. He looked her over once and eased off. “You gotta be new. I would’ve remembered you around campus.”

“Mireya,” she said. “Yeah, I’m a freshman.”

“That’s what’s up.” He shifted, checked the counter, then back to her. “There’s gonna be all kinds of dope parties this weekend. Back-to-school stuff. Teach freshmen about the real New Orleans.”

She let a small chuckle out. “I’m from New Orleans.”

“Well, shit,” he said, laughing at himself. “Guess you heard I’m not as soon as I opened my mouth.”

“Yeah,” she said, a little shrug.

“Am I gonna see you at any of the parties?”

“No. I’ll be working this weekend.”

“That sucks,” he said, ready to add something else.

“Jordan!” someone called from an aisle over.

He turned. The other guy lifted his chin and pointed toward a rack of tees. Jordan looked back to her.

“I’ll see you around,” he said, stepping out of the line.

She lifted her fingers in a small wave and let the space close. The line breathed forward. A longboard clacked against tile near the door when a freshman lost the hold, wheels rattling until he caught it again. Nobody stared.

Her phone buzzed. Angela and Paz had dropped a photo in the group chat—both of them on the Loyola quad with lanyards and sun in their eyes, grinning into the camera. She tapped the heart, watched it pop on the picture, and let the screen go dark.

The line crept. A worker pushed a cart to the counter and locked the wheels with a plastic snap. The AC kicked stronger and faded. Mireya unfolded her list again, thumb following course numbers she already knew by shape.

When she reached the front, the worker didn’t look up right away. Badge on a lanyard, pen tucked behind an ear, tired voice.

“Class list?”

Mireya slid the paper across.

“Okay,” the worker said, eyes moving down the codes. She clipped the list to a board and pulled the waiting cart closer. “Be right back.”

Plastic tore. Boxes opened. Mireya kept her hand on the edge of the counter, surface cool under her fingers. The receipt printer chattered for someone else. A boy at the next station asked about used copies and the answer told him no without saying much.

The worker returned with a short box balanced against her hip. Titles stacked neat, a lab manual on top with a spiral already bent at the corner. She checked off each line, then turned a small screen toward Mireya.

“That’s everything.” The number glowed. $645.

Mireya took her debit card from the back slot of her wallet and slid it into the reader. The machine chirped and thought. She breathed out through her nose. The line behind her pressed and settled.

Approved flashed. She pulled her card and let a quiet sigh leave her chest.

~~~

The school’s multipurpose room hummed under tired lights. Folding chairs scraped. A jug of lemonade sweated on a plastic table no one touched. Laney sat near the end of a row, half in the wall’s shadow. She had chosen the ankle-length dress that hid shape and the neckline that stayed close at her throat. No earrings. No bracelet. The only shine was the small cross her daddy had given her and the gold band she couldn’t stop turning.

At the front, voices braided and pulled. A mother waved a printout about late emails. Another drew a map in the air for a better car line. Someone else insisted the snack list be “healthier, but also fun,” and then argued with herself about brands. The talk circled. It wasn’t about learning. It was about control.

Laney kept her hands in her lap, fingers steady except for the ring rolling under her thumb. She pressed the edge into her skin until a pale crescent rose. When somebody glanced her way, she lifted a small, polite smile and dipped her chin. When their eyes moved on, her face went quiet. She made a second mark beside the first, then stilled.

Cold air rattled from a vent that didn’t reach the back. The room smelled like cleaner and dry erase. A bulletin board curled at one corner, last year’s art fading under pushpins. A woman clapped once for order. The noise only shifted shape. Laney watched the minute hand crawl and breathed even.

The end came in shuffles. Purses snapped shut. Chairs folded. Voices carried into the hall. Laney stayed seated until the row cleared and the heat thinned, then rose, smoothing her dress.

Mere and Caitlin turned from the door and walked to her with fixed smiles. Laney set her own. Her thumb found the ring and stilled.

“Laney, hey,” Mere said. “You think you could organize the bake sale for next week?”

“Absolutely,” Laney said, soft and steady. “I’d be happy to.”

“Girl, thank you,” Caitlin said, leaning close, hairspray sharp in the air. “’Cause me and Elroy tryin’ for another and I gotta strike while the iron is hot, you know?”

Laney nodded once. The smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Mm-hm,” she said. “I’m glad for y’all. Children’re a blessin’.”

Mere’s gaze dipped to the cross at Laney’s collarbone, then back. “Well, we’re gonna let you go. I know that house is a lot to tidy up behind them boys.”

“Yes, ma’am,” Laney said, the rural drawl tucked under the words. “Reckon I better get on.”

They touched her forearm and turned away, already talking about sign-up sheets and whether store-bought counted if you moved it to your own plate. Their voices bled into the last clatter of chairs.

Laney stood a moment longer, letting the smile fall and then setting it back for the walk out. The cross lay warm against her skin. She gathered her tote and stepped into the hallway where fluorescent lights hummed and student art lined the walls. A flyer asked for exact change for field trips. “Evenin’,” someone said from a doorway. “Evenin’,” she answered, country-soft.

Heat pressed at the glass doors. The parking lot held a line of bright hoods and big vehicles. She had parked on the far row, past the shade, where no one could box her in. More steps. More space. She took them with her chin level and shoulders square, the dress whispering at her ankles.

Two mothers traded recipes by the curb. Laney tipped her head without stopping. “Y’all have a good one,” she said, vowels long. The ring rolled under her thumb. A sting rose where she’d pressed it earlier. She rubbed across it and kept walking.

The rows thinned. Her van waited in the last slot, metal hot. She tightened the tote strap in one hand. With the other she turned the ring, the gold catching the sun and throwing it back. She paused by the passenger door, face composed the way she kept it for school and church, and let the small ache in her finger settle.

Then she squared her shoulders and started around to the driver’s side, steps neat and stiff, twisting her wedding ring. Nails digging white lines into her finger.

~~~

The line at the door dragged behind them, but once they got through the stamp and the half-hearted pat down, the room opened into noise and heat. The first day back had doubled the bodies since summer. Shoulders bumped. Phones lit faces. Music thumped off metal signs on the wall and turned every conversation into a lean-in.

Caine clocked the extra heads on instinct, the flow from the bar to the tables and back, then let his shoulders settle. He felt the week slide off him in pieces. On-campus was done until next week. The rest lived on a laptop.

“Y’all see this shit?” Donnie said, pushing through with his chin up like he was parting water. “Shit get more and more packed every year.”

Dwight laughed. “Bitch you only been here a year. What you know?”

They slid in and made space with elbows. Two stools, then standing room, then another stool that Jaylen pulled from a table nobody was defending. The bartenders moved like they were late for something. Caine put cash down and didn’t bother trying to get fancy with the order. Cups showed up sweating. The first sip cooled his mouth and went warm in his chest.

“I ain’t gonna lie,” Donnie said, already talking with his hands. “I know I was talking shit all summer but I’m trying to be out on that field for real now.”

Caine smiled. “Who got NIL money?”

Dwight leaned in so he didn’t have to shout. “Dallas and Josh.”

“That’s what I thought.” Caine lifted his cup.

“Must be nice,” Jaylen said. “Even though I know they ain’t got much.”

“Shit,” Donnie said. “Better than nothing.”

They laughed. A group of girls edged by, glitter on cheeks, somebody’s perfume cutting through the beer and fryer smell. Rylee was among them, hair curled at the ends, the kind of top that turned heads and made her grin when she noticed. She tipped her chin at Caine without stopping, then leaned on the bar two bodies down and flagged a bartender.

“Ain’t that yo bitch,” Dwight said, smirking.

Caine didn’t answer. Rylee tossed him a look over her shoulder and mouthed something he didn’t catch. The sound swallowed detail. The twang in her laugh carried anyway, a long vowel that tugged at something he didn’t want to think about. Laney lived inside that same sound without the sugar. He sipped his drink again.

Rylee slid back with drinks for her friends and bumped his hip with hers as she passed. “You hidin’ from me?” she shouted up at him.

“I ain’t hard to find,” he said. It came out easy.

She smiled, then saw a tall dude in a polo trying too hard and veered to a stop in front of him. “Where you from?” she asked the guy, voice bright as a porch light. He said Atlanta. She said, “Say somethin’ then,” and touched his arm with two fingers and a promise. The dude beamed. She laughed and moved on when her friend’s hand closed around her wrist to drag her into a picture.

Rylee drifted back, set one of her drinks right in front of him that wasn’t the one he ordered, all lime and fizz.

“Try it,” she said. “Tastes better.”

He raised an eyebrow. “I don’t know where your mouth been.”

She rolled her eyes. “You comin’ with me Saturday. They doin’ a big cookout.”

“Got a scrimmage,” he said.

She rolled her eyes. “Y’all always got practice.” Her mouth softened. “Text me if you come.” Then she was tugged away again by a girl in braids. Rylee let herself be pulled and still found space to throw a line at a guy squeezing by with a pitcher. “You spill that on me, I’m sendin’ you my dry cleanin’ bill,” she said, and made him laugh just for the music of it.

“Man,” Jaylen said, shaking his head. “That girl a problem.”

Donnie chuckled. “She a solution if you ask me.”

The room swelled and thinned as songs changed. A chant started by the far wall and went nowhere. A guy in a backwards cap tried to start a pool game with the wrong ball. Somebody sang the wrong hook with maximum confidence. Caine settled into the kind of quiet that fit right inside the loud. He let the talk go around him and gave enough back to stay in it.

Dwight told a story about sleeping through a quiz and waking up to the professor staring at him. Keanon put a bet on the table about who would get the most drunk after the first win. Jaylen tried to recruit a girl in a denim jacket to join said outing, and she rolled her eyes so hard he laughed at himself.

Rylee swung through again, brushed Caine’s shoulder with the back of her hand. “You bein’ borin’ tonight?”

“I’m straight.”

“Mm.” She side-eyed him. “You too cool now, huh?”

“Always been.” That got a small grin out of her. It was easy to give back.

She started to say something else and a guy called her name. She threw Caine an exaggerated sigh and went to see about it. He watched the back of her head for a breath and saw Laney where the vowels stretched. Not the clothes. Just the shape of the way words sat. He let it pass and put his attention back on the table.

The crowd kept rolling. The night did what nights do. Rylee’s laugh cut across the room one more time, that Georgia country bending the end of the sentence until it reached him.

He didn’t say a thing.

~~~

The bass pressed through the room and turned the tables into drums. Mireya slid between chairs with her palms open and easy, Luna sitting in her mouth, the way she walked and in the way she let her shoulders rest. Dollar flashes moved in the air, lazy as gnats. Someone laughed too loud by the rail. Her heels kissed the floor and kept time.

Boogie caught her eye and lifted his chin from a corner booth. The grin said he felt at home here. He tapped the laminate twice and spread his knees like he’d been waiting.

She leaned in just enough. “You want a dance, papi?” The words soft, breath warm against his ear.

Boogie slapped two twenties on the table with the heel of his hand. “Nah, in a bit. Come talk to a nigga for a minute. You know I like that lil’ accent. Shit sexy.”

Mireya smiled and slid into the booth, angling her hips. She laid her legs across his lap and let her ankle settle over his thigh. The money sat where he’d left it. She used two fingers to pull the bills across to the far side, neat and casual, then turned back to him. “How was your trip to Miami?”

He laughed, head tipping back, golds catching the light. “See, that’s why you my favorite. You remember the shit I be saying. It was straight. The bitches bad out there, but I like my Louisiana bitches, too.”

His hand found the line of her thigh and rubbed slow. She didn’t flinch. Luna smiled for him and let the beat do half the work. “Hopefully you didn’t spend all your money out there and got some left for me.”

He reached into his pocket and pulled a small roll. Rubber bit the paper. “I got you, baby girl.”

The music switched tracks, a sharper snare tucked beneath the bass. Voices spiked and fell near the bar. Mireya adjusted her legs on his lap, the movement practiced and light.

Boogie tapped the roll against his knee. “You know my nigga June came see y’all last week and said this shit I had to come find out about, because I’m tryna get the same thing.”

Mireya let her breath float. She rested an elbow on the booth back, leaned in as if he whispered secrets. “What’s that, papi?”

“He said your girl, what’s her name? Snow or some shit?” He made a little circle with his hand. “Said she suck a mean dick in the back.”

Her smile didn’t move. The eyes carried it where it needed to go. “That’s something you gotta ask her about, baby.”

Boogie shook his head. “No, I’m asking ’bout you. I don’t like no blondes.” His gaze stayed steady. “What you do?” He shook the roll again, paper soft against his fingers. “I got money.”

She let her eyes drop to the money for half a second, then lifted them to his face. “That’s not my thing.” The words sat pretty, not hard.

“Fuck, man.” He grinned anyway, the kind that said he wasn’t mad yet. “You gonna let me know if you change your mind on that?”

Mireya winked, a clean flick. “You’ll be the first one to know, baby.”

He hummed and let the question slide. The hand on her leg stayed, thumb making lazy shapes against her skin. He started talking about his cousin who stayed messing up a bag and calling for rides, about a bet that hit on a preseason game. She nodded at the right spots. Laughed once, low. “Mmm. Qué tonto,” she said when he told the cousin story, and he liked the sound of that even if he didn’t know what she said, his smile widening.

C.J. dipped into a customer’s lap two tables over, hair moving to the beat. A stack of ones toppled and got rebuilt without comment. The AC worked, but the room still ran warm. Sweat set down at the back of Mireya’s neck and at her back. She shifted her weight a little on Boogie’s lap, just enough to keep the blood moving.

Alejandra came through the aisle. She was counting the room without looking at it. As she passed, her eyes met Mireya’s. “Elige la feria,” she said over the music, quick and bright.

Mireya’s lashes lowered once. A no. She turned back to Boogie and smoothed her palm along the side of his shoulder for the conversation he was still in the middle of. He didn’t miss a beat.

“She bad, too,” Boogie said, pointing with his chin toward Alejandra’s back as it faded into the next pocket of light. “All you Latinas in here. Badder than a motherfucker. Love when y’all be speaking that Spanish.”

Mireya smiled. She let it hang there, tidy and done, and tapped the table once with her nail like a small bell.

Boogie’s hand traced up and down her shin, slow. “You know I ain’t go crazy in Miami like I could. Stayed out the way. Saved some for you.” He thumbed the edge of the roll, peeled the top bill free, set it on the table beside the two twenties he’d already dropped. A small show. “You know what I’m sayin’?”

She glanced at the new bill and then back at him, eyes warm. “You talk a lot,” she said, voice easy, teasing him because he wanted to be teased. “You want that dance now or you gonna keep telling me about Miami?”

He laughed and slapped the table once, palm stinging the air. “Aight, you got it.” But he didn’t move yet. He wasn’t done enjoying the sit. His hand settled on her thigh, fingers spread like he owned the space and knew he didn’t.

The bass kept its slow punch. Air moved across her skin when the door opened somewhere near the front and let the night in for a second before it shut. Boogie’s thumb made another lazy circle and then stilled.

She breathed in, let Luna hold the room the way she always did, and waited until he’d got his $40 worth of conversation.

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Post by redsox907 » 28 Oct 2025, 02:23

Caesar wrote:
27 Oct 2025, 23:03
You want her to sell hole so bad to justify this hate you been throwing at her for 100 chapters!
the only thing I hate is how she acts better than it, until she can justify it as a means to an end, do said act, then act like its beneath her again.

She want to sell hole? More power to her. But don't act like her new friends have corrupt morales when we know she's done the same thing before and probably for less money lol

Anyway

Caine boo tripping on Laney :smh: hate to see it gonna have his pick of the litter once he starts dropping dimes on the field, not to mention Rylee's crazy ass, but he'd rather get caught up in the married pussy with a whole ass man that he don't know if she'll actually leave

at least that boy Brice be smashing his hoes, Caine can't get more than a kiss from the one he really wants :smh:
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Post by Soapy » 28 Oct 2025, 07:10

called us crazy when we called this shit weeks ago

never wrong, just early
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