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Post by Caesar » 16 Oct 2025, 07:36

Every Time I Turn Around, He’s Blocking My Way

The grass in Trent’s yard stayed patchy even after the last rain. Dirt kicked up when they dragged the plastic chairs into a crooked triangle near the busted grill. A box fan in the window rattled but didn’t push real air. The heat sat on them anyway. Mosquitoes found ankles. Somewhere, a siren wound past and faded under a passing streetcar’s ring.

Trent leaned back until the chair popped and then eased forward again so it wouldn’t crack. “Whole summer,” he said, toe nudging a bottle cap into the dust, “and nothing.”

Javi lay stretched on the other chair, an arm thrown over his eyes. “Because it’s boring as fuck.”

Saul had his phone in his palm, head down, thumb idle on a dead screen. He didn’t look up until Javi said, “That’s ’cause Saul ran off all the hoes.”

Saul snorted and lifted his eyes over the phone. “The only girls we’d have hanging out with us was Mia and Zoe,” he said. “That’s two girls and three of us. I see a math problem.”

Javi grinned without moving his arm. “Not if Mia was down with getting flipped. Which she could’ve been if you ain’t scare off the hoes.”

Saul sucked his teeth. “If Mia was down for that, she would’ve did it.”

Trent made a face and shook his head. “I don’t think I’d be into doing that anyway.”

Javi dropped his arm and shoved Trent’s shoulder, not hard, just enough to make the chair skid an inch. “That’s the type of pussy ass shit I expect you to say.”

Trent righted the chair and went quiet. The fan rattled again and settled. Somewhere next door a dog barked like it was tired of hearing itself.

Saul laughed once and then let it go. “Man, we need a car,” he said. “So we can get out of New Orleans and shit.”

Trent stared at him. “You got car money?”

“It don’t gotta be a Hellcat,” Saul said.

“I’m not about to be caught in no trash ass car,” Javi said, sitting up now, chain catching the light before the sun dipped behind a cloud.

“So, you’d rather be caught on the bus?” Saul said.

Javi shrugged, mouth twisting. He didn’t argue.

The yard smelled like cut grass and hot plastic. A neighbor’s fryer burped grease. The light through the fence slats drew lines across the dirt, ants walking them like it was a job.

Saul flicked his phone awake and wiped a thumb across the screen. “I got a few hundred I could spare,” he said.

Trent sat forward. “You serious?”

Saul nodded, eyes on the phone now for real. “It ain’t like other people don’t share cars.”

Javi cleared his throat, thinking out loud without giving anybody the credit. “It’d be better to be able to get around when I want.”

Trent scratched at a mosquito bite on his calf. “I got like two hundred,” he said.

They let that number sit. Wind moved the low oak leaves and then quit. A moped growled past on the street and blew a sweet trail of smoke over the fence. Javi swatted the air like he could move the smell.

Saul opened Facebook Marketplace and started the hunt for a cheap car.

~~~

Angela and Paz’s new place smelled like lemon cleaner and cardboard. Hum pressed through the screens, heat sneaking in around the window unit’s cough. Mireya shifted the strap of her tote higher on her shoulder and knocked, hip set, thighs bare where the shorts cut high, top pulling her chest up appreciatively.

The lock clicked. Angela cracked the door, eyes running head to ankle and back with a grin already forming.

“Bitch, since when you started wearing shit like that?”

Mireya lifted one shoulder, breezing past her into the cool. “Laundry day.”

“Mm-hmm,” Angela said, letting the door scrape shut with her foot. “Convenient.”

Paz sat on the couch with a pair of scissors and a roll of contact paper, knees pinning a stack of flattened IKEA instructions. She looked over her shoulder as Mireya came in. One eyebrow went up, the slow type of judgment that didn’t bother dressing itself.

“That’s nice,” Paz said. “Expensive, but nice.”

Mireya sank into the armchair across from them, crossing her legs. “Good thing it was a gift.”

Angela nudged Paz with her elbow, laugh ready. “Look, she got a man paying for her shit already. Caine ain’t been gone but two minutes.”

Paz’s mouth tugged into a smile that stopped halfway. The joke set but didn’t land. She looked back down, cutting the tape with a careful zip that said she was thinking about other conversations, other little flags that added up to a picture.

Mireya let her eyes travel the room. “Y’all really made this place look good.”

It was mid-renovation pretty. A throw draped over an old couch like a disguise. Two plants trying to recover from a move. The fan on the bookshelf clicking once every few turns. Through the thin window, a bus sighed and pulled off, heat shimmying over the street like it belonged there.

Angela flopped beside Paz. “I didn’t know landlords were so damn strict about this. All I wanted to do was paint one wall and that old ass white man about had a heart attack.”

Mireya shook her head. “Couldn’t be me. I wouldn’t even joke about painting. But a company in Florida owns my place. They’d send me a letter just for asking.”

“Figures,” Angela said, rolling her eyes.

Paz cut a square of liner and pressed it into a drawer she’d dragged onto the coffee table. “Heard you quit the boutique,” she said, voice neutral on the surface, something sharper under it. “The new job must be paying you really good.”

Mireya felt the look before she met it. She gave a slow nod. “Yeah. I moved to full-time. We get overtime every week, too.”

“And you still got that other job,” Paz said, not lifting her eyes.

Mireya let the question hang in the air like it wasn’t a question. She lifted her water from the side table and took a small sip. “Yeah.”

Angela waved a hand through the space between them the way you fan smoke off a stove. “Okay, okay. If the back of your closet is starting to look like that”—she pointed at the outfit, grin returning—“then you need to start sharing your clothes with us again.”

Mireya laughed, tension loosening by an inch. “I don’t know if we all wear the same size still.”

“I can make it work,” Angela said, already standing to measure imaginary hems against her waist.

The AC hiccuped and pushed a tired string of cold that died near the kitchen doorway. A pan clanged in the sink where somebody had left noodles to starch up. Outside, a siren turned on itself and kept going until it faded behind buildings.

Mireya felt the room again—tighter now, warmer. She pushed a strand of hair behind her ear and caught Paz watching, the scissors idle, the stare direct and quiet.

Angela kept talking, asking about what else she had hiding in the closet.

Mireya’s gaze slid back to Paz. The smile from earlier hadn’t returned. Paz’s eyes stayed on her, steady, measuring. Mireya held the look just long enough to register it and then turned her attention to the window, to the stripe of sun edging the sill, to the city doing what it always did—breathing, taking, asking.

Mireya didn’t move. She glanced at Paz one more time. Paz was still staring.

~~~

Laney sat in a camp chair with the faded mesh biting the backs of her thighs through her jeans, the heat slicking her shirt to her lower back. The grill popped and sighed in the no-fence stretch of backyard that was hers and Caleb’s together, smoke lifting and flattening when the breeze got lazy. She held a sweating wine cooler by the neck. Two sips were gone. The rest had warmed to syrupy.

Caleb stood over the grill with Tommy, Marcus, and Daniel, each with a pair of tongs like that made them official. Tommy handled the meat with that clean, quiet way he did everything. Flip, set, lid down. No extra talk. Caleb talked enough for both of them, cap backwards, laughing at his own joke before anyone else caught it.

On the patio, Gabrielle leaned toward Bri, telling the Augusta story she always told when the sun got good and the bugs started making themselves known. “I had to get out,” she said, teeth bright, wrist cutting little shapes in the air. “Atlanta let me breathe a little.”

Bri laughed into her cup. “We tried to stay in Tallahassee for a minute.” She wrinkled her nose. “Didn’t take. I said, ‘Nope,’ and brought my behind back home soon as we got married.”

Aisha had her sandals hooked on two fingers, toes cooling in the grass. She peered over her shoulder at Laney. “Didn’t you get a scholarship back in high school? For softball, right? I swear I remember that when I was a freshman.”

Laney tipped the bottle to her mouth and let a small swallow sit on her tongue before she gave a nod. “Mm-hmm.”

Gabrielle turned, eyebrows up. “I didn’t know you played sports, girl. You never struck me as the type. You been holding out!”

Laney rolled one shoulder.

At the grill, Caleb didn’t look up, just spoke through the lid smoke. “That’s because Laney was too dumb to go to college.” Then, to Tommy, a grin sharpened, “No offense, bro.”

Tommy didn’t answer. He glanced over once at Laney, a look that held and said nothing, then settled the tongs again, pulling a line of burgers to the hotter side.

Laney let the bottle rest against the chair arm. The cicadas pressed in. Somewhere next door a dog barked and a cat screamed.

“What schools?” Bri asked. “You had to have a few.”

Laney shifted, the chair creaking. “GT, UGA, Oklahoma, UT, Florida, Clemson, FSU, Oregon.” She lifted the bottle, took a barely-there sip. “A bunch of other ones, too.”

Daniel snorted and elbowed Tommy like they were closer than they were. “You could’ve had one of them wives everybody on X stay lusting over.”

Tommy lifted an eyebrow. The man’s laugh died by itself.

“Where were you gonna go?” Gabrielle asked, bright again, like she was ready to plan a life that didn’t happen. She cut her eyes at Caleb. “You never told me Laney could’ve gone to school with us.”

Laney stared at the bead of condensation sliding down the label. “GT or UGA,” she said, voice low.

Gabrielle aimed it back at the grill. “Well?”

Caleb flipped a burger that didn’t need flipping. “Because she didn’t.” He pointed with the tongs across the smoke line toward Laney and Tommy. “They were married by the time I graduated.”

Aisha flashed Laney a sweet smile that didn’t land right. “Well, nothing wrong with getting yourself a good man and raising a family instead.”

Laney tipped the bottle back and finished it in two quick gulps. Sweet stuck at the back of her throat. She stood, the chair scraping the concrete pad. The men didn’t break their formation. Grease hissed. A drop fell and flared. Tommy’s hand shifted to move the steak without looking like he was hurrying it, discipline even with heat in his face.

Gabrielle and Bri went back to their college talk, Atlanta and traffic and the restaurants that closed before they were ready to leave. Daniel said something to Marcus about the price of brisket and got an amen. Caleb held the lid with his forearm and cracked it to show flame, proud of fire like he made it himself.

Laney brushed a mosquito off her forearm and glanced across the yard where the boys had turned the empty flower bed into a basepath, dust kicked up and sticking to their calves. A head-first slide ended with a skinned elbow and a triumphant yell. She felt the sound in her chest before she heard it.

She moved closer to the grill, the heat slick on her arm as she leaned toward Tommy. “You need me to bring anythin’ out?” Her voice stayed easy.

Caleb waved her off. “We got it.”

Tommy finally looked at her again, a half beat longer than before. His face didn’t change, but his eyes took quick inventory—her bottle gone, the way she had set her mouth. He adjusted the vent on the lid and set the tongs down in their place.

Laney angled her body so only he would hear her. “I’m gon’ check on the boys,” she muttered, and started toward the basepath.

~~~

The bar’s lights ran low and tired. Neon buzzed near the jukebox, a thin hum under the rasp of the ice machine and the soft scrape of a barstool two tables over. Caine sat in the back corner with his forearm on the sticky table, glass sweating into a ring. His second drink sat barely touched. He rolled the cold against his palm and watched Rylee shoot hers back, face scrunching on the burn, then tap the empty shot glass heel-down, satisfied.

“Slow down,” he said, voice easy.

Rylee set the glass on its side and blinked at him, then waved the bartender with two fingers. “I’m good.”

“You good?” His eyebrow tipped up. He held her stare, steady, amused.

“Yeah.” She let her head sink into the booth cushion, hair slipping over her shoulder. “’Cept Ainsley out here causin’ shit.”

Caine took a small drink, let it sit on his tongue before he swallowed. “What kind of shit?”

“She swear I want her man.” Rylee checked a thumbnail, then looked at him again. “Like I got time for that. She postin’ all vague on her story, actin’ like I’m thirsty.”

He laughed. It slid out quick and low.

She smacked his arm with the back of her hand. “What you laughin’ at?”

“Because who gives a fuck?” He tilted his head, mouth slanting.

“I do,” she said, sitting up straighter. “I might be a lotta things, but I ain’t runnin’ behind nobody else’s man.”

He set his glass down and moved it an inch, then another, lining the water ring to the edge of the coaster. “This shit some first world problems.”

“Well, I live in the fuckin’ first world, Caine.” She stared at him like she wanted him to push. Her cheeks held a slow heat from the liquor.

He lifted both hands off the table, palms out, lazy surrender. “I’m saying it don’t matter because either you want him or you don’t. And if your friend thinks that, then you ain’t really doing a whole lot to change why she would think you’d do that.”

Rylee’s eyes narrowed. “What’s that s’posed to mean?”

He let a beat pass. The song on the jukebox rolled into another verse nobody asked for. Ice clattered into a metal bin behind the bar. He thought about saying it plain. He let it go.

“It mean you mad about it,” he said, voice flat. “I wouldn’t get mad about no shit I ain’t doing.”

She blinked through it, the liquor softening her edges. “Whatever. You don’t understand what I’m dealin’ with.”

The bartender slid a fresh shot down. Rylee caught it without looking, a clean snatch at the lip, and held it a second. She turned the glass, watching the light run through the amber, then glanced at her phone face-up by the salt shaker. AINSLEY lit the screen and blinked away. Rylee flipped the phone over with a quick tap of her fingernail.

“She been messy all week,” Rylee said, not quite to him. “She post a song, then a quote, then go quiet.”

“Let her,” Caine said.

Rylee sucked her teeth. “Folks swear I’m in they business when I’m mindin’ mine.” She raised the shot, paused, and tapped the rim to the table. “Ain’t even looked at her damn man.”

Caine dragged a napkin through the damp ring and balled it under his thumb. “Then you straight.”

“Mm.” She didn’t agree or disagree. She threw the shot back. The swallow tugged her mouth sideways and she hissed air through her teeth. “Whole friend group actin’ funny”

A couple near the door argued under their breath. The ceiling fan clicked on every third spin. Somewhere oil popped in a fryer even though the kitchen was closed. Rylee set the empty down and bored a groove in the cardboard coaster with her nail. She kept her eyes on that while she talked.

“She text me this morning,” she said. “Said, ‘If you want him just say that.’ I said, ‘Girl, be for real.’ Then she sent a whole paragraph. I ain’t read it.”

“I don’t blame you,” Caine said.

Her laugh came out a breath. “Yeah, alright.”

He shrugged. “You the one mad.”

“I ain’t mad,” she said, then kicked his ankle under the table like she needed the touch to prove it. “I’m annoyed.”

He looked at her foot and back at her face. “Same shit.”

She rolled her eyes and leaned back. The booth cushion sighed. Sweat had beaded where her hair touched her neck and she tucked it up with her fingers, wrist flashing. She watched him watch her and smirked like she won something small.

“You ain’t gon’ tell me I’m right?” she asked.

“You ain’t ask me,” he said.

She chewed the inside of her cheek, then broke into a grin that didn’t stay long.

Her phone buzzed again under her palm. She pressed it still and left it. The bartender drifted near, drying a glass with a rag that had given up. Rylee lifted two fingers without looking his way.

Caine nudged his own glass and took the smallest sip. “You finished?”

“With you?” She snorted. “Please.”

He smiled a little.

She looked at her reflection in the dark window and fixed her gloss with one swipe of her thumb. The neon threw a soft red line over her cheekbone and faded at her jaw. She checked him again, like she wanted to catch judgment and couldn’t find it.

Rylee tapped the rim of her empty shot with one fingernail. The sound was tiny and sharp. She slid out of the booth, a small wobble in her weight shift, and braced a hand on the table to steady herself.

“I’m gonna get ’nother drink,” she said, already turning.

Caine snorted a short laugh through his nose as she walked off, then leaned back and let the neon buzz fill the empty space she left at the table.

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Post by redsox907 » 16 Oct 2025, 14:45

Rylee still messy. Tommy still acting like he's a traditional wife beater. Paz putting 2 & 2 together :hmm:
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Post by Caesar » 17 Oct 2025, 07:37

redsox907 wrote:
16 Oct 2025, 14:45
Rylee still messy. Tommy still acting like he's a traditional wife beater. Paz putting 2 & 2 together :hmm:
Accurate. Is he? Is she?

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Post by Caesar » 17 Oct 2025, 07:37

You Can’t Beat God Taking

The field still held the night on it. Dew sat on the painted numbers and turned the white to gray. Cleats whispered over the rubber pellets and cut quiet lines that closed behind them. Caine checked the laces twice and rolled the ball on his palm until it felt right. His breath came out steady in the not-cool air.

Jaylen jogged a lazy arc and flicked his hand. “We doin’ something or can I go back home to my bitch?”

“Be patient,” Dillon said, yawning. “We ain’t all morning people.”

Terrell set a cone at the top of the numbers and stepped back, hands on hips. “Jaylen talk more than he catch.”

Javier laughed and bounced on his toes. “Throw it then, nigga.”

They started with warms. Hitches, speed outs, the curl at eight. Caine stood near the forty and snapped the ball up to his ear. Feet light. Hips through. He put the first one on Jaylen’s outside shoulder. Jaylen snapped it in and slapped laces back to him without a word.

“Okay,” Femi said, rolling his neck. “I see you. Throw that shit again.”

Caine did. He hit the mark and watched Femi tuck and turn upfield. The tight end moved next. Leon was broad through the chest and ran the seam like he was used to dragging a safety with him. Caine put it early before Leon got crowded. Leon caught it clean and kept running with it all the way to the end line.

“You ain’t nice like that,” Terrell called. “We just started.”

They rotated. Dillon took a set. His first out sailed and hit the turf with a flat thud. All six heads turned slow. Silence held for one beat.

“Hey,” Javier said, face straight. “Put that shit where I ain’t gotta dive for it.”

Dillon grinned and rolled his shoulders. “You should be showing some heart, my guy.”

They talked trash until Dillon’s next ball snapped true. Terrell stepped in and ripped a slant that caught Femi right on the near hip. Femi still juggled it and crashed to a knee.

“Hands like stone,” Terrell said.

Femi stood and pointed at Terrell’s chest. “Put it where it supposed to be and watch me save you.”

“Save him from what,” Jaylen said. “Third team scout defense?”

They ran a stack of digs and comebacks. Sweat showed at the necklines and ran down elbows. The sun moved but it did not get kinder. Caine felt his body loosen in the work. Rhythm settled in without him chasing it. His head stayed clear and his feet followed each other without thinking.

“Back shoulder,” he said, giving Jaylen a look more than words.

“Say less,” Jaylen said, crowding the boundary like he wanted to step out just to spite geometry.

Caine hit his drop and saw the lean. The ball left his hand and checked Jaylen back underneath. Jaylen pinned it and dragged his toe a full yard inside with a grin that said he knew he had room the whole time.

“Got him,” Jaylen said low as he flipped the ball back.

“Route saved him,” Femi said.

“You gonna catch the shit?” Caine asked.

“You already know,” Femi said, already settling his stance.

They ran it again. This time Caine threw it a half tick earlier and Femi let the corner ride him before snapping to the ball. He caught through contact. The corner was only air but Femi played it honest and talked about it the same way.

“Too little,” he said. “Tell ‘em send a real one.”

Leon wiped his forearm and pointed. “Give me a stick to the hash.”

“Bet,” Terrell said, stepping back in. He worked the pocket like it had walls. Leon stuck his foot and came flat. Terrell zipped it and Leon punched up through the nose of the ball.

“He catching shit like them white boys,” Javier said.

“They be on the field, ain’t it?” Leon asked.

They took water from a shared jug and let the quiet sit. A grounds truck rolled by the far gate and kept going. The field smelled like crumb rubber and cut grass. The only shade was a thin line under the uprights that moved while they weren’t looking.

“One more run through,” he said. “Then we out.”

They ran it clean. Quick game. A shot. A screen that let Femi show off his bounce. A seam to Leon that whistled. When they finished, they stood with their hands on their hips and listened to the nothing around them.

Caine rolled the last ball from hand to hand. The sun was up now and the numbers flashed white again. His shirt clung to his back but he barely noticed. He felt the good tired from a morning that had done what it needed to do. Fall camp sat close and it didn’t feel big from here. He had the pace again. He was ready to push and he knew it.

~~~

The front door clicked behind them and the house met them with voices and TV sound riding low through the walls. A pot rattled in the kitchen. Camila wriggled down from Mireya’s hip before the bag hit the floor.

“Go on then,” Mireya said, releasing her hand.

Camila’s little sandals slapped over tile and disappeared toward the living room. Deysi’s high laugh answered, then Katia shushed, then Yanet’s quick whisper that never stayed a whisper. Blocks scraped. A cartoon theme tried to be louder than the girls and failed.

Sara stepped out from the hall, wiped her hands on a dish towel, and looked Mireya over the way mothers do. “You eaten yet?”

Mireya shook her head once. “I’m good. I’ll get something later before I go in.”

Sara made a sound that meant no. She touched Mireya’s elbow and steered her down the short hall without raising her voice. “Sit.”

Mireya didn’t argue. The kitchen heat held onto the morning. A film of steam fogged the window over the sink and slid down in slow beads. She sank into the chair at the table and let the bag slump beside her feet. The chair legs ticked on the tile when she shifted.

Sara lifted a lid. Rice breathed. Oil ticked under another pan. She moved easy, not in a rush, just certain. “How you doing, mija?”

Mireya rolled one shoulder. “Making it. Can’t complain I guess.”

Sara reached into the cupboard, took down a glass, and poured water from the pitcher they kept in the fridge. She set it in front of Mireya. Condensation gathered at once. “Drink.” Then her hand smoothed over Mireya’s hair with two slow passes that made something inside her go quiet. Sara’s palm paused a second longer on the crown, a little pressure, then away.

“You need anything? First months out on your own are hard.”

“I’m managing,” Mireya said. It came out even.

Sara nodded and turned back to the stove. Onion hit heat and sweetened the air, then gave a bite that settled at the back of the throat. Outside a car crawled past, music dragging like the day. The AC pushed a warm breath through the vent and gave up.

“You talked to your mama?” Sara asked, lifting the pan and shaking it once.

“Yeah.” Mireya traced a ring of water on the table with one fingertip. “Another argument about how I’m living my life wrong.”

Sara snorted under her breath. “There aren’t many wrong ways to live life.” She flipped the chicken with the edge of a spoon. The skin stuck against the metal and then gave.

Voices rose and shifted in the living room. Camila squealed, the pitch she saved for when she won something that wasn’t a game. Mireya looked back that way and could see just the edge of the couch and the pile of bright blocks on the floor. Katia’s braid flashed as she raced past the doorway and circled back. Deysi declared a rule. Yanet broke it and laughed like that was the rule.

“I think I need to start bringing her to see Caine more,” Mireya said, eyes still on her daughter. The words left her mouth before she weighed them. They didn’t scare her once they were out.

At the stove, Sara nodded like she’d already been there in her own head. “It’d be good for her,” she said. “For you, too. Not to get back with him. But it’s good when parents can be friends.”

Mireya watched a strand of steam unwind from the pot. Her mind slid to Caine and the things they didn’t say. Leo sat in the space between those thoughts the way a stone sits under water, shape there even when the surface looked smooth. Caine hadn’t said anything on the phone after Ramon did what he did. Maybe he didn’t know. Maybe he did and decided not to reach for it. He could be stubborn about choosing silence.

“I’m going to do her birthday in Georgia,” she said, voice steady. “Around when he starts practice.”

The spoon paused and then moved again.

“I think that’s a good idea.” Sara plated without clatter. Rice first. Beans from a small pot that had been there the whole time, thick with their own weight. Chicken set on top, juices running into the rice. Two sweet plantains landed at the edge, glossed and waiting. She set the plate in front of Mireya and touched her back, a short warm press between the shoulder blades. “We can make a whole family trip of it. Camila would like that.”

Mireya shrugged one shoulder. “I don’t know. She says Statesboro don’t have boats like on the river.” Her mouth tugged, half a smile that she didn’t finish.

Sara laughed, the sound small but full. “Eat,” she said.

Mireya picked up the fork. The first bite of rice and beans loosened her jaw. The oil on the plantain caught the light. She ate in small, practical motions, letting the food do what it did. Sara leaned back against the counter and watched like she always did at the start, making sure the first few bites happened.

~~~

Tyree posted up in the parking lot with the sun biting off the hood lines, palms tucked in his pockets like he wasn’t in a rush for anything. Coi stood in front of him with her bag strap cutting across her chest and that small grin that said she knew exactly where this was going.

“When you gon’ stop playing and let me slide through?” he asked, lighter than the heat.

She shook her head. “You look like you got too many bitches for me.”

“I’m a one-woman man,” he said, hand to his heart like a joke he might try to make true.

Coi laughed, teeth bright. “Then you already got that one bitch.” She angled her chin to go.

A horn chirped twice behind him. Ramon’s sedan idled crooked in the lane, bumper bruised, A/C wheezing. E.J. leaned half his torso out the passenger window so the chain on his neck could catch sun.

“Man, get in. We got shit to do, nigga. C’mon.”

Tyree pointed at Coi like a promise. “I’ma text you.”

E.J. cupped his hands around his mouth and fired off, “Say, love! Holla if you want a real nigga, not this lame ass nigga!”

Coi’s laugh floated back on the heat.

Tyree pulled the door open and slid into the back. “Man, she ain’t your type,” he said, buckling slow. “She not white.”

E.J. swung a lazy punch over the seat that caught all air. “Shut yo bitch ass up.”

Ramon just shook his head and pulled off, one hand on the wheel, one resting on his thigh.

The lot heat peeled away into city air that tasted like metal and fryer oil. They didn’t talk about where they were going. They never needed to. The river showed itself once between buildings and then got swallowed again. Across the bridge the world shifted flatter, more sky than shade.



Music thumped like a heartbeat under the drywall at Trell’s. A couple of Trell’s boys sprawled on couches with girls draped careless over knees, nails bright, laughter loose. The air smelled like sweet smoke and someone’s old cologne fighting bleach.

E.J. dipped his head toward Tyree, voice pitched for him alone. “These look like strippers from out the East.”

Tyree let out a quiet laugh. “Out the east in Jackson probably.”

Ramon clocked the room and let it sit on him without flinching. He caught the eye of a woman by the arm of the couch. She gave him a once-over and went back to her phone. He smiled once, barely.

Dez peeled off a wall, tapped two fingers toward the back. “Come on.”

They followed him down a narrow hall where the light turned yellow and humid. A utility room opened up small and tired—water heater, mop sink, a spread of tools on a dented shelf. Trell stood there with a blunt burning down, smoke moving slow from the corner of his mouth. Ant leaned against the washer with the kind of stillness that made the room feel smaller. Another man, thicker in the shoulders with tired eyes—someone they didn’t know—hovered near the sink. Bump.

On the floor a younger dude lay curled up around his breath. Blood freckled one cheekbone. He kept peeking through his hands like that might change the math.

Trell didn’t change his tone for them. “Where’s my money?”

The kid blinked fast. “I ain’t got it, big bro. I got robbed. On God.”

Ant’s hand came off the washer and landed in the kid’s face twice, quick, knuckles dull against bone. The sound of it thudded in the concrete. The kid’s head snapped and his voice went high and thin. “Please, wait—”

“Where,” Trell asked again, smoke curling. Not louder. Just again.

“Man, I told you. They hit my shit. I can get it, I swear. Give me a—”

Ant didn’t wait for the rest. He sank a short shot to the mouth, then another, then two to the nose so the room filled with tin and the kid tried to crawl into himself. Ramon didn’t move. E.J. set his jaw and watched with the muscles ticking in his cheek. Tyree’s eyes slid to the stacked bleach jugs by the sink.

“Please,” the kid said, palms open like that ever worked. “Please. I’ma get it. Just—”

Trell glanced at Ant. The nod was small. That was all.

Ant stepped forward and started stomping. Heel to cheek. Heel to temple. The first one took the breath out of the room. The next made the floor feel closer. The kid’s arms came up, then didn’t. By the time the third landed, his body went loose in that way that meant he wasn’t there for any more of it.

Silence spread, quick and hot. Somewhere in the front a woman laughed too loud and a bassline rolled through the wall like a reminder the world kept going. Trell exhaled and cut his eyes to Dez, then to the big man in the corner.

“Help Bump clean that shit up.”

Bump nodded once, jaw tight. Dez grabbed the yellow gloves off the shelf and snapped one on with a tired pop.

Trell turned for the back door, the blunt an ember. He slid between Ramon and E.J. without touching them. “Y’all handle our business,” he said, easy like he was offering the weather. “Then come partake in the festivities.”

Ant fell in behind him. As he passed the trio he lifted his chin a fraction, that little look that said move your feet. The back door opened, daylight flashed mean and white, then shut on its own slow hinge.

“It’s crazy in this bitch,” Tyree breathed, half a smile he didn’t mean sitting wrong on his mouth.

Ramon nodded once. “Facts.”

~~~

The rain came down hard enough to blur the lot into a sheet of motion. From the edge of the fellowship hall awning, Caine watched gutters spit water and the cracked asphalt shine a deep brown. The air smelled of wet pine and the sour note that floated up when the red clay turned to soup. He had his keys in his pocket and his bag at his feet, waiting for the kind of break that never came when you needed it.

The church’s bell tower sat pale against a dark sky. Through the glass doors behind him came the echo of mop buckets rolling over tile, someone humming a hymn between the clicks of a light switch. The storm flattened the rest of it. He tugged his cap lower and leaned on the metal post where flaking paint left grit on his palm.

Laney jogged out of the side door with a cardboard box clutched to her chest. The rain caught her before the steps and soaked her hair in a breath. She hunched and made that quick dash people made when they knew running would not help but did it anyway. She cut across the lot toward her van. The wipers were angled mid-screen as if frozen in place. She yanked on the driver door. Nothing. She leaned into the glass, lips moving, a small curse swallowed by the storm. She tried the back door, then the sliding side. Locked, locked.

Caine pushed off the post and cut across to the maintenance shed. Rain hit him sideways and cold through the cotton of his shirt. He hauled open the warped door and reached for the wedge on the top shelf where he left it, a roll of duct tape tucked in a crate with extension cords. The shed light swung on its pull chain, throwing a dim halo over damp rakes and a stack of folding chairs. He shook water from his arm and shut the door with his heel.

By the time he stepped back out, Laney had her phone to her ear and was headed for the hall again, chin tucked. He jogged toward her, rain beating his shoulders so hard it felt like gravel.

“You lock your keys in there?” he said, pitching his voice enough to cut through the storm.

She stopped, thumb still on the screen. She nodded once. “I’m tryna call Caleb to get my spare set.”

He nodded with her. He walked to the van, wedge and tape in one hand. Water streamed from the roof and pooled at his shoes. He ran his fingers along the top of the door, feeling for space. Nothing he could slide metal into clean. He pulled his shirt hem up and wiped the glass. The fabric plastered to his stomach as soon as he let it go.

Laney came up beside him and stood off to the side, box tucked against her hip, rain bouncing off her shoulder. He lifted his shirt again to make a little awning for the window and laid two strips of duct tape across the top edge, pressing until the adhesive took. He added another strip for grip, then leaned back and gave a steady pull. The glass eased down a sliver, then another. The sound was a wet squeak under the hammer of the rain.

He slipped his belt free in one practiced motion. The buckle chimed against the door frame as he fed it through the gap and worked the tongue toward the handle. His breath fogged white in the chill of the storm. It wasn’t pretty, just patient. The buckle found purchase. He twisted his wrist and pulled. The lock popped. The alarm answered with a scream that ran under his skin.

He stepped back and opened the door wide for her. The sound rolled out of the van and up against the rain. Laney’s eyes flicked over him, then back to his face. “Where did you learn how to do that?” she asked.

“I ain’t on probation for nothing,” he said, half a smile there and gone. He tilted his head toward the car. “You might want to get out the rain.”

She nodded. She shifted the box and shoved it into the back seat quick, then climbed into the driver’s seat, moving with that small urgency people had when a noise was drilling into them. He closed the door for her, palm flat on the wet metal, then reached up and peeled the tape from the glass. The strips came away in a gray curl, adhesive slicked by water. The alarm cut off once she turned the key. The sudden quiet felt heavy.

Through the window she looked at him again. The cab light traced the edge of her jaw and the damp clump of her bangs. She didn’t say anything right away. He didn’t push it. He stood in the rain with the belt in his hand, water running in cold tracks down his spine, and waited that breath.

“Be careful on getting home, boss lady,” he said, stepping back.

She nodded. “You, too.”

He slid the belt back through his loops, the buckle cold against his fingers. He took the long step from the curb to the running water of the lot and started for his car. By then he was drenched through and past caring, boots slick, socks taking in water with each move. The church light spilled gold on the asphalt behind him and the storm swallowed the rest. He didn’t run. There wasn’t any point. He kept his head down and walked.

~~~

The dressing room ran warm and close, mirrors throwing the light back until it thickened the air. Liana had her knees tucked under a big hoodie, bra straps peeking, a notebook balanced on top where she’d scrawled half a dosage calculation. “He really trying to wife me up,” she said, tapping the pen against the spiral.

Bianca laughed from her spot at the table. “Then you need to let him do that because he gonna to have money. Love me a Black man with that munyun.”

Liana’s mouth tilted. “Bitch, we both trying to be pharmacists. We gonna have the same money.”

Mireya sat cross-legged on a folding chair, hoodie on, shorts peeking under, laces of her heels dangling from a bag at her feet. She smoothed a thumb across a stray glitter smear on her thigh. “I wouldn’t trust any man coming at me with that being a provider shit anyway.”

Bianca popped a compact shut. “That’s because both y’all wanna get your degree and everything. I’ll cook and clean for a real six-figure nigga and be a housewife.”

“Absolutely not,” Mireya said. “I’d rather keep doing this shit for life than rely on a man.”

“Facts,” Liana said, pen moving again.

Out in the hall the bass rolled by and shook the bulbs. Perfume and setting spray hung heavy. A fan clicked on a loose blade. The door opened and Alejandra and Hayley slipped in from the floor, skin glowing under sweat and glitter. Hayley wore a sparkle bra and panties, straps thin as thread. Alejandra’s set matched in red, hips high, everything cut to sell the line.

Alejandra took two steps and swung into Mireya’s lap without asking, warm thigh across her knees, one arm thrown around her back. “I have a present for you, Mexicana.”

Liana and Bianca traded a look. Liana didn’t lift her head far from the page. “That sounds like she about to give you the clap.”

Alejandra cut her eyes over. “Bitch, this pussy is clean.” Then she turned back to Mireya, grin set. “A guy wants a VIP from you. He looks like he has deep pockets.”

Mireya leaned back a fraction, feeling the press of Alejandra’s forearm. “What if I didn’t want to do those?” Her eyebrow rose and stayed.

Alejandra laughed, easy. “You’ve been going back and forth long enough, Mexicana. Go make some money. You just have to dance for him. If you just want the minimum, anyway.”

At the mirror, Hayley adjusted her bra strap, watching in the glass. “He’s not handsy.”

Alejandra pushed off Mireya’s lap and stood, bracelets clicking. She took Mireya’s hands and tugged. “Go get that feria.”

Mireya shook her head once and let Alejandra pull her to her feet. Heat lifted off the carpet. The bass outside slid into a new track that crawled slow. She glanced toward Liana and Bianca. They both shrugged, resigned and amused in the same breath.

She sighed and reached for the hem of her hoodie.

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Post by Soapy » 17 Oct 2025, 07:59

hmmm, i might be wrong about Laney :ooo: could be a muse for Mireya's future. if not, and Caine don't crack this bitch, time to move on. respectfully.

s/o to Mireya for finding some middle ground with Camila's birthday, she's reaching the age where she's actually going to remember this shit

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Post by redsox907 » 17 Oct 2025, 19:25

Caesar wrote:
17 Oct 2025, 07:37
“Absolutely not,” Mireya said. “I’d rather keep doing this shit for life than rely on a man.”
stubborn ass :smh:

wonder if the dude that got curb stomped the same homie that Ramon and em boys robbed to help out Mireya :curtain:
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Post by Captain Canada » 18 Oct 2025, 15:08

Seriously wondering where you're taking Laney's story. Not even how it intertwines with Caine's, but something is up there
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Post by Caesar » 18 Oct 2025, 15:44

Soapy wrote:
17 Oct 2025, 07:59
hmmm, i might be wrong about Laney :ooo: could be a muse for Mireya's future. if not, and Caine don't crack this bitch, time to move on. respectfully.

s/o to Mireya for finding some middle ground with Camila's birthday, she's reaching the age where she's actually going to remember this shit
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Screenshot this. One of y'all saying Mireya is doing a good thing.
redsox907 wrote:
17 Oct 2025, 19:25
Caesar wrote:
17 Oct 2025, 07:37
“Absolutely not,” Mireya said. “I’d rather keep doing this shit for life than rely on a man.”
stubborn ass :smh:

wonder if the dude that got curb stomped the same homie that Ramon and em boys robbed to help out Mireya :curtain:
She can't want to be independent? :deus:

djp907, it is not. It's just some random kid :dead:
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18 Oct 2025, 15:08
Seriously wondering where you're taking Laney's story. Not even how it intertwines with Caine's, but something is up there
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