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Post by Caesar » 22 Oct 2025, 07:14

The Lord Taketh and the Lord Taketh More

Just after sunrise, the whole roster lined shoulder to shoulder across the field. Breath hung thin in the cool that would not last. Cleats ticked on turf. Trainers rolled coolers down the sideline and the lids thumped when they hit a seam. A whistle cut once and bodies went down, hands to laces, torsos folding until the line looked like it had been lowered an inch.

“Reach and hold,” a strength coach called, voice even. “No bouncing.”

Caine felt the tight give behind each knee and let it ease n. He stared at the hash in front of his toes. The sky over the far pines started pale and climbed toward a clean blue. He breathed in the cut grass and rubber dust. On his right, Weston’s shadow matched the stretch. On his left, Turner exhaled through his nose and shook tension from his wrists.

They moved through the warmup in quiet rhythm. Quad pulls. High knees. A-skip down and back. Groins and hips. Ankles rolled until they stopped clicking. The team jogged in a long wave to the far twenty and back. Helmets tapped as players passed. The sun edged up and pulled a shine from every faceguard.

“Sprint through the end,” Coach Aplin said, and the players came across the goal line. Position groups peeled away to their stations. The quarterbacks collected near the near hash with a bag of balls opened at their feet. The white of the laces flashed when Mizell toed a ball toward the circle.

“Same footwork,” Mizell said. “All of you together. Clean drops. No heel click.”

The six of them took their lanes on the painted hashes. Caine settled into his base, weight even, shoulders free. Weston set square next to him, chin tucked, hands ready. Turner, Terrell, Tyler, and Dillon slid into their marks with the same quiet intent.

“On my clap,” Mizell said.

He clapped. Caine’s left foot stole ground. Right hit. Left replaced. Three quick beats and he stuck with a firm base, ball tucked near his right pec, eyes level on an invisible hitch. The ball shot from his hand with no load up, a short stroke that let the nose find the open palm of the student manager at ten yards. Weston’s ball thudded into the other manager’s chest at the same breath, tight and on time. The other four landed a half tick behind, not late enough to look wrong, just enough that the air showed the difference.

“Again,” Mizell said.

Three and hitch. Reset. Clap. Five and stick. The group stayed in sync, but the small things told on them. Caine’s back foot never crossed his midline. His shoulders stayed quiet through the hitch. Weston’s base never got tall. The ball left both their hands on a flat line that did not need to arc to find its mark. Turner’s drop got a shade wide then he fixed it. Tyler’s front toe pointed out then came back. Dillon and Terrell kept their feet honest and learned by doing, eyes on the frame of the drill as if it would speak.

“Roll right, eyes downfield,” Mizell said. “Hit the cone and throw on the move.”

They moved in one file. Caine slid off the spot with small steps that kept his hips stacked. The cone met his outside foot and he let the throw go without planting, shoulders riding through and the ball riding with them. It shaved over the shoulder of the manager in stride and hit him like it had arrived there first. Weston’s rep matched it, ball out at the same point on the cone, nose level, no wobble. The others got it done, some with a small gather, one with a tiny heel click that cost a sliver of time, then even that smoothed out the second pass.

“Left,” Mizell said, and the line mirrored the work. Caine’s off-hand stayed soft on the ball until it left. Weston’s weight stayed inside his frame. Turner and Tyler corrected their shoulders at the cone and took notes without speaking. Terrell smoothed his path the second time through. Dillon muttered a single “got it” at himself and tightened his steps.

“Hash to numbers, quick out at five,” Mizell said. “Ball on the upfield shoulder.”

Managers set at the sideline landmarks. Six snaps from air hit hands in near unison. Caine kept his base under him, shoulders square through the throw, eyes level. The ball carried with that thin sound. Weston’s carried its own sound and hit the target where it should, guiding the manager away from imaginary traffic. Two more sets, mirrored. Feet, eyes, ball. The cadence got inside the body and lived there.

Routes on air came next in a short string. Slant. Now. Stick. Mizell walked behind the line, hands behind his back, only stopping to shift a cone with his shoe or touch a shoulder blade to remind posture. He said little. He didn’t have to. The field said who understood the shape of each concept in their feet before the ball left the hand.

“Last one,” he said. “Five-step, take the hitch if it’s there. Hitch is there.”

They all threw the same picture. The differences stayed in the margins. Caine’s reset came without any extra sway. Weston’s eyes snapped back from an invisible safety and the ball left now. Turner’s ball floated a breath high and still got where it belonged. Tyler’s timing landed right. Terrell’s feet stayed tight. Dillon’s follow-through rode long and he nodded once to himself when the manager didn’t have to move.

They jogged in to swap balls for mesh and footwork. Two at a time, they worked play fakes into the drops. Caine’s hands flashed and his feet lied for the fake without letting his base drift. Weston matched it, pocket small and strong, shoulders saying run while his feet said throw. When Mizell added a third step and a reset, they hit that too. The two of them lived where the rep wanted to live. The rest kept pace. Sweat darkened shirts at the spine. The sun climbed and asked for more from everyone.

Mizell clapped once and they rolled to a half-speed progression period. Each quarterback stood on a painted dot. Managers flashed numbers with their fingers at landmarks to give a simple full-field picture. Heads snapped. Feet reset. Ball went to the correct hand. Caine and Weston finished their answers before the others. Not rushed. Just on time. Dillon closed the gap by the end of the string and caught Terrell’s eye with a quick grin that said he felt it starting to click.

Across the way the linemen hit sleds and made a low metal groan. Receivers caught and flipped balls to a second line in one motion. The field smelled like rubber and water and the first hint of heat lifting off painted plastic. From the sideline a graduate assistant ticked names and times on a clipboard without looking up.

“Bring it up,” Mizell said, and they circled him, hands on hips, shoulders moving with breath. He let his eyes move around the six faces and then past them toward the field where the team had settled into the day’s order. He gave one short coaching point about posture on the reset and one about not letting the back foot hunt. Then he nodded once and sent them to water.

When they jogged back out for the next period, the ball bags sat where they had started,. All six took their spots again. The work reset like a metronome. The sun cleared the top of the stands and laid the field bare. From the tower, a horn chirped to mark the period. The quarterbacks waited on the clap.

The first two balls out of the next drill said it all without anyone saying a word.

~~~

The Target ran quiet in the day heat, big panes of glass letting the sun fall in soft squares across wide aisles. Mireya pushed a red cart with a front wheel that clicked every fourth turn. Cold air brushed her skin and smelled faintly of laundry soap and fresh cardboard. She moved with a list open in her head, numbers stacked next to each item.

“Seasonal’s down there,” she said, pointing her chin toward the bright block letters hanging over party supplies.

“Sí, aisle ten,” Jaslene said, quick and light. “Watch, they move it so all the basic bitches get trapped.”

“You calling me a basic bitch?”

“I don’t know. You’re in leggings a lot.”

The aisle threw color at them. Streamers and paper fans. Banners that promised more party than they could afford. Mireya reached for a pack of themed plates with a cartoon smile and counted the pieces. Twelve. The price tag did its small, hard work.

Jaslene leaned in, nails tapping the plastic. “That’s cheap,” she said. “Don’t get that.”

Mireya kept the pack in her hand, felt the thin give of the plastic rim. “Cheap is all I got with school coming.”

“Mi amor, hush.” Jaslene flicked her fingers, dismissing the thought. “We got you, girl. Same way we do for Mari and Graciela. And we coming out there to the boonies with you, too.”

Mireya’s eyebrow went up before she caught it.

“What?” Jaslene grinned. “If the biggest Friday night is Walmart and a Sonic, eso es campo.”

She put the themed plates back and slid a cheaper, plain stack into the cart. Tissue paper. A pack of balloons. Each drop into the cart sounded loud in the quiet aisle.

“Your family going out there?” Jaslene asked, head tilting, eyes reading her face.

Mireya shook her head. “My mom didn’t answer my text.”

“Alright then,” Jaslene said with a little shoulder lift. She let a beat pass, then smiled sharper. “Besides, I wanna see the man that can have you running across the country to see him.”

Mireya rolled her eyes and took the cart forward, the clicking wheel finding its rhythm again. “I go there for Camila. We ain’t together.”

“So, you just go out there,” Jaslene said, walking easy at her side, “sit around while he spends time with Camila, then hop in the car and come back?”

“Pretty much.”

They turned down the candles and numbers. Mireya picked a three and a small pack of spirals that would burn just long enough for photos. She compared prices on two banner kits, found the one that came with tape, and dropped it in. Her mind kept the running total without showing it on her face.

Jaslene watched her hands. “When was the last time y’all fucked?”

Mireya gave her a quick side glance, unreadable, then lifted her chin toward toys. “She been asking for that vet set,” she said. “The little one, not the big one with the carrier.”

Jaslene laughed, bright and soft. “Ay, OK. Loud and clear.”

They rolled into toys. The aisle smelled like warm plastic and sugar from some open bag near checkout. Boxes smiled down with glossy faces. Mireya scanned the shelf and found the cheaper kit on the lower row. No carrier. Still had the tiny stethoscope. Into the cart.

“Nothing wrong with getting it where you know it’s good until you find someone new,” Jaslene said, teasing in the edges, voice musical.

Mireya glanced over her shoulder once and kept walking.

~~~

It was broad daylight in Belle Chasse, the kind that made every lawn look overwatered and every mailbox throw a short shadow. Ramon had the engine off and the windows down to let the river breeze thread through, what little made it past the live oaks and vinyl siding. He watched Leo’s place three doors up. Beige siding. Two steps to the stoop. No wind chimes, just a dented grill squatting by the porch rail.

E.J. slouched in the passenger seat, forearm out the window. “What we out here for again?”

Ramon didn’t take his eyes off the house. “Just making sure somebody who shouldn’t be talking ain’t talking.”

Tyree, in the middle of the backseat, clicked his tongue. “Ain’t there easier ways to do this?”

Ramon shrugged once. The street gave him back the same answer—quiet, sprinkler hiss, a minivan easing past like it was late for nothing important.

“Man.” E.J. settled deeper. “We really going to Georgia next week? Caine the homie and all but y’all google where that nigga live?”

Tyree snorted. “Your type of place with all them white folks, huh?”

E.J. cut his eyes back at him. “Ain’t you fucking a white girl now, too?”

Tyree laughed, palms up. “Don’t put me in that. Only one ain’t a queen on my roster is Mexican.”

A kid’s bike wheel ticked against a driveway lip two houses down. Two dogs began a barking match. Ramon let their chatter drift until it tried to cover the quiet he needed.

“Yeah, we are,” he said, voice level. “Show some love to Caine and his lil’ one. Then on the way back, we need to make a stop in Atlanta.”

Tyree leaned forward, forearm on the seatback. “The fuck we going to Atlanta for?”

“Bring some keys back.”

E.J. turned his head, slow. “When we became the niggas moving shit cross the state lines?”

Ramon rolled his shoulder and let the shrug land where it landed. “When Duke asked, I guess. We gonna get paid for it. Couple thousand.”

Tyree whistled a small note and sat back. “Shit, I’m with it then. I gotta buy books.”

E.J. pitched his voice high and pinched his nose. “I gotta buy bucks.” He grinned at his own joke until Tyree popped his hat off from behind and both of them laughed.

Ramon didn’t smile. He watched the glass porch light catch a dull flare as the door moved. Leo stepped out into the sun, hand bandaged up, the wrap gray at the edges from use. He didn’t scan the street. Didn’t lift his chin. He moved down the steps, across the patchy grass, straight to the driver side of his pickup. He opened the door, leaned in, fished around, came out with something small and square—phone charger, maybe—and shut it again. The bandage flashed when he pulled the door closed, and he headed back inside the house without a glance.

Ramon finally let go of the house and checked his mirrors out of habit. A white SUV turned the corner slow, blinkers on like it had manners. Two houses up, an old man tugged his trash can back from the curb, lid clapping twice. Nothing else. The kind of quiet you only got away from the city.

Tyree drummed a knuckle on Ramon’s seat. “So, bumfuck, then Atlanta, then back. You driving the whole way?”

“Fuck no,” Ramon said. He put the key in, turned it. Dashboard blinked awake, fuel a little under half, air hot through the vents till the compressor kicked. “But we going.”

“Cool with me,” E.J. said, settling his hat.

Ramon angled the mirror down the street one more time. Beige siding. Closed door. No curtains moving. He wrapped his hand over the shifter.

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Post by Soapy » 22 Oct 2025, 08:33

she just admitted to being involved in an assault with a deadly weapon :soapy:

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Post by redsox907 » 22 Oct 2025, 11:59

Soapy wrote:
22 Oct 2025, 08:33
she just admitted to being involved in an assault with a deadly weapon :soapy:
Erroneous. Stasia runs an underground strip club with underage girls, doubtful she's rating out one of the girls who works illegally for her. Stasia already knew, that's why she asked. Why would Mireya lie to the one person she feels is looking out for her?

Something going down with the stripper crew and the 3NG crew all rolling through Statesboro at the same time. Ms. Laney ain't gonna know what to think lol

And Rylee a dumb bihh. Ain't like Caine knew she was showing up, so she ain't got a leg to stand on. Caine played it right, since we all know he'd rather be with Mireya than Rylee regardless
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Post by djp73 » 22 Oct 2025, 13:35

Caught up!
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Post by Caesar » 23 Oct 2025, 06:10

Soapy wrote:
22 Oct 2025, 08:33
she just admitted to being involved in an assault with a deadly weapon :soapy:
redsox907 wrote:
22 Oct 2025, 11:59
Soapy wrote:
22 Oct 2025, 08:33
she just admitted to being involved in an assault with a deadly weapon :soapy:
Erroneous. Stasia runs an underground strip club with underage girls, doubtful she's rating out one of the girls who works illegally for her. Stasia already knew, that's why she asked. Why would Mireya lie to the one person she feels is looking out for her?

Something going down with the stripper crew and the 3NG crew all rolling through Statesboro at the same time. Ms. Laney ain't gonna know what to think lol

And Rylee a dumb bihh. Ain't like Caine knew she was showing up, so she ain't got a leg to stand on. Caine played it right, since we all know he'd rather be with Mireya than Rylee regardless
What sox said. Stasia is aware of any number of crimes that Mireya has participated in (contractor fraud, accounting fraud, tax fraud, breaking literally every single law pertaining to stripping in Louisiana, working somewhere that prostitution may or may not be happening), that Mireya's calculation is this admission isn't much worse. Not to mention it behooves Stasia to not throw Mireya under the bus because of all these dancers, she's the one that can blow the operation up the fastest as an 18 year old.

:hmm:

Rylee just trying to secure her dick supply.
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Caught up!
Now stay caught up :troll:
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Post by Caesar » 23 Oct 2025, 06:10

God Sits High and Looks Higher

The light through the blinds came thin and gray, soft enough not to wake her yet. The AC hummed steady against the early Georgia heat, pushing cool air across the room. Caine sat at the edge of the mattress, bare feet flat to the floor, holding Camila in his lap. Her legs hung heavy over one of his, her cheek pressed to his chest, small hand still curled around the collar of his shirt.

She’d fought sleep last night, giddy over the promise of balloons and cake, and now she was out cold—mouth parted, hair stuck in every direction from the pillow. Every so often she mumbled, some half-dreamed word that never finished, then quieted again.

Caine rested a palm over her back, feeling the slow lift and fall beneath his hand. Her weight wasn’t baby-light anymore. His thumb brushed the hem of her pajama shirt, soft with wash wear, and he caught himself smiling without meaning to.

The apartment sat still around them. The only sound was the unit in the window and a pipe ticking somewhere inside the wall. The air smelled faintly of detergent and the fried chicken Mireya had brought in last night from the gas station off the highway.

On the nightstand lay her little plastic crown from the dollar store, the kind with cheap rhinestones. Mireya had picked it up at the same stop, laughing that it would break before noon. A pack of candles waited beside it.

He hadn’t checked the time. The day would start soon—film, weights, practice—but he stayed where he was, one arm looped around his daughter, thumb tracing slow circles against her spine. Camila sighed once and shifted, her small knee pressing against his side. Her hair smelled faintly of strawberries.

Behind him, the bed creaked as Mireya stirred. Sheets rustled. She pushed herself upright just enough to see him sitting there. He didn’t turn. He already felt her eyes on him.

The mattress dipped when she scooted forward, careful not to wake the girl. The warmth of her moved closer until her chest met his back. She slid her arms under his, wrapping around his forearms where they held Camila, and rested her head between his shoulders. Her breath came out slow, syncing with his before either of them noticed.

The three of them stayed like that.

Camila’s breath puffed steady against the front of his shirt. Mireya’s cheek warmed the cotton at his back. The room settled into the quiet of it—the hum of the vent, a bird outside starting up and cutting off, the far-off sound of tires in the lot.

A light line pushed higher across the wall as the sun came up. Caine blinked toward it, let the brightness creep in. His leg had gone numb under Camila’s weight, but he didn’t shift. Mireya’s hands tightened once over his arms then eased again.

The air smelled clean, sharp with soap and the faint sweetness from Camila’s lotion. Somewhere, a clock turned over another minute. The world could wait.

He let his chin drop near the crown of his daughter’s head, close enough to feel her warmth. Mireya’s head stayed against his back, her arms locked around his.

The hum of the AC deepened once more and then steadied.

~~~

The church lot had already turned bright and mean by midmorning. Heat lifted off the concrete in slow breaths, and gnats made halos over the grass that edged the daycare fence. The back porch door stood propped open with a folded cardboard box, the cool air from inside barely touching the threshold before it gave up. Sara and Mireya worked in the shade line where the roof ended and the sun began, dragging two folding tables out of the shed and walking them open until the legs locked with a hollow click.

“Other one goes right there,” Sara said, nodding to a patch of level ground under the eaves. Sweat darkened the back of her T-shirt. She planted her foot, braced the table, and shouldered it a few inches left so the edges squared.

Mireya bent to tape the plastic tablecloth. The roll stuck to itself and then to her fingers. She pulled it straight, smoothed the creases with the flat of her hand, and pressed a strip of tape hard so the wind wouldn’t get ideas. Her hair clung at the nape. Across the way, Camila chased a drifting shimmer of soap, one of those cheap wands clutched in her fist. Bubbles drifted, caught the light, popped against her forearm. She laughed, breathy and sure, then tried again, cheeks puffed like she was serious about the job.

“Careful, mija,” Mireya called, without looking up from the wrinkle she was fighting. “Don’t spill it.”

“I not” Camila answered, the promise small and confident, already tipping the wand back toward the little cup.

The daycare door eased wider and footsteps crossed the porch. Laney came out holding two sweating cups of lemonade. Her dress was simple, clean, the hem moving only when she did. She stepped off the last board and into the light.

“Y’all look parched,” she said. “Figured I’d bring you a lil’ somethin’ cold.”

She handed one cup to Sara, one to Mireya. The lemonade was the church kind—sweet and sharp—ice already fighting and losing. Mireya took a long drink.

“Thank you,” she said. “And thanks for letting us do this here. Caine’s place is too small.”

Laney waved it off, mouth tugging like it wasn’t worth credit. “Ain’t no trouble. Gonna be quiet ’round here today anyhow. Stomach bug done ripped through the daycare this week.” She tilted her head toward the playground. “Half the babies laid up at home.”

Sara looked at Laney then, really looked. There was a tired that lived behind other people’s eyes she recognized quick, the kind you carried even when you were upright and handling what needed handling. She touched the nearest chair with two fingers, a small invitation.

“Why don’t you sit down for a moment?”

Laney blew a breath through her nose and shook her head. “I can’t. Got a plenty to do. Just wanted y’all to have a drink since it’s hot as the inside a farmer’s boots.” The corner of her mouth twitched, apology and humor sharing space.

From the grass, Camila’s voice lifted. “Mommy! Mommy, look!” She’d made three bubbles in a row and was trying to herd them with her free hand. One kissed her wrist and vanished. She squealed and went for another.

Mireya set the cup down, already moving. “I got her.” She crossed to the grass, crouched beside Camila, and showed her how to dip the wand slower, how to pull it up steady and blow soft. “Like this,” she said. Camila nodded hard and blew a stream that strung itself into fat orbs before the heat took them.

Sara watched them a second, soft at the edges, then turned back to Laney. “How many do you have?”

Laney didn’t need the question repeated. “Three.”

Sara’s eyebrow tipped. “All boys?”

Laney nodded, amused despite herself. “How’d you guess?”

“Just the way you carry yourself.” Sara took another sip of lemonade, the ice knocking her lip.

A faint smile showed on Laney’s face and was gone. “I’m dreadin’ the teenage years.”

Sara laughed, a sound that came from somewhere used to hard days. “I don’t have any advice. I was barely in my thirties when Caine hit thirteen.”

Laney’s eyes followed Mireya and Camila for a beat. “I’ll be thirty-three, so not much better.”

“I could tell that, too,” Sara said. Not a tease. Just a read.

They stood there with the heat pushing and the shade doing what it could. On the far side of the lot a truck rolled past and the driver raised his chin the way people did when they didn’t want to lean out the window. From inside the daycare came the faint scrape of a chair and the hush of a cartoon that hadn’t been turned off yet. A swallow under the eave clicked its throat and settled.

Laney took a breath that looked like it might turn into sitting after all, then shook her head clear. “Well, let me get outta y’all’s hair. I’ll be inside if you need anything.”

“Caine knows where whatever is,” Sara said. “He’ll take care of it. Don’t worry about us.”

Laney nodded once, grateful that didn’t need a thank-you. “Alright then.” She headed back toward the porch. Sun hit her bare forearms and turned the fine hairs bright. At the door, she nudged the stop with her foot and slipped inside, the cool swallowing her.

Sara watched the doorway a long heartbeat after it closed, lemon on her tongue, the sweat drying at her temples. She set the cup on the table, palmed the tablecloth edge flat where the tape had bubbled, then turned toward the grass.

Mireya had Camila on her hip now, the wand tucked into the cup and held high so it wouldn’t spill. Camila’s cheeks were pink and damp, eyes bright like birthday morning already belonged to her. Mireya shifted her weight, readjusted the child’s legs with practiced hands, and held the cup out to Sara for safekeeping.

She joined them.

~~~

Heat lay flat over the church lot, the kind that made the lines in the asphalt look soft. Ramon eased the car into a space, cut the engine, and exhaled. His spine complained from the hours. He pushed the door open with his shoulder and stood, rolling his neck until it cracked.

E.J. slid out behind him, arms high in a stretch. Tyree came around from the passenger side, blinking against the brightness. For a second none of them spoke. The building sat clean and brick-red against a big sky, the daycare wing tucked along the side, a white cross steady over the entrance.

“It look like they’d hang a nigga out here,” E.J. said, turning a slow circle.

Tyree laughed. “That’s why I fell asleep when we crossed out of Montgomery. I ain’t wanna know when one of them sheriffs decided to put that hood on.”

Ramon sucked his teeth, rubbing his lower back with the heel of his hand. “Nigga, fuck you. You went to sleep in Montgomery because you knew your ass was supposed to drive here from there.”

Tyree put both hands up. “Shit somebody be fresh.”

“Be fresh at the trunk,” Ramon said, pointing. “Get that shit out there.”

“Why we gotta do that?” E.J. said, but he was already moving.

“Because I fucking drove seven of the nine hours,” Ramon answered, voice flat.

The trunk popped and pushed out a wave of hot plastic. Tyree gripped a small black grill, one leg taped from a previous life. E.J. hauled two bags of charcoal and set them down with a dull thump. Under a hoodie, they found three toy sets—bright boxes half-wrapped, tape wrinkled, a bow stuck sideways on one.

E.J. nudged Ramon with his elbow and tipped his chin toward the driveway. “Ay, who that?”

Two rental SUVs rolled in clean and quiet, fresh plates flashing. Doors opened and women stepped out in quick sequence, light on their feet. One of the women set a child on the ground. Trunks went up. Wrists hooked under handles. Gift bags and wrapped boxes stacked fast, tissue paper flaring in the sun.

Ramon shrugged. “Must be Mireya’s friends or some shit.”

Tyree let out a low whistle. “They all finer than a motherfucker.”

“We at a fucking church, bro,” Ramon said.

Tyree pointed when Alejandra rounded the tailgate, shorts and a top that didn’t leave much to wonder, expensive sunglasses perched on her nose. “Her fucking ass and titties out.”

E.J. grinned, head tilted. “He ain’t lying, though, brudda. Them bitches is bad. Good thing we in a different state.”

Ramon shook his head and reached for the lighter fluid. “C’mon, man.”

Around the SUVs, Jaslene shifted a stack of boxes against her hip, a ribbon trailing. Hayley lifted a handled tote layered with bags. Liana and Bianca carried a big plush thing between them, wrapped crooked, laughing when one corner caved and had to be fixed on the fly. Mari shouldered a cluster of gift bags and closed a trunk with her wrist. None of them looked travel-worn.

“Grab the rest that shit,” Ramon said without looking back.

Tyree looped two gift bags up his forearm beside the grill. E.J. hooked a finger through the plastic handle of a toy set and lifted the charcoal again with the other hand. The sun pressed against their shoulders. A cicada rang from the pines at the lot’s edge. Somewhere a door closed with a clean church sound.

E.J. jerked his chin toward the group again. “Bruh, I’m tryna figure out which one suck dick the best”

“Chill the fuck out,” Ramon said.

Tyree laughed under his breath and adjusted his grip. He nodded at Bianca but didn’t say anything.

The women’s line angled toward the far corner where the building turned. Paper rustled. Ribbon ends flicked. One bag’s tag spun and flashed Camila’s name in marker before the wind laid it flat again. E.J. and Tyree stood there a beat too long, watching the pace of it.

Ramon flicked a glance between them and the path, his face giving nothing. He jerked his chin toward the back of the church and started walking.

~~~

The sun sat hard on the church lot, heat rising off the blacktop and drifting under the eaves. Folding tables made skinny shadows along the grass by the daycare. Mireya had a cluster of women around her, bright nails and expensive clothing catching light, gift bags stacked near their feet. Tyree and E.J. hovered close, talking too loud and smiling too wide.

Caine came around the corner still damp from the shower, black tank clinging clean across his shoulders. The tattoos on his chest and arm flashing as he moved.

Sara looked up from a stack of paper plates. Her face broke into a smile that started in her eyes. “Mijo,” she said, soft.

Before he could answer, a small body peeled off from the far table. Camila had been crouched with a little girl he didn’t recognize, heads bent over a set of bracelets. She saw him and sprang up, curls bouncing, voice bright and sure. “Daddy!”

He bent and scooped her in one motion, her knees hitting his hip, her hands finding the back of his neck. He kissed her cheek and kept on toward the tables. Sweat and lemonade and charcoal mixed on the air.

Ramon was nearest the coolers. Caine shifted Camila to his other arm and dapped him up, then Tyree, then E.J. “Appreciate y’all coming out,” he said.

“Had to, bruh,” Ramon answered. Tyree grinned at the women. E.J. nodded at the gift pile and said something Caine let pass.

He leaned down to Mireya’s ear, close enough that Camila’s curls brushed her shoulder. “¿Quiénes son?”

“Mis amigas del trabajo.” Mireya tipped her chin toward the women without moving much. Her voice stayed even. She pointed to the little girl with a pink bow. “Esa es la hija de Mari.” She nodded toward Mari, who sat turned on the bench so she could keep an eye in two places, quiet watch on her daughter.

Caine met Mireya’s eyes for a beat, then looked over to the women. “Appreciate y’all being here,” he said, the thanks landing easy. “We happy y’all here.” He meant it and let it show. Jaslene lifted a hand. Alejandra smiled quick. Mari gave a small nod, the kind moms exchanged in rooms like this.

He set Camila down on her feet. “Go play with your friend, nena. Voy a hablar con abuela.”

Camila tightened her grip on his fingers, not ready to let go. He crouched so they were eye to eye and pointed to a metal chair next to Sara. “I’m gonna be sitting right there.” He touched her forehead with his. “Estoy aquí.”

She turned to run back and stopped again, looking over her shoulder to make sure he was where he said he’d be. He flicked two fingers toward the grass. “Sigues.”

She went, small sneakers flashing, already calling “Graci—mira!” before she reached the other girl.

He straightened and crossed to his mother. Sara was already standing. She pulled him in, both arms around his back, cheek to his shoulder. He let the weight of it settle, eyes closing for one breath. When she stepped back, she pressed a palm to his ribs and clucked her tongue.

“You getting skinny,” she said.

“The food nasty out here,” he said, mouth pulling at one corner.

“You should know how to cook.” She said it with a little laugh, the kind that remembered a dozen lectures.

“I don’t got time.”

She shook her head, same as always, then eased down into the chair beside the one he pointed out to Camila.

He sat with a small groan he didn’t bother to hide. The day’s two practices still lived in his legs. Sweat had already found its way back to his neck. From the other side of the grass, Tyree threw a line at one of the women. and E.J. tried to back it up. Mireya ignored them, chatting with Mari.

“The schedule,” Sara said. “Dime. I need to know so I can come to a game.”

He rubbed a thumb over the knuckles of his other hand. “I’ma send it. You don’t gotta do all that though, Ma. It’s gonna get expensive.”

She didn’t answer right away. She just looked at him the way only a mother could, seeing more than he said, less than he hid. The noise of the lot pressed close—ice shifting in a cooler, a lawnmower starting up somewhere on another lot, Camila’s high voice mixing with the older girl’s. Sara reached up and pushed her fingers through his dreads, slow from scalp to ends.

Her smile didn’t need words.

~~~

The heat came off the concrete in slow waves, bending the air between the picnic tables and the low chain-link. Smoke drifted from the little black grill in the corner. Caine stood over it, arms flexing when he leaned to flip a row of drumsticks, cracking jokes with Tyree, E.J., and Ramon. Tongs clacked. Somebody whistled at a flare. The men laughed and shoved one another when one said something a bit too wild.

Bianca leaned across the table, elbow on the plastic cloth, chin tilted toward the grill. “I ain’t expect your baby daddy to look like that.”

Mireya didn’t turn right away. She watched the smoke ride the heat, listened to Camila and Graciela counting chalk lines by the curb. Then she raised an eyebrow. “What you mean by that?”

Hayley snorted into her cup. “I’m with Bee, girl.”

Liana glanced over, mouth already curling. “They mean ’cause he a hood nigga.”

Mireya rolled her eyes. “I don’t know if I’d describe him like that.”

Mari popped her gum and flicked her gaze to the three men crowding Caine at the grill. “If those his friends, that’s exactly how I’d describe him.”

Mireya waved it off, wrist loose. “He met them in jail.” The words came too fast. She heard them land and saw the faces tilt. “Whatever,” she added, softer, but the damage was done.

They broke into laughter, the easy kind that ran under the music from someone’s phone. Bianca slapped the table once. Liana leaned back, head thrown a little, bun catching the sun. Hayley hid her smile inside her cup.

Across the yard, Tyree said something that had E.J. punching him in the chest. Caine shook his head and laughed at them, smoke ghosting his shoulder. He reached for a bottle of sauce and poured a slow line over the meat, forearm flexed, chain tucked to his collarbone. Ramon said something and Caine nudged him with his elbow, still working the tongs.

Alejandra’s eyes stayed on the grill. “I know he pounds the shit out of you, too.”

Jaslene let out a small, approving hum. “He’s Latino, también. Seguro es bien apasionado.”

Mireya looked over the rim of her cup. “Y’all know y’all talking about my child’s father, right?”

Jaslene lifted one shoulder, not taking it back. “Didn’t you say the other day y’all not together?”

Bianca cut in, quick and unbothered. “Well, fuck, if you ain’t fucking him—”

“Ay,” Mari said, half a laugh in it.

Alejandra added, still watching the grill, “He look like he got stamina, though.”

Hayley nodded, lips pressed like she was trying not to grin. “A lot of it.”

They cracked up again. Mireya sucked her teeth.

~~~

The candle shook in the light wind, a tiny flame working hard against the heat that sat heavy over the lot. The folding table rocked once when Camila climbed onto the chair, both hands on the edge, chin just above the cake. Gnats stitched lazy circles in the sun. Smoke from the grill curled past the eaves and drifted toward the chain-link where gift bags waited in a bright pile.

“Feliz cumple—” Bianca started, then laughed and waved for help.

“Cumpleaños,” Liana tried, landing somewhere close.

“Feh-LEES,” Hayley said, earnest and off.

Ramon clapped on the wrong beat. Tyree leaned in, loud. “Feliz cumpleaños a ti,” he sang, words stumbling but proud. E.J. dragged the last note.

Camila’s grin shut into a serious puff. She blew hard. The flame guttered and went. A cheer hit the air. The wind took the smoke away fast.

“Pides un deseo, mija,” Mireya said, steadying the plate with her palm.

Caine pinched the wick to be sure. The grill popped behind him and Tyree jogged back to flip a wing before it charred.

Plates moved down the table. Plastic forks tapped. Ice knocked in cups that sweated through paper towels. The speaker sat on a windowsill, low under the church eave, bleeding a soft song no one caught. Sara wiped the knife between slices and passed a corner piece to Camila. Frosting smeared her nose quick as she leaned in.

They ate in that loose summer quiet that lives outside. Sun laid a hot hand on forearms. Shade under the eaves felt thin but welcome. Laughter rose and fell.

When the cake was nicked and the foil pans of chicken and rice were picked near clean, Camila looked across the table at her father. The icing spot still sat bright on her nose.

“Daddy,” she said, voice small and clear over the fan. “Can you dance with Mommy?”

Mireya wiped her hands on a napkin and touched Camila’s wrist. “Daddy is probably tired from football, baby.”

“I’m good,” Caine said. No strain in it. He glanced to Sara.

Sara already leaned across his arm, warm fingers on his bicep. “The birthday girl gets what she wants.” She pushed off the table, crossed to the speaker, and started scrolling. “Hold on.”

“Bailar,” Camila called, bouncing on her heels.

“Sí,” Sara answered without looking back. The right track snapped on. Strings burst bright in the heat. A drumline rode under it.

Caine stood and offered his hand. Mireya took it without thinking and stepped in close. His palm found her lower back and stayed. Her other hand settled in his, fingers relaxed, a grip that knew its place. The first steps landed light and exact, their weight talking in the dirt grit on the concrete. The song caught them and they went with it.

Forward and back. Turn. Reset. No hesitation anywhere. Their bodies fit the space between them like it had been measured. Caine’s shoulders stayed easy, guiding with a pressure she answered. Mireya’s chin tipped up on the tight turn, hair lifting at her neck in the breeze coming around the building. He spun them and brought them back on time. Their feet stitched the rhythm into the ground.

“Okay then,” Bianca said, clapping a beat that half-matched. “Go off.”

Caine pulled her through a clean circle and they slid into a diagonal across the concrete, shoes whispering sand. He set her and spun her again, smaller this time. She came back to him on the exact count, body tucking where he put her, breath hitting the same pocket of air.

Sara lifted the volume a notch. The strings climbed. Heat sat on their backs and still they made their own breeze. She followed without thinking. Their feet kept speaking.

Camila’s hands rose to her cheeks and fell again to clap. “Otra,” she yelled, laughing. “Otra vez.”

They gave her one more turn, tight and sweet.

Caine eased them toward a finish, a last spin that let Mireya float a second before she came back to him and stilled, steps planted, bodies close and breathing. The music ran on. He smiled, catching breath. Mireya’s face was warm and bright, eyes on his for a heartbeat, then away to their daughter.

Camila dodged a napkin in Sara’s hand and clapped harder, small palms smacking air in fast, happy bursts while the music still played and everyone around her hyped the two of them.

~~~

The music carried through the walls, thick with bass and laughter. Laney set down her pen and sat still for a moment, waiting for it to fade. It didn’t. She could hear the rhythm pushing up from the back of the church, bright and heavy, the kind of beat meant for bodies more than ears.

She left her office and walked to the kitchen. The air smelled faintly of cleaner and charcoal smoke. She poured a paper cup of water, drank half, then paused by the open door. The sound outside was clearer now—the scrape of shoes on grass, the pulse of a drum, Camila’s laughter cutting through everything.

Laney looked through the doorway.

Out in the yard, the heat hung low. She took in the people outside of her father’s church. Smiling and bright-faced, dressed in a way that didn’t seem to fit the location. And none of them seemed to care.

Caine stood near the middle. Camila was in his arms, squealing, her small hands pressed to his shoulders as he spun her around in tight circles. Her laughter carried, full and wild.

When he set her down, she turned and pointed toward Mireya, calling out to her, hopping in place until Caine followed her gaze. Mireya came forward without hesitation, moving through the crowd with an easy confidence. Caine reached his hand out. She took it.

Laney leaned her weight against the counter. The song shifted, the beat quickening. Caine drew Mireya in close—chests touching, his hand finding her lower back and staying there. She set her other hand flat on his shoulder, fingers spread. They started moving together, steps matched from the first count.

It wasn’t polite dancing. It was tight, physical, hips and thighs aligned, their rhythm built on pressure and pull. Every shift came through contact—his grip, her response, the curve of her body meeting his. She didn’t resist, didn’t need instruction. Their timing was perfect, practiced somewhere far from there.

Laney watched them, the motion small but precise. He guided her with the slow drag of his hand, his forearm pressed to her ribs, the space between them never breaking. Mireya followed his lead with a kind of ease that didn’t ask permission. The heat in their movement wasn’t loud, but it was alive.

Caine turned them with a low pivot. She stayed molded against him, their steps quick and contained. The music climbed, strings cutting through the air, and they moved faster—his hand sliding lower at her waist, her weight tipping into him on each beat. Every turn pulled them tighter together.

Laney couldn’t hear the words from the others in the yard, only the rise of their voices—clapping, laughing, cheering them on. Camila’s voice pierced through, shrill with joy. Laney could still see her at the edge of the crowd, clapping, watching her parents as if the world had narrowed down to them.

Caine shifted again. Mireya seemed to float through the steps, Laney unable to tell if she was moving or if Caine was moving her. The way he looked at her, even from this distance, carried no uncertainty. His mouth close to her ear, her head tipped toward him—everything about it felt too personal for an audience.

Laney felt it too, standing there in the doorway. The air conditioning behind her and the heavy heat beyond blurred together. She looked away from the glass, then back again, unable not to.

Laney stepped back from the door. The laughter outside swelled again, the sound of hands clapping, voices overlapping. She rinsed her cup, set it in the sink, and turned down the hall toward her office.

The last thing she heard was the little girl’s laughter, bright and carrying over the music.

~~~

Tyree and E.J. still worked the crowd that had never really been theirs, throwing lines toward Jaslene, Alejandra, Hayley, Bianca, Liana and Mari. Their voices rose and fell with the cicadas, bright for a second, then lost under the shuffle of plastic cups and folding chairs.

Mireya and Sara had claimed the strip of shade under the tree Caine rested under when he was working. Sara’s arm rested across Mireya’s shoulders, quiet and sure. A little way out, Camila and Graciela moved from chalk to bubbles and back again, skirts of soap trailing the wands, bubbles breaking as fast as they formed. Camila’s laugh carried clean across the yard every time a bigger one floated up and popped.

Caine stood with a wire brush in his hand, the grill grate tipped toward the light. Each drag of the bristles shaved a line through grease until the metal showed. Ash dusted his shoes. Smoke clung to him.

Ramon came up and stretched his back once, shoes planted. He watched the grate for a beat and then spoke.

“You trying to make some money, lil’ brudda?”

Caine kept the grate balanced and turned it a quarter. “Depends on what it is.”

“You ain’t gotta do nothing. We just got an opportunity to make some runs to Atlanta.”

Caine’s brow nudged up. “Weight?”

Ramon nodded. “I ain’t trying to fuck up your shit here but it’d be a help if this could be a mid-way stop.”

“Ain’t very mid-way,” Caine said, the corner of his mouth twitching.

“No, but it’s out the way.” Ramon dragged a thumb over a grease mark on the lid. “All we need is somewhere to stay where we ain’t on no cameras that people expecting us to be on. We sleep at your crib for a night or two. You get $300.”

Caine looked past the grate to the shade. Sara’s hand smoothed a strand of hair behind Mireya’s ear. Camila clapped when a fat bubble survived long enough to drift. He dropped his eyes back to the grate and took another slow run with the brush.

“Alright.”

Ramon tipped his chin. “Bet.”

Caine straightened and wiped his palm down his jeans. He dapped up Ramon. “And I appreciate you coming through for Mireya on that money.”

Ramon waved it off. “It wasn’t nothing. We got some money off that lick, too.”

Caine nodded. He lifted the grate again to get the underside, more habit than need. Sweat had turned the dust on his forearm into a gray paste. The brush rasped. A mosquito hovered near his ear and he pinched it away without looking.

Across the yard, Camila pointed at a bubble that had landed whole on the grass. Graciela crouched, breath held. It burst and Camila threw her head back and laughed, high and clean, cutting through the rest.

Ramon’s eyes followed the sound and then slid past it. He looked toward the edge of the shade where Mireya sat angled toward the yard, shoulders loose under Sara’s arm. From here he could see only the back of her head, the twist of hair against her T-shirt, the tilt that meant she was trying to track the girls without getting up. His gaze held a second longer, then another. He nodded then he looked back at the grate.

Caine set the brush down and knocked ash from the grate with a knuckle.

He glanced once more toward the tree where Sara and Mireya sat. Sara shifted, said something in Mireya’s ear. Mireya nodded without looking up.

~~~

The yard had gone quiet except for the faint scrape of chairs and the hum of the air units along the church wall. The last of the balloons sagged against their strings. Out by the big oak near the fence, Caine sat under the shade with Camila in front of him, her knees dusty, little hands working at the grass. Each time she pulled up a blade, she held it out for him to see. He nodded, the corners of his mouth tugging in the smallest grin.

Mireya and Sara sat off to the side where the heat didn’t press as hard, a shared folding chair pulled just out of the sun. Sara’s arm rested around Mireya’s shoulders. They watched the two under the tree for a long while without speaking. Caine leaned forward to listen to something Camila said, his forearm resting on his thigh.

Sara shifted slightly, her voice low. “You’re doing a great job.”

Mireya turned her head, eyebrow raised. “At what?”

Sara nodded toward the tree. “Making this work. I know it’s expensive for you to come out here and you have your own burdens.”

Mireya looked back at Caine and Camila. “Just takes some budgeting.”

Sara followed her gaze for a moment before glancing toward the group of women still at the far tables. “The cleaning company, huh?”

Mireya nodded. “Been getting a lot of overtime.”

Sara studied her a second longer, then reached over and smoothed down a strand of Mireya’s hair that had come loose. She leaned in and kissed the side of her head. “Te amo, mija.”

Mireya nodded, her throat tight, and ran her hand under her eye, catching the tear before it could fall.

The air shifted behind them—the faint creak of the church’s back door. Both of them turned.

Laney stood just outside the doorway, one hand resting against the frame. She took in the scene in front of her—the quiet between Mireya and Sara, the man and his daughter beneath the tree, the soft play of light over the yard. Her face didn’t change much, but something in her mouth drew tight before she gave a small, polite smile.

Neither woman moved. They just watched her.

Laney stepped off the stoop, her shoes crunching over the thin gravel that lined the edge of the concrete path. The music from someone’s phone had dwindled to a low hum, broken by the sound of Camila’s laughter—sharp, pure, echoing back toward the church. Laney’s eyes followed the sound for a moment before she started across the lot.

Sara’s arm stayed around Mireya’s shoulders. They both turned their heads, following Laney’s slow path toward the van parked by the fence. The sky had started to bleed its color out, leaving the asphalt soft gray.

Laney opened the door, paused, and looked back once. Then she climbed in, shut the door, and started the engine.

The van rolled out through the lot, tires crunching over loose rock until the sound gave way to pavement. Mireya and Sara watched until the taillights disappeared down the road, the faint rumble of the engine fading into the thick evening air.

Camila’s voice reached them again from the tree, her laugh bright enough to fill the space.
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Post by Captain Canada » 23 Oct 2025, 10:17

Sara subtly knowing that Mireya is throwing ass for dollars is strange, but I'm glad she has that mutual, struggling mother respect between the two of them.

Caine kind of getting back into the moving weight game feels a little too risky since it seems he's lining up to be the starting guy. Wholesome update overall, though.

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Post by redsox907 » 23 Oct 2025, 12:22

Caesar teased that bad shit usually happens around Mila's birthday, read the whole update waiting for the shoe to drop :shifty:

but we know its coming with Caine agreeing to harbor fugitives :curtain:

Also - Tyree going to dick down one of the stripper crew and find out Mireya stripping that way #soxstradamous
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Post by Caesar » 23 Oct 2025, 13:50

Captain Canada wrote:
23 Oct 2025, 10:17
Sara subtly knowing that Mireya is throwing ass for dollars is strange, but I'm glad she has that mutual, struggling mother respect between the two of them.

Caine kind of getting back into the moving weight game feels a little too risky since it seems he's lining up to be the starting guy. Wholesome update overall, though.
Strange? Hmmmm. We’ll have to see if that struggling mother respect holds going forward.

Caine said he ain’t even gotta be there for them to sleep there. :druski:
redsox907 wrote:
23 Oct 2025, 12:22
Caesar teased that bad shit usually happens around Mila's birthday, read the whole update waiting for the shoe to drop :shifty:

but we know its coming with Caine agreeing to harbor fugitives :curtain:

Also - Tyree going to dick down one of the stripper crew and find out Mireya stripping that way #soxstradamous
Correction. I said major things happen in these updates and well :curtain:

They gotta be accused and charged with crimes to be fugitives brodie.

Hmmmmm.

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Post by redsox907 » 23 Oct 2025, 14:18

SORRY

felons, not fugitives :dead:
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