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Post by Caesar » 20 Oct 2025, 15:39

He Can Make Crooked Places

The drive-through wrapped around the building in a slow coil that didn’t want to move. Sun sat high and hard. Heat burned up off the stained concrete and pushed through the open crack in E.J.’s window. The fryer hissed behind the brick wall and sent out a grease smell that clung to everything.

Kevin Gates rumbled low from the speakers, bass thudding through the doors. Dez kept time with it, head dipping, shoulder twitching at the hook. He watched the door like it might speed up if he looked long enough.

E.J. rested his wrist on the wheel and texted with his other hand, phone tilted so the glare didn’t wash it out.

Tessa: this job is boring already and it’s just the first day

He typed: ’yeah but it’s paying’

Dots showed, disappeared, came back.

’not going to mississippi.’

He sat in it a second. ’good. I ain’t want you that far from me’

’ yeah.’

He let the screen dim and set the phone face down in the cup holder. The car in front edged forward a few feet, then stopped. Paper taped over old prices on the menu sign clicked in the wind. Somewhere behind them a horn flashed.

They stayed quiet. The music did what it did.

Dez finally said, still looking straight ahead, “You be getting money with them boys y’all run with?”

E.J. slid his palm over the top of the wheel. “We alright.”

Dez nodded. “I just prefer runnin’ with a lil crew. Ain’t nobody forgetting you putting in work, too.”

“If people forgetting you getting money,” E.J. said, “then you ain’t getting enough money.”

Dez laughed under his breath. “Yeah, yeah. You right.”

The line inched. A worker shouldered the side door by the window and let it close behind her. Heat chased her out. Her face looked tired even in the short walk. She disappeared again.

Dez let the beat ride a little longer, then went, “You got a bitch?”

E.J. looked over once. “Something like that.”

“Yeah, yeah. I ain’t got no like main bitch but it’s always a movie, you know what I’m saying?”

E.J. turned his head a touch more. “Nigga, you talk a lot. You know that?”

Dez put a hand up like he knew. “My bad, I just get nervous sometimes.”

“Nervous?” E.J.’s eyebrow went up. “What, you jumped off the porch yesterday? We ain’t even got the shit in the car yet.”

“Nah, nah. You know how it is.”

“I don’t.” He let it breathe. “Niggas like Ant let niggas that get nervous hang around?”

Dez scratched at his jaw, smile tight. “Well, I don’t get nervous around him. That nigga fucking crazy, bruh.”

The worker came out again, hip popping the door. She had a greasy paper bag in one hand and two drinks pinched together in the other. She didn’t look at them, just shoved the food through the open window.

“Appreciate it,” E.J. said, low, already sliding the bag out of the way.

She sucked her teeth and grabbed the door with her elbow, yanking it open and vanishing back into the noise.

E.J. passed the bag to Dez and dropped the car into drive. Tires bumped over the cracked lip where the lot met the street. The light at the corner held red. Heat wavered above the hood.

Dez waited while they cleared the exit. “That kinda shit why a nigga like me go to Cane’s or Chick-Fil-A.”

E.J. glanced over, just his eyes. “Bruh, shut the fuck up until we get to the drop.”

Dez nodded. He started to say something else, mouth already open, then closed it. He reached into the bag and rustled past napkins, steam fogging his fingers. The bass rolled on. Cars slid by, fast and then slow again when the light flipped. E.J. steadied the wheel and followed the lane out into the hot afternoon with the bag heavy in Dez’s lap and the city pressing in on all sides.

~~~

The fellowship hall kept its own weather, fluorescents humming a steady pitch while old air pushed from the vents and slid over tile marked by years of folding tables. Caine carried two chairs in each hand and set them down with a soft knock, the legs landing on grout lines. The room still held a fading lemon-cleaner smell that had given up hours ago.

Outside the door, Caleb’s voice floated in, all business. A quick laugh that didn’t touch his throat. A promise to call back before the contract showed. Caine stepped out and came back with another stack from the shed. The hinges he’d oiled gave a short squeal and then minded themselves. He had the bins labeled now, cords coiled, chair carts where they belonged. In and out was easy.

He nudged the front row a hair to the right, lined the next pair, let his palm ride each back until the seats faced the same invisible point.

Low voices tightened outside the open door—Caleb and Laney, clipped. He couldn’t catch the words, only the feel. Laney’s short answers. Caleb’s wind-up. Then Laney stepped in, careful and steady, hands empty, eyes already counting.

She touched the first seatback, fingers quick, then bent to check the legs. The next one. Tap, glance, tap.

“I already got ’em lined up, boss lady,” Caine said without looking up.

Laney nodded but kept on. “Mmhmm.” She moved down the row anyway, like her hands needed a job while her mind tried to quiet.

Caine set another pair and sighted along the edges. “I got it,” he said. No heat in his words, just confirmation.

She didn’t stop. Another chair. Another check. Her fingertips jittered once, then stilled, energy hunting a place to land.

He stepped back and tipped his chin toward a bench against the wall. “Laney, sit down or something. I got it.”

She paused. Her hands found each other and started to work until she caught them.

“You know everything is how you want it already.”

A breath moved through her. She tried on stillness, half sat, then rose again as if the bench didn’t fit. He went back to the chairs because work was the easiest way to make peace.

“Why he don’t do this?” he asked after a beat, eyes on the line he was pulling true. He flicked a glance at the doorway where Caleb’s shadow dragged across the threshold.

“You need work to do,” she said.

He shook his head. “I know why I do it. I’m asking why he don’t. And you do.”

Laney shrugged. “We all got jobs.” It landed flat, neither defense nor complaint. She eased onto the bench this time, knees together, back straight.

Caleb walked in mid-call and wrapped it with a bright “alright then.” He dragged a chair a half foot out of the row and dropped into it, legs wide, the whole line bent around him. His gaze slid to Laney and settled long enough to set the tone.

“It’s almost dinner time,” he said. “You might wanna get home, because you know Gabrielle don’t know how to cook and them boys are going to starve if left with her.”

“¿No es una mujer adulta?” Caine said under his breath in Spanish, the words low in his chest.

Laney’s head turned a notch. She caught the words, the tone, but not the meaning. She smoothed her dress at the hip and stood.

“Let me finish up here then,” she said.

“I got it,” Caine told her again. Same words. Same weight. He tipped his chin at the door.

She looked like the protest wanted out, then she pressed her lips together and nodded. She started past Caleb.

“Remember that Gabi doesn’t really eat pork,” he said, stopping her with a finger in the air.

Something quick and sharp flashed through Laney’s eyes and was gone. “Alright.” She left.

The door swung, sighed, and settled. Caine stepped to the row Caleb had broken and put the chair back in its place.

Caleb crossed one leg over the other and let his eyes roam the room. “Getting good at this,” he said.

Caine slid one last chair into the back row, nudged its front feet onto the grout line, and checked the run of the aisle until the sight clicked. He lifted the stack cart back to the wall, coiled the extra strap, and let the quiet shape of the room settle.

~~~

Heat pressed up from the gravel and the busted blacktop, turning the lot bright enough to squint. Flags on a bent pole clicked against each other in a lazy breeze. The smell was tires and Armor All and old oil. Saul walked the front row slow, eyes skimming price cards taped crooked in the windshields. He kept to the ones with faded paint and hubcaps that didn’t match, the cars that would start if you asked nice and didn’t ask for more.

He stayed with numbers. Payment lines. Insurance guesses. Titles that might come clean if the papers were real. They needed something that ran and wouldn’t get them laughed out of an agency. Cheap enough that one name on a policy didn’t make the whole plan fall apart.

Down the third row a Hellcat sat in the sun, paint deep enough to hold the sky. Somebody had wiped it so hard the hood glared. Saul clocked it without stopping. That wasn’t why he was here.

He almost missed her.

Zoe stood near the front fender with one hand on her hip, hair pulled back off her face. The man they’d seen at the mall leaned with a salesman a few stalls over, talking low with that little forward tilt men used when they were buying. The salesman held a clipboard like it made him official. The man nodded and cut his eyes toward the office box at the edge of the lot, a single-wide with a window unit rattling.

Saul dropped his gaze to the Civic in front of him. The sticker said CASH ONLY and the pen had bled through the paper. He checked the tread on the front tire and listened to the road out on Chef, the honks, the off-beat bass, the quick siren that was already gone.

“Saul.”

He looked up quick. Zoe had already crossed the space between the rows. Up close the sun put a shine on her cheekbones. She kept her voice even.

“How you doing?”

He lifted one shoulder. “Alright.”

“I didn’t know you were trying to get a car.”

He nodded. “With Javi and Trent. None of us got the money to get it by ourself.”

Zoe’s mouth tipped once. “That’s pretty cool.”

He glanced past her and made a small gesture with his chin toward the man. “That your new dude?”

“Something like that,” she said.

The air hummed with the window unit’s rattle. A gull cut a line high and loud and then the sound faded under the freeway. Saul didn’t add anything to what he’d already said. He let the Civic’s hood warm his palm and read the cracked paint in the reflection.

Across the row the man called, sharp enough to carry. “Zoe.” He pointed toward the office with two fingers and then talked to the salesman again without waiting for her to answer.

“I’ll see you around, Saul,” she said.

“Yeah.”

She turned toward the building. Her shoes kicked little puffs of dust that stuck to her ankles. The man looked back over his shoulder, eyes cutting through the gap in the cars. A bit of anger lived there. Just a flare that said he’d clocked Saul. He snapped his chin again toward the office and the salesman fell in beside him.

Saul watched until the door shut and the window unit swallowed them both. The glass bounced his own shape back at him for a second—tall, thin, the sun sitting hard on his shoulders—then steadied.

He went back to the cheap row.

~~~

The kitchen stayed hot no matter how low they set the A/C. The air had weight to it, the heat clung to the paint. Mireya sat across from Angela at the small table with their laptops open, the screens lighting both their faces more than the single bulb overhead. The hum from the fridge was steady, the sound of it filling up the pauses between clicks.

On Mireya’s screen, the page loaded slow. The models stood in good light, all long legs and tiny smiles. The numbers next to the clothes didn’t even try to hide—three digits, no sale. She knew she should close the tab, go back to the discount sites, but her hand stayed on the trackpad. Then she leaned back and exhaled through her nose.

Angela made a face at her own screen. “I might really gotta get a job,” she said. “Living on your own tears your account up. I swear I blink and my money gone.”

Mireya huffed out a short laugh. “Tell me about it.”

Angela twisted a small hoop earring between her fingers. “They hiring at your job? I can clean. I don’t even care what it is.”

Mireya shook her head. “They only hire when one of the crews got an opening. And ain’t too many people giving up 18 an hour.”

“Fuck, but facts.” Angela took a drink from a sweating can, then set it next to the laptop. “You right about that.”

The smell of Dawn still hung from when they’d wiped the counters that morning. It mixed with a faint sweetness from an open box of cereal on the stove. Mireya checked the next tab, some cheaper site with pages that took forever to load. Everything looked worse.

“Paz being weird with you too?” she asked, eyes on the corner of the screen.

Angela looked up. “With me? I ain’t noticed nothing. She just gets mad when Tyree’s hard to reach.”

Mireya raised an eyebrow. “She know what Tyree does?”

Angela’s shrug came slow. “He goes to, like, UNO, right? He’s crazy for starting right after graduating. I had to take a break.”

Mireya didn’t answer. Her laptop chimed—an email sliding into view. She clicked it before she could think twice. The UNO logo filled notification at the top of the screen. “Your Fee Bill Is Ready.”

Her throat felt tight. She opened it. The screen lagged, then settled on the number. After the scholarship, she still owed $2,700. Payment due in under a month.

Her jaw worked once. She opened a spreadsheet she kept minimized, a running list she checked too often: rent, utilities, groceries, gas, what she paid Elena for Camila. The number for child care would jump to almost eight hundred a month once daycare started—days only, still too high. She typed a new line at the bottom, 2700, and watched the total at the bottom stretch.

Angela tapped her trackpad again. “You good?”

“Yeah,” Mireya said, still staring at the screen. She clicked out of the spreadsheet and back to the site with clothes she shouldn’t buy. The colors there looked cleaner, fabrics that didn’t pill after a wash. She scrolled anyway, a quiet escape.

Angela’s voice pulled her back. “Okay, tell me the truth.” She turned her laptop so Mireya could see. “Can I pull this off?”

On the screen was a dress so short it might not survive a bend forward. The kind that needed confidence to wear more than it needed fabric. Mireya tilted her head. “Don’t see why not.”

Angela grinned. “You lying.”

“I’m not.”

Angela’s grin spread until it softened into a laugh. “I’m trying to get like you, my girl.”

Mireya smiled despite herself and shook her head. “You stupid.”

Angela still laughed, clicking the picture to zoom in, muttering something about saving it for later. The fan clicked with every slow rotation. Outside, someone shouted about selling shirts. The sound felt far away, like it belonged to another world.

Mireya closed the window with the expensive clothes and opened the one with her email again. The balance sat there, unmoved. Twenty-seven days. She stared a second longer, then went back to the blank search bar. It didn’t matter what she typed next. It all cost.
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Post by Captain Canada » 20 Oct 2025, 17:20

I see Caine (probably unintentionally) plating those seeds of doubt in Laney. Shordy living in her own little Hell over there.

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Post by redsox907 » 20 Oct 2025, 19:24

Caesar wrote:
19 Oct 2025, 23:42
Jaslene spoke without looking at Mireya. “Yeah. Y un poco de esto, un poco de aquello.”
told ya that bihh selling pussy - her and Mireya going to be besties here soon once Mireya decides thats the way to pay for college

also, Caleb on the list now too. You don't talk to Laney like that. we don't even like her husband treating her like a slave, but her brother? Run that fade Caine

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Post by Soapy » 21 Oct 2025, 07:30

Caine and Caleb

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Post by Caesar » 21 Oct 2025, 07:36

Captain Canada wrote:
20 Oct 2025, 17:20
I see Caine (probably unintentionally) plating those seeds of doubt in Laney. Shordy living in her own little Hell over there.
Any seeds you see being planted are certainly unintentional by Mr. Guerra. He just living his life and doing his job.
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20 Oct 2025, 19:24
Caesar wrote:
19 Oct 2025, 23:42
Jaslene spoke without looking at Mireya. “Yeah. Y un poco de esto, un poco de aquello.”
told ya that bihh selling pussy - her and Mireya going to be besties here soon once Mireya decides thats the way to pay for college

also, Caleb on the list now too. You don't talk to Laney like that. we don't even like her husband treating her like a slave, but her brother? Run that fade Caine
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But you gotta stop acting like Mireya was out there on the corner :pgdead:

This man got a whole list for Caine to take out. Damn.
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21 Oct 2025, 07:30
Caine and Caleb

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First you were saying Tommy needed to keep a gun for Caine and now you saying Caleb is going to attack Caine? You just want all these country boys to do something to Caine, huh?!
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Post by Caesar » 21 Oct 2025, 07:36

The Same God that Left You Last Time Will Leave You This Time

The tunnel pressed close and held the dark. Cell phones lifted the dark by inches at a time, blue-white cones cutting wet concrete and the shine of old water along the wall. Ricardo’s backpack dragged his shoulder down. He kept to the man in front, bootfalls cautious on damp ground, the other man a shape at his back. Breath and the small digital buzz of three phones made the only sound.

The light ahead flared against wood. The first man stopped and aimed his beam up. “Este es,” he said. The hatch sat low enough for a palm. A ladder disappeared into it, aluminum cold and ringing when he tested a foot. He shoved the board and it lifted, nails squeaking. Hotter air leaked down, dust in it.

He went first. His shoes flexed on each rung. Above, his shoulder cleared into a cramped storage room—metal racks, shrink-wrap rolls, a line of mop handles against cinderblock. Ricardo planted a foot and followed, knee knocking the ladder once on the way up. He pushed through the square and grabbed the lip of the hatch to shift his weight quiet. The last man came up fast behind and eased the board back into place.

The first man’s phone threw a rectangle on his face while he dialed. He kept it short. “Estamos aqui.” No names. He killed the call, screen going black and turning the room into shadow with edges. A hum lived in the warehouse past the door, a sodium light buzz and a far fan. He crossed to a side door with a view slit. Outside was night and bleached concrete and then white light running up the wall.

Another light slid into the first and the colors went wrong. Red braided into blue and then back to white in harsh pulses. Sirens wound up from nothing into a tight wall of sound.

The first man hissed and backed off the slit. “¡La Migra! ¡La Migra! ¡La Migra!” The words snapped him into motion. He dropped his backpack where he stood and the phone went with it, skidding. He ran for the back hall. The second man grabbed nothing and sprinted after him. A Border Patrol SUV nosed across the far corner of the building with a hard brake squeal. Tires barked.

Ricardo didn’t freeze. He reached down and scooped the first man’s pack with one hand and palmed the fallen phone with the other. Weight pulled his elbow. He cut to the nearest narrow window, set his shoulder, and threw the bag through. The glass popped and coughed cubes into the dark. He put both hands on the sill and went out behind it, chest tight in the frame, belly catching. He dropped and his shoes hit broken glass, then grit.

Another set of lights washed the side of the building. Radio chatter bled across the lot. “¡Manos arriba! ¡Pon las manos donde pueda verlas!” a voice cut and rose and cut again. Doors slammed. Boots slapped pavement. He slung the strap high and ran.

Between buildings, the air carried the stink of trapped heat and pallets that had soaked spills too long. The phone in his palm wouldn’t shut up its screen. He shoved it under the strap and kept his head down, shoulders low. Sirens chased each other into corners and ricocheted back. Tires squealed at the end of the alley and a beam fanned along the bricks, bright enough to burn shape out of shadow. “¡Alto! ¡Manos donde pueda verlas!” someone yelled. He kept moving.

He cut right through the seam between two low warehouses and out into a thin strip of street with a corner store at the far end. A pickup sat in the slot nearest the curb, dark. His legs burned. He threw both bags into the bed. The pack thumped and slid on the corrugated metal.

The nearest rock was just a rounded thing by a dead weed. He grabbed it, swung quick, and cracked the passenger window. Safety glass gave way in a powdery sigh. The smell inside was vinyl and old oil. He cleared the edge with a sleeve and dove in headfirst, shoulders vanishing into the footwell. He knew where hands went. Column shroud. Ignition harness tucked back. He ripped plastic. Wires blinked in the phone light when he bit it between his teeth. He laid the bundles apart with his fingers, fast, gentle, no wasted motion.

“¡Conductor! ¡Fuera del vehículo!” The voice came from somewhere behind him, twice as loud now. Another siren tore past the cross street and a third SUV whipped into view through the windshield, rear quarter rocking as it braked to make the turn. Ricardo stripped the end of a wire with the nail of his thumb, pressed copper to copper, and felt the cylinder twitch. He twisted. The truck coughed, died, then caught with a rough growl that shook his chest against the carpet.

He shoved himself up, glass crunching under his palm, and slid across to the driver’s seat. He kept his head low. In his mirror the SUV at the corner threw light like a shock. Another one swung wide at the far end of the block, grille high, tires biting. A shout hit the cab. “¡Detén el camión! Manos—”

He dropped the shifter into drive. The pedal sucked under his foot and the truck lurched. The rear fishtailed once over glittering glass, found grip, and straightened. He cut the wheel and skimmed the store’s awning so close it snapped a loose banner. The third SUV roared through the cross street behind him, nose dipping as it braked and then shooting past the slot he had just vacated. He punched through the gap before the one behind could close it.

Blocks stacked on blocks. He picked the dark lanes. A dumpster turned a corner into a tunnel for him and swallowed the lights long enough that his breath came back to his throat. He didn’t try to outrun the sirens. He tried to out-turn them. Past a roll-up door. Past a chain-link gate yawning open on a dock. Past a row of busted AC units that blew hot air on his windshield.

He saw the town open in front of him along a ridge of darker sky. Streetlights lined a run of low storefronts. A hand-painted sign for a check-cashing spot. A shuttered taquería with papel picado left to fade in the glass. He didn’t look for a highway. He found a service road that peeled off.

Behind him the sound thinned. One siren turned away and met another. Red and blue bled on the face of a long wall and then slid off. The truck engine settled into its own loud that didn’t argue. He rolled his shoulders off his ears and kept the speed just under what screamed.

The bed rattled with what he had saved. The abandoned phone buzzed once under the strap. He checked the mirrors, checked again, and let the dark carry him. He didn’t see the border anymore. He saw pavement and the next turn and a line of black sky that belonged to this town whether they liked it or not.

He disappeared into Nogales.

~~~

Laney sat at the bar with a beer sweating a ring on the wood and a tray of wings set close enough to smell pepper and vinegar. Four TVs ran the Braves and Mets from different angles, the sound turned down under the scrape of chairs and the low talk of a weeknight crowd. Neon washed the bottles dull. She kept one eye on the infield, then her phone in her lap, thumb waking the screen. No texts from her mama. No questions about supper or the boys or where she’d put the extra bibles. The lie about bibles had slid easy over the phone. It was near seven. Mama hadn’t asked why she’d go then.

A pitch popped the catcher’s glove and she checked the count blinking at the bottom of the screen. She lifted the beer and took a long pull, cool running quick and gone. Tommy was off in Oklahoma for the next three months. She told herself she just needed a break. Something she wouldn’t see too often for the near future.

Two men slid onto the stools to her right, the scrape of metal on tile neat and practiced. They ordered without looking at a menu. The man closest to her cut his eyes, took a second look, then turned full, grin already spreading.

“That Delaney Hadden I see sittin’ up in Swainsboro?” he said.

Laney kept the bottle near her mouth. “That’s Matthews now, Elston.”

Elston tapped his friend’s arm and pointed her way like he’d dug up a relic. “Boy, you see this one here? Back in the day, this lil’ white girl right here used to come up here and cut up with us. Drank us all under the table. Hennessy, Crown, ain’t matter none. Then she’d haul her pretty ass back down to Claxton, win them beauty pageants, play ball, actin’ all prim and proper again. Whole different person.”

“That was a long time ago,” she said, eyes on the TV where the shortstop shaded a step and set.

“Long enough? Naw,” Elston said. “My wife still don’t like your ass. You nor that friend of yours, Taela.”

Laney let out a low laugh. “Mae shouldn’t much like you either. You ever learn how to stay faithful, Elston?”

He lifted his hand, thumb rubbing the wedding band, grin stretching wide. “Four years and six kids later, look like I did somethin’ right.”

“What brings you out this way?” he asked.

Laney tipped the tray so he could see the red stain building under the pile. “I wanted these.”

He chuckled. “They good, but they ain’t that good.”

“Beauty’s in the eye of the beholder, ain’t it?”

“Mm-hm, guess you right on that.” He leaned back, the edge of memory easing in his tone. “You remember that night y’all came up and we went out to that field in Dellwood—what that was, fifteen? sixteen?”

“Two thousand sixteen,” she said, turning a bone and setting it aside clean.

“Mm, yeah. That was a wild night, ain’t it?”

“Key there is was.”

“You right ‘bout that,” he said with a little shake of his head. “Once that soldier snatched you up, it was ovah for that Laney.”

“And rightfully so.”

Elston’s friend bumped his shoulder and gestured down the rail toward a louder knot of men. Glass hit wood in front of them. Elston caught his drink.

“Well, it’s good seein’ you, Laney.”

She tipped the bottle in a small salute. “Elston.”

They slid off their stools, half turned before their feet hit the floor, already laughing with the other group. Laney let her phone light her thigh one more time. Nothing from Mama. She set the phone face down and eased a napkin under the wing tray.

On the screens the camera cut to the mound. The Mets hitter swung his bat in a circle then got set. The bar hummed steady. A fryer coughed and went quiet. She pulled another wing from the stack, steam still rolling off the joint, and bit through skin that cracked just right. Salt and heat hit her tongue. She chased it with a sip of beer, then lifted her chin, eyes on the turn at second.

The grounder went true to short. Flip to the bag. The relay left the glove a hair low and tailed. First baseman stretched and dragged, toe flirting with chalk. The runner thundered through the frame. On the screen it looked there in time. The ump kept his hands at his sides.

Her lip curled up, small and private. She set the exposed bone on the pile and wiped her fingers slow. The Braves reset behind the mound and the inning kept on without the out she wanted. She reached for another wing and watched.

~~~

The AC in the makeshift dressing room sounded tired, more breath than cool air. Mireya sat on the vinyl couch with her hoodie zipped to her collarbone and leggings salt-dusted at the knees, the fabric warm against her skin. She hadn’t touched her hair. Not a strand pinned. Not a lash glued. It was a slow night, slow enough that the bass from the main floor came and went like a distant storm over the river, and the only steady rhythm in the room was the slap of cards on the table.

Bianca, Liana, and Hayley had a Tonk game going at the vanity they’d claimed. Cards snapped down. Nails clicked. A pile of singles and a crumpled five sat under a lip gloss tube someone had turned into a paperweight. Their trash talk had no audience but each other and the big mirror throwing back their shoulder straps and smudged highlighter.

C.J. and Maren kept to the far side, heads close, whispering. They watched their own reflections more than anyone else. They didn’t look over. They never did.

Mireya stretched her legs out under the table until her heels hit the edge and then pulled them back. She checked the time on her phone and flipped it facedown. The bass pulsed once. Faded. Bianca put another card down hard.

“Run me my money, bitch,” Bianca said, and the word bounced off the lockers.

The door banged open. Alejandra came in with her robe thrown loose and her chin set, a tight heat in her face. The fabric billowed behind her as she crossed the room. Bills were crushed in her fist. She dropped into the couch corner next to Bianca and slapped the money onto the table. The pile spread thin.

“We’re paying to be here at this point,” Alejandra said. She swung her legs up and planted both feet on the table edge, toes pointed, ankles crossed. The robe fell back to show oil sheen on her calves. She let her head tip onto the couch’s backrest, staring up at the water-stained ceiling tile.

Bianca laughed, the sound quick and bright. “Good thing you came back from Houston with hella bread then, huh?”

Alejandra shook her head without moving her gaze. “I spent some of that already.”

Hayley flicked a card onto the pile. “No one told you to go to Commander’s.”

Alejandra turned just enough to squint at her. “Where were you?”

Hayley didn’t look up, just lined up another card with her thumb. “At Commander’s with you.”

The room loosened with the laugh that rolled through it. Even the bass seemed to grin for a beat before it faded again. Liana leaned over the cards and tried to hide her smile behind her hair, but it spilled out anyway.

Mireya parted her lips, the question already shaped on her tongue. How much y’all make out there? It stopped in her throat. She closed her mouth. Her fingers tucked deeper under the sleeves at her wrists. The hoodie held her in.

A neon wash from the hallway slid under the door and then broke as it opened again. Stasia stepped in. She didn’t raise her voice. She scanned the room, found Mireya, and crook-beckoned with two fingers.

Mireya stood. The couch released the back of her thighs with a soft peel. She kept her hood down, the cotton catching at the base of her neck. She followed Stasia into the corridor where the light hummed and the wall paint looked new but smelled like it hadn’t dried right. The noise from the main floor sharpened out there. Men’s voices rose and flattened. Ice rattled in a metal bin. Somebody laughed a room away.

They walked past the restroom line and into a strip of dim where the EXIT sign bled red over a dented service door. Stasia stopped there, out of the flow.

“How are you doing?” Stasia asked.

Mireya shrugged, one shoulder first and then the other. “Fine, I guess.”

Stasia’s eyes took a slow pass over the hoodie, the plain leggings, the bare face. She tilted her head a fraction. “Are you enjoying the work and earning enough?”

“I’m getting used to it,” Mireya said. “But I don’t think there is such a thing as earning enough.”

Stasia smiled, small and satisfied, like that answer lined up with something she already knew. “That’s why we wanted you here.”

The EXIT light hummed. Somewhere down the hall a door latch clicked. Mireya kept her hands inside her sleeves.

“I’m going to ask you something and feel free to not answer it,” Stasia said.

“Okay.”

“Did you have something to do with what happened to Leo?”

The hallway pressed close at the ears. For a beat Mireya just let the question exist between them. Then she nodded once and said, “Yes.”

Stasia’s smile warmed and widened. She reached up and patted Mireya’s cheek with two fingers, light. “Good.”

She turned to go, her heels soft against the scuffed floor, then tossed it over her shoulder as she moved, not breaking stride. “Tell the girls we’re taking a smaller cut tonight since it’s slow.”

Mireya stayed where she was. The red EXIT glow painted her knuckles where her sleeves had slid back. She counted a breath. Two. The bass picked up again and ran along the baseboards.

She went back the way she’d come, passing the restroom line and the storage door that never latched right. One of the bartenders pushed a dolly stacked with crates and edged it by her without looking up. Ice hit a bucket and hissed against metal. The main-floor lights flared and flattened.

Mireya stepped in and let the door fall closed behind her. The sound of the latch clicked back into place.

~~~

The bar carried that sticky mix of beer, bleach, and smoke that never left even when nobody was supposed to smoke inside. Light came off the TVs in soft blue pulses. A muted baseball game ran over the heads of the crowd. Caine sat near the middle, elbow on the bar, drink half-gone. The stool wobbled when he leaned. Nights ran together lately, each one bleeding into the next. Statesboro had a bar for every block and most of them didn’t care who they served so long as you looked old enough to bluff. A student ID did the rest.

Kordell sat next to him, hand wrapped around his glass, grinning at nothing in particular. “Man, this town remind me of Iowa,” he said.

Caine looked sideways. “Because it’s bumfuck and you gotta wonder if all the white folks racist?”

“Nah,” Kordell said. “We had this lil’ spot out in the sticks, old folks house turned bar. Only thing they served was what people made in they sheds. Straight moonshine.”

Caine huffed out a small laugh, head dropping a little. “Sounds like some shit gon’ leave you blind.”

“Probably so,” Kordell said, unfazed. “Didn’t stop nobody.”

Music switched tracks overhead, some country remix trying to please both sides of the room. A few kids hollered along even though they didn’t know the words. The bartender passed, collecting bills and dropping clean glasses still hot from the washer. Caine’s reflection in the mirror behind the bottles looked softer under the colored lights—eyes dulled, edges blurred by the hum of the night.

He reached for his glass again, the ice clinking low. Then the door opened and let a rush of laughter and perfume roll through. Rylee stepped inside with two of her friends, boots tapping quick on tile, denim catching the neon. She spotted him before he had. Her grin stretched slow across her face as she made her way over, the crowd parting without meaning to. She leaned a hand on the back of his stool, close enough that her sleeve brushed his shoulder.

“I forgive you,” she said.

Caine turned, a smirk already set there. “For what?”

“For not tellin’ me your baby mama was gon’ show up at your apartment and kick me out.”

He let out a low laugh, short and warm, then reached up and tipped the brim of her hat with his finger until it slid back off her eyebrow. “Technically you left before I told you to leave.”

Rylee shook her head, smile breaking wider. “Still a dick move either way.”

“Is that you getting jealous, Ms. Hadden?” he asked. “Ain’t you the one said you didn’t want nothing serious?”

“I did,” she said. “But I meant ‘round here. Not with girls you roll out the red carpet for. That’s different.”

He shrugged, shoulders rolling easy. The lights off the bottles painted his forearm gold, then red, then gold again. The room around them lifted and dropped with every beat. Someone behind them shouted for shots. Somebody else laughed too loud. None of it cut between them.

Rylee tapped the counter with her nail, her bracelets catching light. “To make up for it, you’re buyin’ me a few drinks,” she said, voice playful but sure. “Then when we’re done here, we’re goin’ back to your place.”

Caine leaned back a little, grin deepening. “You know I do like that hat.”

Rylee winked, the gesture quick, practiced. “I know you do.” She turned away, boots clicking against the floor, hips rocking with the rhythm of the next song as she went back to her friends at a high-top table near the window. They all leaned in when she got there, the sound of her laugh floating back over the crowd.

Caine looked down at his glass, the ring of condensation spreading slow across the wood. The mirror behind the bar caught her reflection once before she sat, then lost her in the crowd. The hum of the place filled back in—the sound of the register drawer, the scrape of chairs, a student talking too loud about a game that hadn’t even started yet.

Kordell’s head turned, eyes following the line of Rylee’s walk until she disappeared from sight. He laughed under his breath, shaking his head like he couldn’t help it. “That bitch bad on some shit.”

Caine took a sip from his drink and didn’t say anything to that.
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Post by Captain Canada » 21 Oct 2025, 11:18

She either getting her ass beat by Mireya or pregnant by Caine. Book it.
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Post by Caesar » 22 Oct 2025, 07:14

Captain Canada wrote:
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She either getting her ass beat by Mireya or pregnant by Caine. Book it.
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