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Post by Caesar » 22 Sep 2025, 11:16

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The light in the kitchen came up slow, the kind that made the tile look damp even when it was clean. The window over the sink held a gray slice of morning. A bus coughed somewhere two blocks over. The air smelled like bleach and coffee and the last of last night’s dinner that no one had complained about because it meant they ate.

They sat across from each other at the small table that had seen too many mornings. Caine’s graduation cap sat between them, the purple-and-gold tassel pooled in a neat coil. Sara held the tassel at the end, rubbing the wrapped threads with her thumb the way you might test fabric in a store and decide you couldn’t afford it anyway.

Her eyes were wet, but she wasn’t crying. She kept her chin up.

“You know you the first one,” she said, voice low, like the walls might try to take the words back. “Primero de la familia to finish high school.”

Caine nodded once. He didn’t reach for the cap. He watched her instead, the set of her mouth, the way her shoulders carried work even when she sat. The city was already awake beyond the window, tires on wet street, a distant siren that rose and fell.

“It wasn’t that long ago,” she said, looking at the tassel. “I thought I was never gonna see you out here again.” She lifted her eyes to him. “Not like this. Not free. Not sitting in my kitchen talking about regular things.”

He let a breath out slow. “I got lucky,” he said. No bravado in it. No defense.

Sara shook her head. The smallest, stubborn motion. She set the tassel down like it might bruise. Then she stood, the chair legs scraping soft, and dragged the little step stool across the tile with the careful sounds of morning—quiet, respectful of sleeping rooms.

The stool clicked against a cracked grout line. She climbed and reached over the cabinets to where grease turned dust into film and took down the Virgin Mary who watched the house from up high.

On the way back down, she held the statue in both hands. At the table, she flipped it, worked the plastic stopper free with a nail, and pulled a tight fold of bills from the hollow. The rubber band sighed when she slid it off. She dind’t count it.

La Virgen went back to her place above them. Sara sat again and set the money in front of Caine with the soft care she used for him since he was a child. The bills rested there between the cap and his hands.

“I know you been putting in with ours,” she said. “Con la familia.” Her mouth tugged, something between pride and worry.

“I could guess where it came from.” She drew a breath. “I don’t want those specifics.”

Caine’s hand stayed flat on the table. He didn’t touch the money. The siren had faded. In its place came the wobble of a neighbor’s window unit kicking and a pigeon’s dumb coo from the sill.

“For college,” she said, pushing the stack closer with two fingers. “Llévalo. I want you to take it.”

He lifted his eyes to hers. “Y’all need it.”

“We always need it,” she said, almost smiling. “We never not gonna need it.” She reached and nudged the money again until it touched the heel of his palm. “Please take it, mijo.”

The word softened something in him that nothing else could. He pulled the stack toward him and slid it under his hand, not hiding it, just claiming it. The cap’s tassel brushed his knuckle. He looked at the cap for a heartbeat and then back at her.

“I’m gonna try to get to Georgia for your games,” she said, voice brightening at the edges like she was trying it on to see if it fit. “Todos. All of them.”

A short laugh climbed out of him, easy. “I might not even start.”

Sara leaned across the table, closing the space. Her palm came to his cheek, warm and steady, thumb light against the stubble he hadn’t bothered to shave before dawn. He didn’t flinch. He leaned into it.

“You been beating the odds since you were born,” she said.

The fridge motor kicked on and held a low hum. Somewhere in the building a shower pipe knocked. The city moved through the walls like it always did, asking for more. He kept his face in her hand a second longer, the money under his palm, the cap between them, the morning still small enough to believe in.

~~~

Elena’s closet mirror had a nick along one side that bent things just a little. Mireya stood square to it in the green gown, chin tilted, the cap’s elastic tight under her hair. She pinched the zipper tab and tugged it up until it lay flat at her collarbone. The fabric made a dry whisper when she shifted. Heat pressed at the back of her neck. A box fan hummed in the window, a rattle at the end of each turn.

Outside, a car groaned to life and moved on. On the bed, the spread was thin and smooth. Plastic blocks scraped across wood in small bright clicks.

“You look good, girl,” Angela said, tilting her own cap and peering close into the mirror next to Mireya. She tugged the front of her gown and made a face that was half a grin. “Not as good as me, though.”

Paz stood in the doorway with her gown draped over her forearm. She let it fall and stepped into it, careful not to drag the hem. “If I trip, I’m telling y’all now I meant to.”

Mireya smoothed the front again, the heel of her hand making a faint line in the fabric that disappeared as soon as she lifted it. The cap sat heavy. In her head there was a table under a red light. Alejandra’s quick hands. Hayley’s stacks. Even all ones, it had to be hundreds. The number lived in her chest.

Angela adjusted her cap and checked her profile. “My abuelo slid me a few hundred for graduation. So I’m back on it. End of next month, we out for a couple days after we walk. I’m serious this time.”

Paz nodded, eyes on the way her sleeves sat at her wrists. “School’s winding down. I been working more at the boutique. I can probably make it work.”

“I’m still broke,” Mireya said, eyes on her own mouth in the glass, the way it tried to be a smile and didn’t make it.

Angela waved a hand, the tassel flipping. “I got you. Stop playing.”

On the bed, Elena sat cross-legged with the tub of blocks between her knees. Camila leaned against her thigh, baby body warm and heavy, curls loose from the morning brush. Elena set two blocks one on top of the other and tapped them to stick. “Mira, mami. Así,” she told Camila, voice soft like a song.

Camila copied, tongue tucked between her lips, and the little tower fell. She laughed at the sound it made on the floor.

Elena looked up at Mireya. “Reya, is Tía Maria going to be at the graduation?”

The room tightened. Mireya’s eyes met Elena’s in the mirror. She shook her head. “I don’t think so.”

Elena nodded once and turned back to Camila, steady hands, a new block offered like a piece of fruit. Angela’s eyes slid away. Paz watched the hem of her own gown. The fan kept humming, air moving but not enough.

Camila looked up. She had caught the piece of quiet the question left behind. Her small face studied Mireya’s. “Pretty,” she said, round and sure.

Mireya let a breath out she didn’t know she was holding. The cap tilted. “Come here,” she said, and her voice came gentle without thinking. She turned from the mirror and opened her arms.

Camila came with the quick little steps. Mireya bent, the gown rustling, and lifted her. Camila’s weight settled perfect against her. The cap slipped from Mireya’s fingers and landed soft on the bed. The tassel brushed the sheet and stayed there.

She held Camila close and pressed her face into her hair. The scent of coconut from last night’s braids and warm sleep. The damp at the nape of Camila’s neck. The tiny sound she made when she sighed and let herself be held. The room could have been anyone’s room, but this part was only theirs, a quiet spot cut from the morning.

Camila said it into Mireya’s neck without looking. “Gween.”

Mireya shifted Camila higher on her hip and the gown bunched, then fell straight again. She felt the press of the day waiting on the other side of the door. The thought of the trip slid across her mind and didn’t stick. The picture in her head stayed small and far like something across a street you could not cross yet.

Outside, a gull made that ugly choke of a call. A siren wound up somewhere and unwound again. Heat worked its way into the room no matter how the fan complained. The candle’s sweetness thinned and left the clean bite of bleach.

Camila pulled back enough to see her face. Her hands were warm on Mireya’s cheeks. “Pretty,” she said again, like she was putting the word where it belonged.

Mireya smiled. It reached her eyes and stayed. She closed them and pressed her face into Camila’s hair.

~~~

The elevator numbers ticked down slow above the chrome doors, a red bead walking from six to five to four. Morning noise bent around the marble—footsteps, a bailiff’s voice calling a name down the hall, paper sliding inside manila. Fluorescent light hummed. The air tasted like dust and cold coffee.

Roussel came up from the corridor with that steady, unhurried gait. He stopped a step off the elevator line, set himself where he could see the atrium and the stairwell both. His tie sat too tight against his throat. His eyes tracked the numbers once and then slid to the woman at the call button.

“Babin.” His mouth barely moved when he said it.

She didn’t turn her head. The file in her hand was squared to her palm, edges flush. The elevator sighed somewhere above them. A clerk hustled past carrying a stack of notices that bowed in the middle. The smell of printer toner followed.

“You know he was dirty whole time,” Roussel said, almost easy. “You don’t have any sense for what they do on the outside. Just what you get when they get here. That’s why I’ve sent more men back than you ever will.”

Jill’s jaw shifted once \. The red bead dropped to three. Behind them, the metal detector chirped twice, then went quiet again. A deputy laughed once at something and then bit it down.

“You couldn’t prove anything,” she said. Her eyes stayed on the doors. “That’s the problem. There’s no proof anyone he’s been seen with is affiliated. He spends his time with his kid and her mother. I’m not taking that loss twice. I have bigger aspirations than this shit hole.”

Roussel’s mouth curled, not a smile. The shoes on his feet sat solid on the polished floor, toes pointed square at the seam where the doors would part. “They’re all criminals. You just have to prove it.” He let the space hang a breath. “I wouldn’t expect anything less from someone who likes what you like.”

A pair of public defenders came off the stairwell, chatter falling off when they clocked the two of them standing tight by the doors. Jill blinked once, slow. The red bead hit two, then one. A stale draft pushed from the shaft like breath from a throat.

The elevator car settled with a little shudder. The doors peeled back.

Jill stepped forward without looking at him. Her voice didn’t lift or slant. It was a line drawn with a ruler.

“Go fuck yourself, you fucking troglodyte.”

The words fell flat and clean and stayed where they landed. She crossed the threshold of the elevator, pressed a button with the side of her knuckle, and turned to face the doors. The fluorescent light caught in the glass behind her like frost.

Roussel’s shoulders loosened. He breathed through his nose and it came out almost a laugh. He didn’t step closer. The hall kept moving around them—heels clicking, a cart’s wheels bumping over a seam, a voice telling someone “next docket’s upstairs.”

His eyes flicked once to her and went past her to the mirrored wall. The doors began to close. Jill’s face didn’t change. Her hand hung easy by her side, file still squared to her palm. The steel met itself with a soft kiss.

Roussel turned on his heel, the slap of his soles spaced even. Behind him the elevator carriage rose, the red bead climbing back up into the building like heat.

He didn’t look back. The hallway’s cold air folded over the space where they had stood, and the courthouse went on speaking in its paper voices.

~~~

The car rattled as Caine eased it beneath the overpass. A train horn moaned somewhere deeper in the city and the echo crawled along the concrete ribs overhead. The lot smelled like wet dust and old oil. A grocery cart with a bent wheel lay on its side near a broken pallet. Ahead, a line of pigeons paced the shadow edge, waiting for the sun to slip around the pillar.

He cut the engine and let the silence settle in layers. Heat crept up through the floorboard. He pulled a crumpled pack of wipes from his hoodie pocket, thumbed one free, and set to work. Steering wheel first, slow circles until the gray came up clean on the cloth. He pinched the seam of the interior handle, dragged the damp edge along it, then leaned out and did the exterior handle too. He closed the door with his forearm and did the outside handle again. He took his time.

The wind under the bridge carried a trace of fry grease and bleach from somewhere blocks away. A siren unspooled and then faded. Caine tucked the used wipe into a sandwich bag in his pocket and looked out across the lot. He adjusted his cap, rolled his shoulders once, and walked toward the bus stop with the car dead and his breath unhurried.



Ramon had both hands on the wheel, fingers tapping a flat rhythm against cracked leather. Tyree sat behind him, magazines open across his knees, bullets clicking as he pushed them down. E.J. checked the slide on his piece, racked and eased, lips pressed thin. The three of them smelled like gun oil and laundry soap gone sour. They didn’t talk. Street rolled by in a blur of chain link and weeds, then warehouses with their windows blacked by grime.

Ramon braked at the mouth of a block. A second car eased up alongside, low and slow. Deon drove. Sosa rode shotgun, a paper cup pressed into his knee leaving a wet ring. Lalo leaned forward between the seats, eyes moving quick. Deon cut his gaze at Ramon.

Ramon lifted his chin toward the slab of a building ahead, roll-up door already open to the warm night. “That’s it.”

The street belonged to the heat and the sound of small stones turning under tires. Somewhere a dog barked. The second car drifted forward a car length and stopped. The six men sat still for one breath, two. Then they moved.



The warehouse held the flavor of old wood and men who stayed too long inside. Tito sat back into the cratered couch like it remembered him, glass of Hennessy planted heavy on his thigh. He wore the day like it bored him.

Tee Tito and the crew circled loose in the middle of the open floor, words flung back and forth, a laugh snapping out, then the low talk returning. They said nothing anyone needed to remember. A fan in the corner clicked at the same spot every turn.



Ramon pulled first along the right side of the building, Tyree and E.J. falling in behind him, their steps paced and quiet. The concrete wall held a chill in the shade even as the air grew thick. Across the open mouth of the yard, Deon slipped to the opposite corner and flattened, Sosa and Lalo ghosting behind him. Ramon peeked, saw Deon peeking back. A single nod passed between them like a lit fuse.

They ran out as one, hard into the light, guns up. The sound turned the air into glass. Tee Tito’s chest jumped under the first spray and he folded, knees banging the floor. A card table flipped and clattered. Two of Tee Tito’s guy reached for what was not yet in their hands and that hesitation wrote their obituaries. Deon kept stepping, kept shooting. Tyree pivoted, stitched the far wall with rounds and then corrected. E.J. drove forward on the left, mouth open but making no sound, focus narrowed down to the line of his arms.

Sosa saw the old man push up from the couch, the glass rolling off his thigh and tapping once, twice before it fell. Tito’s eyes had gone empty and hot at the same time, the way a stove looks when the fire is thin and blue. He reached for nothing that could help him. He took one step toward the boy he had named after himself.

Sosa tracked him, brought the sight to center, and let the decision be a simple thing. The shot took Tito in the head and put him down like the couch had snagged his ankle and yanked. The whole room breathed out.

Shells tinked and spun and went silent. Smell of powder soaked into everything. Someone’s phone buzzed in a pocket no one would answer. A fly coasted in through the rectangle and changed its mind.

They left as fast as they arrived, running back to their cars and leaving behind a scene of chaos and gore.



Under the overpass, Caine eased the second car into place, nose in, windows up. He killed the engine and let the tick of cooling metal count the seconds for him. He reached for the wipes again. Steering wheel. Interior handle. Exterior handle. He bent and scrubbed the lower edge of the door where his jeans might have brushed. He worked the cloth into the seam of the window switch. He looked at his knuckles, dark and nicked, then finished and rolled the dirty wipe into itself and slid it into the bag with the first one.

He stepped back and looked at the car like it was already someone else’s problem. The pigeons had moved. A drip fell slow from a joint in the concrete above and marked a chalk ring where earlier drips had found the same spot over and over. Caine checked the empty edge of the lot, the vacant mouth of the underpass, the bright triangle at the street.

He had made it five steps from the car when tires screamed across the gravel. The sedan fishtailed and recovered, nose punching toward a pillar before it jerked straight. Ramon poured out of the driver seat before the engine settled. Tyree and E.J. spilled out after him with their movement too quick and too sharp. They didn’t look behind them.

Ramon slid into the driver seat and twisted the. The engine caught and settled into a rough hum. Tyree came around the hood, jumping in the back, gun on his lap. E.J. jerked the passenger door closed with a gloved palm. Ramon glanced up because he could not help it.

Caine stood ten feet off the bumper, hands loose at his sides. His face gave nothing but calm. He didn’t wave. He didn’t nod. He just held Ramon’s eyes, then Tyree’s, then E.J.’s in quick sequence. The look said the things there was no time to speak.

Ramon set his jaw and hit the gas. The second car lurched and then gripped, slinging gravel into a little storm that stung Caine’s shins. The sedan shot out from under the overpass, taillights snatching light from the gloom before they melted into the streetlights.

The car they left sat there humming to itself, driver door still gapped. A man who had been nothing but a shape against a pillar shuffled forward, his clothes a winter of layers in weather that wasn’t asking for it. His beard held crumbs and the memory of yesterday. He leaned into the empty driver seat like he was easing into warm water and pulled the door soft until it clicked. His hands rested at ten and two, delicate, like the wheel might bruise. He looked at Caine for half a second. Caine kept his eyes on the street. The man turned the wheel with ceremony, found drive, and rolled out with the patience of a Sunday.

Caine slid his hands into his pockets. The baggie in his hoodie rustled. He walked along the edge of the lot toward the bus stop he knew sat just past the chain-link break. He didn’t hurry. The city moved around him in old rhythms. A siren bled again in the distance. A man shouted three blocks away and someone laughed him quiet.

The air hung heavy with the things that would not ever get cleaned up all the way.

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Post by Soapy » 22 Sep 2025, 16:05

Mardi Gras is in March. Has to check in by May 30th.

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Post by Caesar » 22 Sep 2025, 16:21

Soapy wrote:
22 Sep 2025, 16:05
Mardi Gras is in March. Has to check in by May 30th.

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This man had me tripping, looking for references to Mardi Gras. :pgdead: Each update since the state championship chapter jumps 4-6 weeks forward. TEEEEEECHNICALLY Mardi Gras 2026 is in February and his transfer was approved after it. The chapter above your comment occurs in late April. Also, they weren't going to switch over his probation before he graduated from high school. That would've made him temporarily a free man :smart:

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Post by redsox907 » 22 Sep 2025, 17:14

Roussel got put in his place, Tee Tito and them boys got murked. All in a days work :sensational:
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Post by Caesar » 22 Sep 2025, 17:41

redsox907 wrote:
22 Sep 2025, 17:14
Roussel got put in his place, Tee Tito and them boys got murked. All in a days work :sensational:
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Post by Caesar » 22 Sep 2025, 17:41

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The box fan in Saul’s room still clicked on the same blade as he woke. Morning sagged in the little house, heat already working under the paint. He swung his legs to the floor and felt grit under his heel. For a second he stayed there with his hands on his thighs, eyes half closed, listening to the pipes knock once in the wall and the distant rise of a siren that never came all the way to this block.

He pushed up and walked the short hall into the kitchen. The light over the sink was harsh and tired. He opened the fridge and let the cold air wash his chest before it broke apart and disappeared. Orange juice waited behind a jar of pickles and an old takeout box. He grabbed the carton and a clean glass from the dish rack.

He yawned as he poured. The juice found its level, pulsing at the end when the carton ran low. He put the glass on the counter harder than he meant to. The sound jumped against the cabinets. A bead sloshed over the rim and trailed down the side to his knuckle.

He turned toward the living room like he always did, expecting what he always expected. Caine on the couch, shoulders forward, elbows to knees, awake before everybody like the morning owed him an answer. Sometimes he would speak and sometimes he would not, but the way he sat told you a thing was coming.

The couch was empty. No blanket folded over the arm. No sneakers in a precise line along the wall. The boxes and totes nothing more than less dusty spaces. The dozens of notebooks and journals gone, too. The room looked bigger and wrong.

Saul stood with his hand still half lifted, as if he might point and make the missing turn solid. The fan in his room clicked again somewhere down the hall. He took a breath and felt it pull at his ribs. He let it out slow and the kitchen answered with the soft hum of the fridge.

He went back to the counter and wrapped his palm around the sweating glass. The ring it had made on the fake marble spread under his hand. He lifted and drank until the acid stung the back of his mouth. It didn’t change the shape of the room.

He set the glass down softer. He wiped the wet with the side of his wrist and left a shining streak that cooled in the air. He looked once more toward the couch because habit was heavier than sense. Still empty. The dent in the cushion held like a shallow print after rain.

He reached to flick the switch and thought better of it. The bright light made the place look exposed. He left it on and stepped into the hall. The tile was cool and a little sticky. He could smell last night’s dish soap and a ghost of bleach from the bathroom.

At his door he paused, hand on the frame. The fan pushed its thin breeze across his shins. He had the odd thought that if he turned around again the couch might have reset itself, the boxes back where they sat, the blanket piling the corner, a voice ready to drop a line he didn’t want to discuss. He didn’t turn.

He sat on the edge of his bed. The mattress dipped the same way it always did. He rubbed his eyes with both hands until stars crowded the dark behind them. He breathed in, not deep, and let the breath go in a plain sigh. Then he slid his feet up, pivoted, and lay back, staring at the ceiling that never changed.

~~~

The window unit coughed and pushed out air that wasn’t cool enough to mean anything. Heat clung to the walls and to the bodies in the room. The living room’s rug had a tired patch where small feet had run circles. Caine sat right there on the floor, leg bent, back against the couch, watching Camila work a tiny plastic comb through a doll’s stiff hair. She frowned with concentration the way she did when she tried to thread beads, mouth set, tongue peeking at the corner.

He reached and smoothed her curls with the flat of his palm. “Look at this, mami,” he said, soft. The curl sprang back under his hand and left coconut oil on his fingertips. He rubbed it into his own palm like it could stay.

Mireya stood by the doorway with her shoulders to the wall. Her arms crossed tight under her chest. A fly bumped the window, then the frame, then the window again, and she followed it once with her eyes and let it go. The late morning light from the window edged her cheekbone in a thin gold line. She didn’t speak. She was all held energy, braced and not moving.

Caine turned Camila on the rug so she faced him. He did it slowly, hands gentle at her waist, letting her set the pace.

“Mila,” he said, waiting until her eyes found his. “Mira.” He touched her chin with two fingers. “I love you more than life, you hear me? I want you to remember that.”

She nodded in the solemn toddler way, the kind that said she was stacking the words inside herself where they wouldn’t fall. She kept her hand on the doll but didn’t move it.

“We not going to see each other as much for a little while,” he said. “Daddy going to school. Like Mommy.”

Camila blinked and tipped her head. “To be a nurse?”

He laughed, surprised into it. The sound softened the room for half a beat. “Nah,” he said, shaking his head. “To play football.”

“Football,” she repeated, careful.

“In Georgia,” he said. “You can come visit. See somewhere new. Watch me play.”

The air felt heavier all at once, like the heat had dropped another blanket over them. Camila’s eyes searched his face for something she could hold onto. “Why you leaving?”

“So, I can make money,” he said, steady. “Make sure you got everything you need.” He glanced up to Mireya. The look wasn’t long. It was enough. Mireya didn’t shift. Her jaw worked once, then settled. Her arms stayed crossed, but her fingers loosened a fraction where they held.

Camila put the comb down. “I don’t want you to go.”

Caine’s chest clicked, small, like something catching behind bone. He scooped her hands into his and kissed the knuckles one by one.

“I’ma call every night,” he said, voice low, meant only for her. “We can FaceTime. You can ask Mommy to call me whenever you wanna talk, and I’ll answer. Every time.”

Her lip shook. The sound she made came up from the small center of her, a child’s refusal that didn’t have words deep enough for it yet. She lunged forward and climbed into his lap like she could pin him there with her weight, arms racked around his neck, heels thudding against his thigh.

“Don’t go,” she cried. “No vayas.” Wet hit the side of his jaw and slid.

He held her and rocked, not thinking about it, just doing the motion that had always settled her. The window unit rattled at the same spot every pass. A neighbor’s radio bled through the wall—brass and snare. The room smelled like bleach and old oil and baby hair.

Mireya pushed off the wall. The move was small, then it was all the space in the room. She came to them and crouched, arms opening like they had done a thousand nights by a crib, by a couch.

“Mila,” she whispered. “Ven.” She slid her hands between Camila’s arms and Caine’s shoulders and eased the girl back a little at a time. “Mi amor, mírame.”

Camila fought the first inch, fists trapping cloth at Caine’s shirt, then her grip softened. She turned and fell into Mireya’s chest, hiccuping sobs that came like little punches.

“We’re gonna go see him soon,” Mireya said into her hair. “Pronto. En su pueblo nuevo.” Her palm made slow circles on Camila’s back. The movement was steady enough to calm two people at once.

Caine stood. His knees cracked and he felt older than he was for a second and then he let that go.

He bent and pressed his mouth to the back of Camila’s head, to the warm part where hair met neck.

“Lo siento,” he whispered. “Te amo siempre.”

He smoothed the curls the way Mireya liked them smoothed so they wouldn’t tangle, careful with the direction, careful with everything.

Camila’s crying sharpened for a breath, then blunted into the shuddery kind that came after. Mireya shifted her higher on her hip. The child’s fist had hooked in the collar of Mireya’s T-shirt and pulled it tight. Mireya covered that small hand with her own, thumb rubbing each knuckle absent-mindedly, the way you soothe a sore spot you can’t rub out.

Caine and Mireya looked at each other. The window unit ticked. Sweat tracked behind his ear and along the hinge of his jaw. He stepped forward and kissed her. It wasn’t long. It wasn’t for show. “Lo siento,” he said again, close enough that the words touched her mouth.

She dropped her eyes, breathed, and lifted them again with her voice already level. “Call me when you get to Statesboro,” she said. “So, I know you made it. So, she can talk to you.”

“I will,” he said.

She nodded once. Camila’s breath hitched against her chest.

“Shh,” Mireya whispered, her mouth at the girl’s ear. “Está bien. We okay. We okay.”

Caine went to the door. He put his hand on the knob and paused because leaving deserved a pause even when there was nothing left to say. He looked back. Mireya had her cheek against Camila’s hair, rocking a little without realizing she was rocking. Camila’s shoulders lifted and fell in smaller waves.

He rolled his lips into his mouth and tasted salt and the plastic sweetness of the doll still on his hands. Then he turned the knob and stepped out onto the porch, into air that smelled like muddy water and a pot of something sweet from another apartment.

Outside, the Buick waited by the cracked curb, backseat and trunk stuffed with duffels and taped-up boxes. Sun pressed on the hood like a palm. He opened the door and slid in. The seat was hot through his basketball shorts. Keys turned. The engine caught and held.

~~~

It was another building again this time. No mansion, no rented ballroom vibes—just another address they’d swap for the next one. Stasia slipped a key into a back door and pushed through, Mireya right behind her into a narrow hallway that smelled like hairspray and heat. Bass shuddered through drywall. The paint shone where bodies brushed.

They cut into the main room and the sound hit hard. Men crowded the stage, arms up, money already in the air. Alejandra was on one of the stages and she was everywhere at once—she kicked into a handstand and shook her ass upside down, feet against the pole, the crowd roaring. She dropped and flipped into a split on the stage, kept twerking in that full split, and the place exploded. Bills skittered across the floor. Palms hammered the stage edge. Voices broke over the bass, rough and hungry.

“She always gets—” Stasia started, but the noise swallowed the rest. She tugged Mireya’s sleeve. “Come on.”

They hugged the wall. A hand reached from the bar and disappeared when Stasia cut a look that said don’t. Two security guards at a side door clocked them and shifted, letting them pass. The hallway tightened again, bass becoming a heartbeat under their shoes. Someone laughed from somewhere that wasn’t the main room. A lone bobby pin lay by the baseboard.

The dressing room felt thrown together and lived-in—bare bulbs around mirrors, a rolling rack under a cloudy plastic cover, a fan that moved air without changing its mind. Two dancers Mireya didn’t see the last time, one lifting a lash with tweezers, the other texting with nail-tap patience.

Jaslene sat kicked back with long legs stretched up on the counter, high-cropped shirt and leggings, phone in hand. She looked up and the smile started at her eyes and spread like she had been waiting for this exact moment.

“Jaslene wanted to get to know you,” Stasia told Mireya, then to Jaslene, “Don’t scare her off.”

She was already out the door as Mireya turned, the bass closing over her name.

Jaslene dragged a second chair over with her foot and tapped it. “Sit.”

Mireya sat. The mirror threw back the two of them and the room’s soft chaos—bulbs, wigs, a scatter of glitter dust, someone’s half-closed makeup bag.

“Tell me the basics,” Jaslene said, phone down, attention steady.

“Just graduated,” Mireya said. “I have a kid. That’s pretty much it. I work, going to college in the fall.”

Jaslene’s chin dipped, reading. “You didn’t say anything about a man.”

Mireya kept her eyes on the mirror. No answer.

Jaslene didn’t press.

“I came here after the hurricane,” she said. “Cousins took me in. I bounced couch to couch. Hustled. My little sister’s still back home. I send money.” She shifted into Spanish like it fit her better. “Soy básicamente una madre también. ¿Me sigues?”

Mireya nodded once.

The track outside changed and the room threw a cheer that rattled the bulbs.

Alejandra breezed in with a silk robe hanging loose, knot crooked like she tied it in a hurry. Nothing underneath but her. She spotted Mireya, smiled, and winked as she dropped a fat bag onto a bench. The zipper flashed metal teeth. She kicked off her heels, two soft thumps, and rubbed the pads of her feet with both thumbs, a wince turning to relief.

“Ven,” Jaslene said, already standing. “Let’s get air.”

They cut back to the floor’s far corner where a small bar hid in shadow. The bartender clocked them and lifted his chin. Jaslene leaned across the wood, reached behind him, and pulled a bottle of tequila. He shook his head like it wasn’t the first time.

“Gracias, papi,” she said, not waiting for permission. She flicked her eyes and Mireya followed through a service door into night.

Outside, heat stuck to the skin. The sounds of the room thudded through the wall while crickets stitched a second rhythm at the edges. A row of cars sat tucked deep in the lot where the light fell off. Two security guards stood near the door, talking low into radios that hissed back.

Jaslene picked a silver Honda Accord and popped up onto the hood. The metal ticked once under her and went quiet. She patted the space next to her. “Come on.”

Mireya touched the fender. “I don’t want to mess it up.”

Jaslene laughed and didn’t bother to lower her voice. “Your ass isn’t that big. It’s nice—very nice. I’m jealous of you, actually—but it’s not denting cars.”

Mireya eased up beside her. The hood kept the night’s warmth. The bass under the wall and the insects in the dark made a strange duet that felt like the real city more than anything inside.

Jaslene twisted the cap and drank, throat working once, twice, then wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. She passed the bottle over. “Salud.”

“I don’t really drink,” Mireya said.

“Don’t drink, or don’t ‘really’ drink?” Jaslene tilted her head, amused. “Hardly the worst sin out here to drink a little.”

Mireya took the bottle. The glass was cool where it had leaned against others. She took a small swallow, heat running a clean line down her chest.

“I like you already,” Jaslene said, as if confirming something she’d known.

Mireya looked toward the hedge that marked the end of the lot. “I’m not—”

“You know where I learned to hustle? Mi mama.” She glanced out into the dark like there was shoreline past the last car. “When I was a kid in Puerto Rico—Christmas time—my mother sold pasteles near the ferry. Some guy tried to get smart with her. I had a hot pot in my hand.” A quick, sharp smile. “He didn’t try it again. That taught me a lot though.”

The line landed and lived there, simple and hard. The guard closest to the door coughed. A car rolled by on the street beyond the wall, bass low, headlight streaking past the lot’s edge and gone. The tequila bottle sat between them reflecting a thin stripe from the service light.

Mireya touched the glass with her fingertips without lifting it. The small warmth in her chest held even when the night’s damp tried to steal it. She thought of the dressing room, the bag on the bench, the way Alejandra’s thumbs had worked at sore feet, the soft paper sound money made when no one was counting it yet.

Jaslene nudged her shoulder with hers. “You good?”

Mireya nodded.

They sat like that on warm metal while the venue’s bass and the night’s insects traded beats, two women parked in the seam where light fell away, the story of what came next not pressed and not promised, only held between them and the dark.

~~~

The interstate ran flat and mean beneath the tires, a gray ribbon heat-shimmered and broken by trucks that bullied the left lane. Caine kept his elbow on the window ledge and the volume up. Bass trembled the door panel and the side mirror, a steady, low thump that matched the pulse sitting in his throat. Heat pressed through the windshield even with the AC turned high and the sun long set. Bugs hit the glass and smeared into quick little stars before the wipers cleared them away.

Alabama pine blurred by, tall and tight. The lines in the road ticked under him like the sound of a zipper pulled fast. He passed a family van loaded down with beach stuff, a rusted pickup with a dog staring into the wind, a charter bus coughing black. He didn’t slow. The needle lived just past where it should. He kept it there.

His thoughts slid back to a living room floor and a small doll laid on her back. Camila’s soft hair in his palm. Mireya by the wall, arms folded like she needed them there to hold something inside. The way Camila nodded when she didn’t understand and wanted to pretend she did. The way her face had folded when she understood anyway. He tasted that moment now, a metal edge at the back of his mouth. For the first time, the question reached him all the way. Was he doing the right thing? Was he sure this was the path?

He rolled his shoulder once and let the music swallow the thought. The road did not care about anybody’s doubts. It only asked for gas and attention.

His phone lit in the cup holder tray with the map up. Three hours, thirty-two minutes to Statesboro. The little blue triangle sat in the middle of nothing, a speck moving toward a state line. He lifted the phone, checked the route, checked the number again. The screen shifted and a notification climbed over the map.

Janae.

He felt it more than he read it. The name worked its way through the music. The car pulled a little right in the lane and he corrected without thinking. He opened the message thread with his thumb, saw the new text. He hit delete. Then he hit the little button at the top and sent her number where he needed it to go. Blocked.

He tossed the phone back to the passenger seat and let it buzz against the fabric for a second as the map reasserted itself and the sound died. The can in the console was already warm. He lifted it and took a long sip anyway, energy drink biting the back of his tongue, sweet and chemical and alive. He wiped his mouth with the side of his wrist and put the can back.

The sky opened up past a stand of billboard frames and there it was, blue and white, simple and sure: Welcome to Georgia. The sign flashed by in a blink. He kept his hands easy on the wheel. He checked the mirrors. A trooper sat in the median angled toward the flow and he eased off the gas a hair, enough to signal respect, not fear. The needle dropped, then held.

Caine settled back, lifted his chin, and rode the lane markers forward. Alabama fell away in the rearview. Georgia welcomed him like it had been waiting.
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Post by Caesar » 22 Sep 2025, 18:18

And that concludes Season 2: Tout Sa Ou Pote Gen Pwa

Next up - Season 3: God Don't Walk These Roads No More

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Post by Soapy » 22 Sep 2025, 19:16

daddy about to play football (CTE), momma about to strip. those letters gonna be working triple overtime.

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Post by redsox907 » 22 Sep 2025, 19:27

man. Reading about him saying goodbye to Mila hit home :shook:

We all knew Mireya going to end up shaking her ass too, dunno why you stretching it out so long for

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Post by Soapy » 23 Sep 2025, 08:44

redsox907 wrote:
22 Sep 2025, 19:27
dunno why you stretching it out so long for
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